Tremble, Wulin

Sorry, I'm late. Let me give you a complete explanation first.

I support the author's great martial arts, and the world is full of joy!

Although I am a girl, I also love watching martial arts. I feel that the author is very imaginative and describes the actions very well. The article is written in a smooth and smooth manner without any delay. Each character is no longer limited to the screen, but appears vividly on the paper (on the screen?): There are those who are righteous and heroic, those who are brave and courageous, and of course there are also those who are timid and timid. I hope to continue telling the legend.

The description of the article is adequate, but the plot is insufficient. The beginning is not good, but the more you write later, the better! Recommended!

I think it would be better to change the chapter name of the latest chapter to "News". After all, there is no marriage in it. If you later write about the plot of Hua Rongan marrying Miss Hua's family, would it be more reasonable to use "Marry"? This is purely a personal opinion.

I'm on my reading list today, come on!

I've probably read about seventeen or eight of them, so let's talk about it casually. In fact, the setting of this book is pretty good. What can I accomplish by traveling through the second generation to complete the unfinished business of the first generation? I still have some ideas, but it can also be said that there is nothing except the setting. First of all, this is a martial arts novel, Temple. If the story about the Tang Dynasty is to be written, it should be closely integrated with the Jianghu. However, this book seems to me to be the beginning of the dynasty's hegemony. So it was born in the wrong way from the beginning. It is inherently wrong in positioning, which is quite harmful to the readers. The plot written by the author in the previous chapter is not attractive. The elements that attract readers, for example, the opening is unique, using a supporting character to start, and the protagonist after traveling through time appears in person. This is understandable, but it does not give basic respect to the three golden chapters (in fact, I don't pay much attention to the golden three chapters at all. A good paragraph of writing can shape a whole story. However, in this book, I only asked the author to come out and get beaten). After the protagonist appeared until I read Chapter 17, the protagonist's existence is not only full of tension, but even the basic sense of existence is very weak. Up to now, I have always had a mixed impression of him, let alone being involved in it. As for other things, such as the blunt description and the use of words that are neither ancient nor modern, I won't talk about it. In fact, the starting point of this setting is that there have been similar novels and they have already been published. You might as well read more and learn more. Finally, I will order all of them as a conclusion. I am also sorry that I have not finished reading. The author's passion for writing books cannot be eradicated. I hope this operation can encourage me a little. . . .

Are there any friends who have monthly tickets? Come to this area, walk up to the author, and take out a ticket that the author has never seen before. Bang, throw it in the face, "It's all for you, no need to look for it!" ✊✊✊

Leave a name in Qingshi. . . . . . . . Come on! Top! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ✊

The author lamented that no one commented and the book review area was not busy, so I came! To be honest, this book is really good, the writing is good, the dialogue is not awkward, there are many points of interest, the plot is attractive, the pace of development is not slow, and there is not much water. There is nothing you can do about it if there are not many people reading it. For newcomers with new books, you, the author, should work hard and work hard. I believe your next book will attract many people. Come on! There has been a book shortage for a long time!

Tremble, Jianghu I've been here before. Our books have similar titles and you wrote them very well.

Long term pinned post! We are looking for supporting roles, both good and bad. Use knives, guns, swords, are good at fists and kicks? Shy, aloof, insidious? There will always be an image of martial arts in everyone's mind, both good and evil. I hope book friends can share it with me! Let him appear in the world of "Tremble, Martial Arts", which may not be long, but it is a complete world!

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Come on, write better stories!

Pay tribute to all my dear book friends: Recently, I heard from a big guy that many readers actually waste their daily recommendation tickets in vain! What I want to say is, come on, throw it all at me! Unlimited recycling of recommendation votes and collection. . . . . . . Even a monthly pass! Thank you in advance for your support!

The book is okay, but I'm a little thinner 🤫

Happy New Year, I will also work hard to code words in the new year.

Keep up the good work and look forward to the ending!

Congratulations, I saw your book as a must-read today on the app.

Full order, you have to work hard!

Reading the comments, I feel good! Collected first. Get fat before having surgery!