I Give You a Pen to Write

Not bad, not bad. But I personally think the book is called "You Go, You Go!" " Or "I can do it, of course I'll do it!" "Something like that might be better. Then maybe you can add a sentence at the beginning: Notebook: You can do it! Tang Lin cried with a face: "I can do it, of course I will go..." In novels, the important thing is emotion, and this should highlight the emotion more...

The update is very slow. If it is still like this when it is released, I'm afraid I will forget about it while I keep it.

If he were a eunuch, he would castrate the fat cat

To be honest, the so-called "you do it, you do it, I give you the pen to write!" This should have been the rhythm of a refreshing article, but it was abruptly written by the author into an abusive article. Because it's obviously said so, but the protagonist insists on eliminating most of what he writes. This is simply a slap in the face of the sentence "you can do it, you can write it!" If you let others write it, do you still dare to change other people's things and then torment others? This is simply sick. What is this if it's not an abuse of the master? If it wasn't boring, I guess I wouldn't want to read this book after a few chapters. Because the protagonist is not strong enough at all, he doesn't have the heart to play all this as a game, he doesn't know how to make full use of the ability to load files, and the abuse of the main character is so severe, who has the heart to continue watching?

When I saw this name, I unconsciously clicked in to post it. To be honest, is this something the author has always wanted to say but couldn't say.

Well, I talk a lot, so let's just keep it short and long, please be patient. By the way, since the Tang Lin lotion bandits kidnapped Jiang Wenwu and held a denouncement meeting and burned him to death, this group of trainers has never seen Jiang Fuyin; So here comes the question: During the fierce battle at Longjiao Mountain in the Tang Dynasty, Xu Ming led troops to suppress the bandits. After the end, the guards of the Qin family were there but Fu Yin was not seen. When he went to the Sihai Escort Bureau to ask for clues, he drunkenly said, "Go and collect the corpse of the old thief." Is there no further story at this point? Normal people would wonder where Jiang Wenwu went, and they already knew that officials and bandits were colluding, but Fu Yin was actually captured by water bandits, so Xu Ming should have a question mark in his heart. That's all I have. I hope it will be answered. If there is anything wrong, please point it out. Thanks. 🙏

The Lord God came here leisurely, look at it first

Isn't it written for us readers? What book title

Stop being a eunuch 😭, okay? It's really nice and beautiful 😢

Brief analysis First of all, the creativity is good Then, the writing is not good The advantage is the author's imagination. The protagonist knows the development of the plot because he wrote the plot, which makes people look forward to how it will develop and interpret in the future There are many disadvantages, such as this imagination. The outline of several thousand words has been condensed into a few sentences, and there are many protagonists who have not been written at all. The protagonist's biggest golden finger to understand the plot is gone I have said that I will do it, but after I have written it, what does it mean if you delete it and make major changes to it? There was a White Bone Scripture hidden at home, but I couldn't find it. Immortal saves dad, no. The enemy is not right either. The plot of the emotional protagonist is that in a certain month of a certain year, the father is injured, the Fang family breaks off the engagement, and then the Immortal passes by, rescues the father, recruits a disciple, upgrades to fight monsters, marries a rich and handsome man, and goes crazy? The several thousand-word outline written by the protagonist can actually be published for everyone to read the plot, and then compare the changes caused by the protagonist's entry Writing this, I found that it is a bit like the Spirit Controller, who has traveled into his own work. However, the story of the Spirit Controller is handled much better than yours. People write branch lines within the main line, and the final collision causes the world line to change. You are writing the main plot in the outline, just look at the outline, don't take it seriously The death of the protagonist in the first chapter seems to be too big to write this novel, so it must be because you are dissatisfied with many novels, right? Really, you can send out the several thousand-word outline written by the protagonist Because in the first chapter, it seems that what I imagined is that the novel written by the protagonist is illogical and a demented person cannot survive at all! The protagonist enters the novel just to complete the logic of the story he wrote. It's a pity that there is no outline written by the protagonist to refer to. Is my idea correct? In general, the first chapter is too hasty and I traveled through time without explaining it clearly

Stay tuned, I feel like this book will be a hit

The writing is good and the topic is good. What a pity.

At that time, it was said to be raised, but once it was raised, it could not be found 😭

Can it be updated properly? Don't you want perfect attendance? Writing this little bit every day is not enough to fill my teeth. It's time for us to keep it if we're still dawdling. If we keep it for a few days, we can use the free coins to watch it.

Brother, keep writing. Why isn't this book a big hit?

This book seems to have a lot of bad reviews. Many people write bad reviews just to punish the protagonist without even a reason. Don't you feel guilty? By the way, I want to give a negative review. There is a chapter with irregular punctuation. I have carefully compiled the reason for this.

I feel like the author doesn't have enough imagination. It is obviously set by you. As long as you are reborn again, all points will be added again. So, this will inevitably create a loophole. We can imagine that the protagonist adds all the points to comprehension in an instant, and then goes to practice the moves and adds all the points. After that, he doesn't have to do anything, he doesn't have to pass points, he just practices hard in that state until the plot collapses and he starts over again. In this way, even if the protagonist returns to the next level, he has practiced hard at a higher level of skill and understanding, and his understanding of the moves is far from what he originally understood. So, even if he doesn't add any points, he probably still has quite a lot of proficiency. What will be the effect if this is done several times? Even more, in order to practice his martial arts, he can do more suicide reversal methods. This should be quite meaningful in the early stage. Once he has mastered the basics of basic swordsmanship, basic hidden weapons, basic boxing, basic footwork, etc., As well as the proficiency of internal skills training, he will have to at least achieve a small level of proficiency, and he will not be able to improve it in a short period of time. Now that he has an absolutely strong foundation, he can then practice internal strength and then add all his bones. Isn't this the best route?