Live in Marvel and Become an Immortal

I just read Chapter 50 and can't stand it anymore. Let me mention a few points to make some connections. I hope the author won't be angry. 1. The problem of the protagonist's strength. The protagonist's strength feels very wrong. Cultivation of immortality is not cultivation of truth. The realms of the two are completely different. Cultivation of immortality is the combination of mana and body, not the cultivation of true energy like cultivation. Cultivation is for the purpose of becoming an immortal and for immortality. Before becoming an immortal, you are nothing. The celestial beings and the mysterious beings are the pinnacle. Do you dare to say that Thanos or the Ancient One with the Infinity Gauntlet can't kill an immortal? The purpose of cultivating immortals from the very beginning is not to become an immortal but to prove the Tao and prove one's own way. Heavenly Immortal and Mysterious Immortal are just the lowest realm of cultivating immortals. There are a lot of such realms in the immortal world, and there are higher realms behind. Compared with the step-by-step practice of cultivating immortals, cultivating immortals is to carve out a path for oneself. Those who cultivate to an advanced level will always have their own path. Even the Sanqing in the ancient novels did not inherit Pangu's path, nor did they learn from Pangu to prove the path. Instead, everyone has their own path. Not to mention how powerful this book Goldfinger is, the projection of a demon can crush the protagonist to death. According to this development, instead of calling the book Cultivation of Immortality, it is better to rename it Cultivation of Immortality. Cultivation of Immortality requires a strong body and soul, but Cultivation does not. 2. The protagonist's IQ and EQ are very problematic. He is still the protagonist after all. Even if you don't give the villains IQ, you should give the protagonist some. I know you want to write a funny and joyful atmosphere, but in the end, you didn't write it well and made the protagonist a fool. The protagonist knows Marvel and knows how powerful the people in Marvel are. At this time, if you don't want to save your life, you should practice quickly to improve your strength. Before you reach the golden elixir stage, you have started to be lazy, including the Hulk and Thor. There are ten protagonists, not to mention Odin, Ancient and Thanos, and the following is the Warlock Adam, who has not yet appeared in the movie universe, and the five gods. The protagonist actually has no sense of urgency at all. The following things are one thing after another. Time is very tight, and there is no time for the protagonist to improve his strength. A few years is too little for a person who has been in seclusion for thousands of years, let alone the cultivation of several Yuanhui. The protagonist's IQ is really not enough, and he is still joking around when he has no strength. He is still joking when something happens and he should think calmly and deal with it calmly. He has such a big golden finger and such a big inheritance and does not want to improve his strength. He plays around all day without doing anything practical and does not help the plot. He is just messing around. He doesn't take it seriously when he should be serious. He doesn't know how to find the golden finger until he is in a hurry. He is also drunk.                                                                                            The author has insufficient control over the writing style of the novel, and insufficient conception of the plot. He wanted to write the protagonist as a funny character, but ended up writing a mentally retarded character. The protagonist is not strong, IQ is not high, EQ is not high, and he does not want to make progress. He is idle all day long with nothing to do, not enough to promote the plot, and not very involved. Above. These are my evaluations of this book. This is just my understanding of the book. No matter how you refute it, it has no impact on me anyway, and you can't hit me, just a little bit.

Talking to myself, I don't know what I'm writing

Sorry, I couldn't stand it after reading half a chapter. I hate the kind of guy who would change his name immediately after wearing it. Still has a gringo name. It's super disgusting.

Funny also has an attitude. What is the difference between this and system writing? No matter how awesome you are, you are still a salty fish.

In two lifetimes combined, I am over 40 years old, and still being like this is imbecile. I know that the author wanted to write this book in a relaxed and happy atmosphere, but it basically falls apart from the Marvel characters. Frank and the evil forces have a blood feud. How can he think about it when performing tasks? At the very least, the original character's personality should be maintained. Nick Fury, if nothing else, is definitely a character who remains calm even when the mountain collapses. How could he explode in just a few words? It feels like a novel from a few years ago when it had a halo of wisdom.

I can't stand it anymore. The author writes that cultivation of immortality relies on magic. The body is still that of an ordinary person. Doesn't the author know that there is a system for cultivating immortality called body refining? The most important thing is that whether you are cultivating immortality or refining the body, you need to temper your body. Judging from what you wrote, your body is almost like a golden elixir. It is still that of an ordinary person and you are not afraid of bursting your body.

How did those people say that Iron Man is as good as a god? Just like Rocket Bear in Guardians of the Galaxy said, no matter how powerful Tony's technologies are, they are only as powerful as those on Earth. There are so many awesome civilizations in the universe that can't create anything more powerful than him? Also, Thor can stun, the Hulk is so awesome, he can only hold on to the four walls of the house after it collapses, and can't lift it up. The new Spider-Man movie can deceive the projection, no matter how realistic it is, our immortal cultivators have no use in sweeping away their spiritual consciousness. In addition to making blind assumptions about settings, how do some people come to know that they are better than us cultivators?

He's so weak that I don't even know what to say. Look at that person who has mastered the golden elixir. He can either fly or destroy a city. The cultivation in this book is so busy practicing magic that I can't stand it anymore.

If you use a reactor to charge the Hongmeng artifact, why don't you use a four-wheel drive motor to power a nuclear submarine.

No matter what you write, those false gods of Marvel China must be killed, otherwise there will be nothing interesting to see if you go to Marvel The Jade Emperor of Marvel China actually wears a Japanese samurai uniform, and the gods are like monsters and monsters. If you go to Marvel and don't clean up the door, it won't be interesting.

I was so embarrassed that I almost got cancer. There was no intention to take advantage of the plot at all. For example, in the original plot, mosquitoes could be killed. You, a time traveler, had to go up to help. You were bitten by a mosquito and said you almost died. Fortunately, it was okay. It gave me the feeling that it would be better if you didn't show up. Your appearance made things more troublesome.

Why are book reviews written by junior VIPs?

Why does it give me the feeling of reading a composition?

Where did Marvel get the magicians to fix it for you? Beautiful pictures?

Too weak, golden elixir stage, what a piece of shit

You have so many typos and you don't know how to correct them? Don't you read it after you finish writing it? It doesn't make sense to read.

Why not let your grandpa time travel? Is there any use for you to travel through time?

As expected, Marvel comic books are still not suitable for me. In addition, since the protagonist chose the last 1/2 probability, why did he choose a place to die in the middle of the United States? Because in the world of Marvel movies or comics, nothing major happened in the middle of the United States, enough to wait for the half of the time.

Don't look at me again.

Stop fighting Thanos, Thanos is great, okay? I feel like Thanos is right. It's just that his methods are too cruel. If his methods were gentler, he would be too great. He had sacrificed so much himself, but it wasn't for himself.

Doesn't it take decades to cultivate immortality before you become good at it?

If you don't like the Holy Mother, please pay homage. How do you say that the saint's idiom says that the world is unkind and treats all things as stupid dogs? Saints do not treat the common people as stupid dogs.

Let's see how the Marvel Sense Controller wrote this logic.

This author is truly Buddhist + Holy Mother!

They're all typos. I can't even understand what's written.

I've only read Chapter 40. The protagonist's attack method is too monotonous, just a fireball and a big fireball. How many more spells are there...

The protagonist feels that this is getting more and more silly, like you have a world to give to others. If you plant all the ginseng in the world, add gems, and the stronger the soul, the better the memory.

Like this type very much. But I really don't like the writing style, as each chapter has to be played out several times. . After reading Chapter 15, not to mention the plot, it was over as I endured it, not to the point where I couldn't bear it anymore. Come on, author. I'll withdraw first

After reading Chapter 9, I don't know how to continue reading.

After reading a few chapters, I was forced to quit due to numerous typos.