Quick Travel Girl's Revenge Guide

So far, I have only read the first short story of the novel. After reading it, I was so full of emotions that I wanted to vomit. Author, please understand the market of online articles before writing. Personally, I feel that the protagonist of online articles generally has one of three things, a good-looking skin, an interesting soul or an extraordinary talent, and these advantages should be used in the early stage to capture From the reader's perspective, the first story feels that the protagonist is very eye-catching, silly and sweet, and he is just stupid. He obviously has a quick learning plug-in but doesn't use it much. His mind is unstable. The ending of the story is obviously bright, but the process is unpleasant to watch. He is not affectionate enough, and he is cowardly and not cute. The lucky protagonist also needs to be cute. The first chapter is still a bad point. Not many people like the heroine who crawls into bed for some purpose. It won't have any impact. It's best to change it. Of course, it's up to you.

After watching it, I had a bit of a myocardial infarction. I saw that the powerful heroine was actually a stupid and sweet fool. She couldn't do anything but always pretended to be powerful. She was always immersed in the world of love and love. She was indecisive and disconnected from the male protagonist. Although the ending was okay, the content was really wrong and a bit disgusting.

Why write about a silly heroine, when you don't know that the protagonist is the embodiment of the reader? How can you read the protagonist who is so stupid🥵

Do you have any experience in commenting? I'll give it a try too😄

After reading a few chapters, it seems to be a pretty average fast-travel novel, but the way the heroine dies is somewhat innovative. Already bookmarked and waiting to see the follow-up, by the way, do you want to torture the scum by yourself or hold the thigh to torture the scum? No male protagonist or NPC?

The sweet wife running with the ball and so on in the back are all gibberish. It's a waste of money, and it's so expensive. I'm so bored, I gave up.

After seeing the introduction, I didn't want to read it. The heroine's character is too cowardly, and the most important thing is that there is no 1v1. I gave up on the emotional mysophobia.

I couldn't help but complain. Originally, the author's subject matter was good because it was against routines. He achieved his own goals on the basis of using plot routines. What could the heroine be doing? If you wear it in the past and it looks silly, then is it really silly? Obviously you are going to do the task, but I have no scheming at all, and I have never used any skills. I know the plot clearly, but it has not changed at all. Especially some plots have been gone for several years, which is enough. Some chapters seem to have been written a lot, but in fact they are all in a streamlined nature, and the key things are almost not mentioned. No scheming, no wink. Just talk about the gay one. You know clearly that the woman will use the heroine to abort the child. Why don't you see her? She is a pregnant woman, how can she still fly over the walls? Can she hold you back if you really start running? But what happened was that he was held back by others. You know this woman is scheming, so you should try your best to attack her, but what will be the result? Is it enough to just say that people are doing things and God is watching? Jing's nonsense is of no use at all. In every story, the heroine is trying to make a fool of herself, and finally makes a sacrifice to save her. In my impression, only a few of the ones I watched (seems there are not many) have a very long plot. It seems that the heroine is wearing a maid's spring equinox. It has been soy sauce throughout the whole process. It has been several years. In the end, the relationship between the heroine and the hero in the plot is still based on the original plot. So it is really useless for you to write so many words. It feels like the number of words is too low. This is true for one story, and it is still true for two or three stories. It wasn't until the plot came to a point where the maid got married that she used a little bit of her charm to seduce the emperor. But at this point, it was still luck, and she died in one move. . . . In other words, as far as this plot is concerned, nothing was done at the beginning, but luck hooked the emperor later, and he died in the end. . . In the middle, many chapters flowed. When I say this, I feel that I hate that iron cannot become steel. Such a good subject, but it's just a waste of time and effort. (I'm talking about the arranged heroine.) Really, the author, you need to be more attentive, especially in terms of scheming and winking. After so many chapters, the heroine is still like this. If it weren't for good luck, she would have been wiped out by the system. . . You went against the routine, but in the end, you gave the heroine a heroine routine. Even though as a reader you know that the heroine is a heroine, your setting goes against the grain, right? It is also because it is anti-routine that it attracts people who want to watch anti-routine. But you are still following the routine. . . This will lose a large part of the people who are attracted by the subject matter. But there is no denying that the author was persistent enough to write so many chapters. . . To be honest, this is not an accusation. After all, the author has paid for it. I just want to tell the author where the shortcomings are and hope it can be better. Well!

Sorry, I originally read every story and didn't have time. However, I really can't stand this genius little poisonous concubine😂😂😂

It's a very interesting book, I hope the author won't give up.

To be honest, it feels pretty good from the front, but why is it all garbled at the back? From the moment the stand-in for the beloved wife runs with the ball, it becomes chaotic in the later stages, which is really upsetting to watch.

The heroine makes me feel so frustrated, woo woo

This heroine... Who is good, she is so soft-hearted, she even helps the original heroine, fuck...

The material of the novel is good, but the setting is a bit problematic.

The heroine has low IQ and EQ, yet she helps others take revenge

I read the comments. There are only a few comments for a two-million-word novel. The Street Fighter 😆 only had five comments in 2019🔨🔨🔨