I Was Shocked by You

I read the book and saw that the main character's grandson traveled through time and it felt really bad. Later, he also traveled through time. Alas, he walked away.

It is said that every time I use up the points exactly to draw what I want. Normal people can guess that this lottery mechanism is manipulated behind the scenes. It feels like the protagonist has no feeling.

Being poisoned, I played with others even though my computer had such important things, even though I knew it was leading to the plot behind it.

I know that when I post this post, people will definitely criticize me, saying that I am some kind of cleaning staff. Haha, I just want to ask, it is not easy for the author to write a book, and there is no charge yet. If you don't want to read it, you don't have to read it. If you have any questions, you can ask it. As for being so angry? What happened to Xiao Bailiu? As long as you can read it, the writing style and writing techniques can be slowly honed. After all, this is the author's first book. It is already good to have a scientific article of this type. What are you forcing? Not everyone is a great writer, so can't they be more tolerant? ? ? ?

It looked pretty good from the beginning, but I didn't expect to be caught off guard by a time travel. This is the biggest failure, and the most poisonous thing is that there are more to come! He was poisoned... If he can't be offended, he will never be punished again! ! !

How many people gave up on this book through the wormhole?

What a good book, but it was ruined by a grandson who traveled through time

After reading Chapter 70, I was really as shocked as the title of the book. . . How could a good book be ruined by writing?

From where the hacker attacked and defended, what was stolen should be the intelligent core, and then the grandson who traveled through time should tell him that your intelligent core was modified by the hacker into an evil intelligence that wants to destroy mankind or the country... If you have wool to use, you might as well develop black technology properly. At present, there is a high probability that it will collapse... After the author's chapter sixty-nine, this book should be...

You don't need to read it from Chapter 72 onwards, it's starting to get toxic.

It's a good book, but when I read it by my grandson, it poisoned me so much that I abandoned it.

I always feel that those who write novels nowadays are all idiots, who regard otakus as mentally retarded. The protagonist is mentally retarded and not an otaku. The identification is complete! Quit and leave

What should I say about this? It looked pretty good in the early stages. But the grandson behind him traveled through time. Later, another daughter traveled through time, and I flipped through the catalog. It felt like technology had turned into fantasy. I feel that writing super science and technology novels should be closer to our current lives. Just like the future written in the author's book is unpredictable, every step he takes can change the future. I know that my kind of novel is not that easy to write. Search this or that. Very troublesome. But when writing about science and technology, don't write about fantasy

Well, I read the comments and I won't criticize the author anymore, so I'll just make a suggestion I started to get addicted in Chapter 73 and I couldn't stand it anymore. I was too strong to persuade the author to write it down according to the direction of the plot. There should still be a lot of people who read it and have the potential to become popular The first 70 or so chapters were okay, but the time in Chapter 73 collapsed as soon as the time travel came and it was not good to watch.

After seeing Chapter 73, I gave up the trap decisively, it was extremely poisonous! Someone actually traveled to the protagonist's era

It's a mess, the first part is okay, but later the grandson appears and comes through time travel, haha, I've given up on the book and bye bye, I only think about what I wrote and not what readers would like to read.

I just finished reading the first 150 chapters, and I only have one feeling: the protagonist makes a staff.

The front was fine, it was a bit interesting, but the back actually made it through time and again. It simply went from being pretty good to being extremely poisonous. I'm going, bye

If someone trolls, it means someone is watching, just like a celebrity in reality becomes more popular the more people troll, and trolling is another kind of encouragement, which means I feel poisonous after watching it, like the author complaining. I hope the middle and later stages of this book will become more and more exciting. Also, updates are too slow! 😆😆😆😆

Chapter 72: The jump is too big, I can't react, so I give up.

It was okay up front, but once I get to time travel, I don't want to watch it, it's toxic

Chapter 76 of whoring for nothing, you have to leave something behind. Although the early start was a little sluggish, it was still interesting. After the attack on the exhibition, there was a complete break, watering, and a trip to the military camp for another round of water. Nothing was done. I was lectured. After coming out, the story started again. To sum up, the protagonist got a golden finger and learned a chapter to start making Gundam. After he was done well, he was taken seriously. Just these few sentences describe the plot, and the author hasn't finished Chapter 76 yet. This is all finished with just over 1 million words. In the end it was definitely a eunuch.

Chapter 73: Retreating from the Pit, what kind of barren thing is written?

It feels like his fourth uncle is here to cause harm to people. He is full of capitalist ideas. Is it so easy to build a wind tunnel? If it is that easy, why would other R&D institutions go to the country to borrow wind tunnels? It feels like the word "water" is in the water, and the quality is not good.

Although there is a little water in front, I can barely see it. When it comes to Chapter 71, it's straight to praise.

The first part was very funny and very good, but then I thought that if it was so good, I had never seen it before. After seeing No. 73, I seemed to know that this kind of science fiction about time and space will not have a good end. I just clicked on the table of contents and scrolled to the bottom. Well, appendicitis, what a pity for a good book.

Humanoid robots are the least practical of all robots. If you really want a humanoid one, it is recommended to get four legs and add a human body in the middle...

How do you like this book? Thank you.

So poisonous, slipped away

The title of the book is just like the content. I was shocked by the author's writing style.