The Crouching Dragon Sword Immortal of the Doomsday

A seven-year-old girl just breaks into the restricted area you mentioned. You haven't given any punishment at all. One hundred percent she will go in in the future. This is the inertia of a little girl

The collection of 5000/6000 is so decisive. Can you guarantee a few thousand collections for the next book? It is very difficult for a newcomer with a new book to break out of the vast sea of ​​books, let alone two books. I advise you to cherish it.

I don't know how the author plans to deal with the relationship with the evolvers. According to the protagonist's strength improvement speed, if there is someone who is on par with the protagonist or even stronger than the protagonist, it is really poisonous. The most unbearable thing is that the protagonist is always said to be strong and has great opportunities, but he encounters 55 or even can't beat him. I think the protagonist's opponent should be a monster in the game or in reality. The ability user just cooperates with the protagonist to show off or shout 666. Or the author has a better idea. Can you reveal it?

The eunuchs who were first recommended were among the 6th batch.

Are you worthy of the starting coins they invested in you?

I feel it's too short, so I don't like it. So far so good

You are just playing a game. Don't confuse it by confusing the words written in the game with the words in the time-travel game. You might as well change it to time-travel.

So far, the writing is very good, a piece of fairy grass.

The quality is getting worse and worse, and the more you go to the back, the more idiotic it becomes. It is recommended not to read it with your brain.

Let me go, I'm still fattening up, and you're the eunuch here!

What the hell am I doing to keep this book alive?

Didn't Zhang Wuji write it after he ascended to the top of the light? There is also an after-ascension in "Mortal Biography". It would be nice to slowly come up with the plot.

So treacherous...... What a waste of so many... Recommendation votes... Ah? ? ? ?

The idea is good. The issue of time is a bit stiff, but it doesn't matter. It should be good to grasp the rhythm well.

For the first time, the Heavenly Eye followed the wind and the ears followed the wind. These three chose the Heavenly Eye. In the early days of the apocalypse, when all means to save life were needed, instead of walking on the wind, which could increase movement speed, I chose a magical power that had no use other than being able to see other people's information. When you see other people's information and encounter someone you can't beat, can you beat it? Can you escape? The second time, you can use the technique of walking on the wind to travel outside your body and incarnate. Not much to say about the skill of walking on the earth, but a proper life-saving magic skill. Walking on the wind can travel thousands of miles in a day. If you choose to walk on the wind for the first time, how much can the superposition of the two increase your movement speed? External incarnation, this kind of thing is only useful in the later stage. If you don't want to increase the chance of saving your life in the early stage, do you still have the time to think about things in the later stage? And if two external avatars are in the late stage of foundation building, can they fight against one in the early stage of consecration? What level of enemies can a person with an external avatar reach his peak fight against? Mid-term consecration? What about your original deity at the initial stage of consecration? Do you want to fight with those who are in the later stages of Kaiguang or those who are at the peak? It won't make him any weaker, right? Moreover, summoning an avatar requires 80% of your infuriating energy. When you fight with someone, you use 80% of your infuriating energy at once and you still don't feel useless? What else can you do?

Shushu with pig's feet! ! Has the author forgotten? Have you ever thought about going back to rescue them after so many days of doom?

Doesn't the protagonist want to... Establish... A points exchange mechanism...? ? ? You can learn... Formation and weapon refining skills... To create a... Magic weapon that can be redeemed with points? ? ? ? ? ?

I haven't seen such an interesting new doomsday book in a long time.

Playing on a computer is an obvious weakness. If the protagonist were to operate the game in his mind, it would be like an online game novel. In this way, others would see the protagonist as practicing with his eyes closed, but he is actually playing the game. . . Inexplicably emotional😏😏😏

Author, I think since your book is about the end of the world, you should be more realistic in terms of length and emphasis. You have written too much about the game recently and it is almost unreadable. You have written too many words in the game, and you have not finished several chapters. You just need to let us know what moves you have learned and what equipment you have obtained.

Why is no one commenting? I feel pretty good.