Green Caesar

I patiently read a few more chapters, and then I wanted to curse, Obanima⊙∀⊙! Don't you feel disgusted by the name "Bangzi"? Is the system made by Bangzi? Really disgusting

How unreasonable. . . . Training alone is actually better than competing regularly. . . I'm convinced

I feel like this book would have been okay if it had been published 5 years ago, but forget it now. It's all poisonous. The system needs to be intelligent. The writing is wretched. It's just like buying lottery tickets.

Well, let me give you some opinions. 1. It is best to put the wedge in a separate chapter so that it does not look confusing. 2. Although there are not many descriptions about the attributes of pig's feet, the first ones are numbers, and then they become ABCDE. The two sets of settings are not coordinated. It is best to correct them. 3. The author's writing style still needs to be improved. This may be a common problem for new authors. The writing is very smooth. Personally, I can't feel the emotional ups and downs brought by the plot of the novel. It seems that there is a monster chasing behind me, and it just passes by. Finally, I hope the author Jun will work hard. Above.

Chapter 2 said he didn't go to college, and chapter 5 said he went to the same college as his first love.