Rebirth: Sword Sealing Demon

The story is so captivating that once you read it, you won't be able to put it away.

There is nothing to say in this book. Now that I see it, I feel that everything is so natural and not awkward at all. It is very enjoyable. If you keep at it, you will succeed.

First: It is a poisonous point to give the protagonist an identity before time travel. He gave the identity but not the matching IQ. As an intelligence worker who has been engaged in intelligence for more than five years, I do everything step by step. Second: Many pretentious and slap-in-the-face plots are too embarrassing. Maybe it's the first time I write a book and it's not that enjoyable. For example, in Chapter 9, he said to Chao Chunfeng "these words that will make the city of Chang'an tremble." In fact, it shows that there is no need to say such words in the future because of the stakes. Forcible subjugation is the most fatal. Third: The description of Emperor Chu Long is such a failure. A man who can become an emperor will always have something special about him. He has to fight all the wars. He will also say "if the Dantian is disabled, just cut off all the muscles and veins"? The most neglected prince has shown this kind of talent. Even if he wanted to kill him, he would not let him die in this way. Seeing the identity given by the author to the protagonist, I would subconsciously bring in ideas such as intrigue, wits, and IQ when reading, and forcibly lower the IQ of the supporting characters. Every book will have it, but it also depends on the timing. I have read 100 chapters so far. I wrote this post because I saw the book review author said it was like a stand-alone book, so I read and wrote it to prove that you are not a stand-alone book. Writing this is just what I personally feel needs to be improved. Everyone has different opinions. I hope the author will avoid these poisonous points when writing in the future. Went to read a book. Thank you.

In the first 3 chapters, the protagonist doesn't look like an intelligence agent. Intelligence officers come in all shapes and sizes, but I only see one protagonist, who is pretentious.

It's a great book, please work hard. The clicks and recommendations are getting higher and higher now, it will definitely become popular.

Damn, here I come! Constant support.

This is a good start for martial arts.

I can't stand it anymore. I lost strength after reading the first three chapters. This is the second time I've clicked in and read it. It seems like it's really not suitable for me.

Ouch, ouch, faster, faster, I can't wait anymore

I like martial arts novels very much. This kind of martial arts novels are comfortable to read. Come on, many people will like them.

Read it! Niuniu! ! !

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Seeing the great transformation of the demon reminds me of the unity of heaven and earth

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Let's try the poison🤝🤝

There is no trace of martial arts at all. Why doesn't the author go into fantasy?

Come on,

The book is quite good. I have the urge to keep reading. Good luck to the author.