Guide to Happiness in the Apocalypse

Without further ado, let's get straight to it. ①Book title: "The Guide to Happiness in the End of the World". It is closely related to the content and quite satisfactory. ②Introduction: At first glance, this book is confusing, and this introduction will probably dissuade most readers. I suggest that if you don't have enough writing and summary skills, don't make this introduction that looks awesome. In fact, I don't know what you are talking about after reading it. If you don't know, just be straightforward, understand? ③Plot: It's so exciting at the beginning that I really can't accept it. It's the relationship between Zhan Yuan and Fang Anran that makes me feel... This is probably a domineering CEO article disguised as an apocalyptic crisis... Emmm, I wonder if you have read too many romance novels... In fact, the description of the scene at the beginning is not bad, better than the verbal novel, but it cannot be said to be brilliant. The "character" of the Great White Wolf is quite a bonus. ④Background setting: After reading the story, I probably understand the background of your story. I really think that since you chose this apocalyptic crisis background, is it okay to not have a little romance (overbearing president)? Do you know Lin Lan and Jiang Yang in the Shanghai Fortress? Personally, I don't like this scene. But yours is a female channel, and judging from the title of the book, the romance part is indispensable. However, the emotional scenes have to be taken slowly and arranged unconsciously. How embarrassing you are. Most of the current book reviews point out what I personally think are the problems. Not to mention the advantages and the like.

I have read the first three chapters. The writing is good and fluent, the story settings are edible, and the overall impression is good. I have collected it. Also, the first sentence of the introduction is a bit confusing and almost put me off. Fortunately, the content of the article is quite good. Also, there are a bit too many character names in the first three chapters. If I hadn't remembered that the introduction mentioned the male and female protagonists, I might have forgotten the female protagonist's surname: Fang... Anyway, it's good, keep up the good work!

Overall, the writing is good and the heroine's IQ is online. Secondly, in the face of the bad romance in female videos, this book changes the routine of the domineering president falling in love with me and adopts a technological background. But in the end, I still want to suggest that the author should not write such plots in the future where the heroine goes to the wrong place or the hero is drugged. Anyway, as a girl, I don't think any girl will fall in love with a man who uses violence to rub all his dignity on the ground! Hmph╯^╰!

The novel is fake, but the world in the book is real. Most authors and readers who write novels think that novels are fiction and we are in the 21st century, so they should be written more modernly. The phrase "mom and dad" in ancient Chinese literature immediately makes people feel like they are in trouble. In modern novels, while others earn hundreds of thousands a year after writing just a few chapters, the protagonist easily earns millions a day. I wrote for the sake of good writing, but in the end, they all fell into disrepute. Those who write medical articles have always been about treating diseases. There is no love subplot or friend subplot. They all rely on a so-called system. Just compare it with those Internet articles adapted into TV series and you will understand! There have to be low tides before there are high tides, and there must be no shortage of branch lines and main lines. Just like eating meat, you will always get tired of eating meat every day. In fact, most authors know how to write without being novices, but there are so many novices in the market. Therefore, Xiaobaiwen is popular, summed up in one word "eh"

I originally thought that the heroine was an independent person, but she turned out to be a pitiful little girl who knows nothing but only fights for men and is jealous. Forget it, I won't pursue her anymore.

That's the starting point. The editorial department is full of bastards. They don't review or promote new books at all. It's very difficult for newcomers to get ahead. The odds of getting ahead are equal to a comet hitting the earth.

It was delayed for a long time because a lot of things happened in the middle. I have read some of the previous chapters in the past two days and have not finished them all, but I probably know that I should give some suggestions. 1: Title and introduction of the book The title and introduction of the book are fine. Many people will read it in the apocalypse. This guide to happiness does not fit well with the classification of the book. If it were changed to a modern romance, it should attract more people to watch it. Two: Storyline The heroine is a professional woman, relatively capable, and has a cooperative relationship with the research center because of her work. Because the male protagonist escaped from the experiment and was under the influence of drugs, he did harm to the female protagonist. As a result, the heroine was taken back to the research center for observation. Everyone who encountered the meteorite attack research center evacuated, and the heroine was not taken away in time. The male protagonist takes his assistant to the research center to find out why he is being studied. When he meets the female protagonist, he desperately protects her with guilt. Two people were trapped under the laboratory, and it was the big white wolf who rescued them. And they found that the big white wolf doubled in size in three or four days. There is also a chimpanzee who always snatches clothes from the heroine. There's something weird about this research center. The male and female protagonists then saw that the mice had also mutated greatly. Faced with these problems, the story slowly unfolded. Three:Character setting The heroine: A professional woman, she looks very capable, but she doesn't call the police when she is bullied? This is a shortcoming that will tarnish the image of the heroine. Even if she calls the police and it becomes an unsolved case, it will not affect the progress of the story. Male protagonist: It's hard to explain in one sentence. Because he was injected with drugs as an experimental subject, he hurt the heroine out of help. After seeing the heroine again, he tried his best to protect her. But in the past, I felt that the presence of the male protagonist was relatively low, because I remembered the female protagonist, the chimpanzee, and the great white wolf, but I could not remember the male protagonist. The description of him isn't quite right. For example, the white wolf is well portrayed, fresh and vivid, and its movements, eyes and howling are all handled very well. The male protagonist is just casual. This is how I feel as a reader. Suggestions: 1. There must be a chapter name. I saw that many chapters do not have chapter names, only a few have them. This is a big problem, because some readers will judge the content of your chapters based on the chapter names. If you only have a serial number but no name, it is like a person only having a surname. For example, most of the students in a class only have surnames and no names. Some of them have names. How can the teacher ask questions and call roll? This may also be one of the reasons why readers do not click on the text. It is recommended to fill in the chapter name instead of naming it. Instead, summarize the content of a chapter and give it a chapter name, or use an interesting sentence in the article. 2. The beginning of the previous chapter progresses too fast. The author may not feel it, because you know your own ideas, but readers can only understand the development of the story from the words you give. So the beginning is a dialogue, the background is unclear and many connecting details have not been handled well. Therefore, it is recommended that you go back to the beginning and read it twice or more, and then change whatever you feel is awkward. At least explain the background clearly. Overall review: The story setting is quite interesting, but the characterization needs to be strengthened. As a newcomer, the literary talent is good, and the story is relatively smooth. You must stick to it, and you will always get ahead. Come on!

Are all female videos like this? I wrote more than 300 chapters but they still don't appear on the shelves?

Dear author, come on, I will vote for you every day if I have time If you like writing novels, please don't give up. If you only write novels out of pure interest, I just hope you can try not to be a eunuch and not to end the novel.

If you just start with the story without explaining the background, it's really easy for people to get confused.

It's disgusting that Wen Qiang is like this again. Don't say anything about guilt. If an apology is useful, why should the police do it?

I don't know what to say, but the author is very diligent in updating it frequently. But I wonder if the author has noticed something? That is, the content cannot attract people. To put it bluntly, it's not exciting enough! The most important thing about a novel is the dozen or so chapters from the year before. As long as it is exciting enough, even if you are a little weak in the middle and the back, people will pay attention to it. The wonderful plot is the most important, everything else is just a cloud. Even if the protagonist gains the power to dominate the world, it is not as meaningful as the protagonist finally obtaining a rusty dagger due to various hardships. Set an outline according to the subject matter, think about the branch lines under the outline, write a few foreshadowings that can be discovered quickly, and a few super foreshadowings that can be understood by readers later. If there was a primary school student's diary and a book with twists and turns and bizarre stories. Which one will you choose to watch? There are so many books in Qidian, so they must have exciting plots. If you can't think of it yourself, you might as well look at what others have written and then learn from it yourself. I recommend two books to the author, Mysterious Resurrection and I Really Don't Want to Be Reborn. Take a good look at it. Come on!

Come on (*'▽'*)♪

I just found out it's on the shelves, I haven't had time to look at it 😥 Congratulations, come on!

The male and female protagonists are the most useless pair of trash protagonists and the most useless parents I have ever seen. Two people who had suffered bad luck for eight lifetimes were reincarnated into two babies in the belly of a female pig!

It has been written for more than two years. The author must be very serious about writing 👍👍

Come on, I found a great book while passing by.

The writing is okay, the writing style is okay, the author should work harder and don't forget the original intention.