Eternal Great Call

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Name: XXX (try not to be too middle-aged) Gender: Personality: Experience: Relationship with protagonist Fang: Hope for the plot

This introduction and plot seem to take me back ten years ago.

The plot is a bit unreasonable. In Chapter 49, why did the two brothers come to kill him in person? This is seriously unreasonable. The reason is that after the two of them came out, they faced the same situation as the third brother and was killed. That's why pigs did this. The relationship is unreasonable. Putting aside what was said before, it is simply impossible for two people to cooperate together. To give you an easy-to-understand example, it is just like the succession of emperors in ancient times. Even if the prince assigned has the right to inherit, he cannot manage power around the emperor. If he does, the emperor will be the first to kill him. Also, it is impossible for the boss and the second child to cooperate to deal with a person who has not come back. In their eyes, they are each other's opponents. He will definitely arrange affairs around the Duke. Anyone who leaves at this time is equivalent to giving up the right to inherit. The ministers who help fight for the throne are not willing to see their master take risks. PS (The duke is already equivalent to the king of a principality. There is no character development. For example, the third son is both good and evil. It is basically not obvious. It all depends on the author's mouth. There is a plot where the third son's subordinates ask him why he doesn't win over or be friends with the protagonist? The third son explains a lot, which is not in line with the character. In a simple sentence, we are already friends, and then it is better to give a smile that is incomprehensible. It is in line with the character to leave it to the subordinates to figure out. If you like books about summons, you can't help but say a few words. The author needs to improve.

Many books recently are too fast-paced and purely for entertainment. Not many can write with such connotation.

Looking at it now, this article feels clean and not greasy!

A long text can surprise readers with something unexpected within a few chapters, which will make the book more interesting.

Hello, I really appreciate your work. It is very well written. I hope I can communicate with you.

It's pretty good. Why are there so few people? The author doesn't do enough publicity?

The protagonist can mass-produce people with dual cultivation of magic and martial arts. All he needs to do is practice fighting spirit and then eat heartbroken grass.

The military strength is too exaggerated. In a novel with a Western fantasy background, a few hundred troops in a small town is exaggerated. It can easily be tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands. The entire empire cannot provide it.

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It's been a long time since I've had a summoning-themed novel! Come on in and take a look. I can't say it's bad, it's just that I don't like leaving!

The plot of Sixty-seven Singles is too bloody

Why are you still dividing your troops? Are you stupid? Just make a reckless move. The first move will win!

Is this Western fantasy or fantasy? Looking at the Ye family and the Li family, an Ultra suddenly appeared. Isn't it awkward for you, the author, to write? It's uncomfortable to look at

In the early stage, the author asked the protagonist to forcibly reduce his intelligence, which was really embarrassing to watch.