Ace Young Marshal

You are really good at it. Half of the whole article is repeating the previous chapter and half is repeating the next chapter. There is no strange feeling at all when you skip it.

What the hell are you writing? I came here to watch basketball, not a bloody love story. After reading more than thirty chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. What the hell is this?

I'm here to watch basketball, why are you talking nonsense and kidnapping?

I'm here to watch basketball, not Korean romance dramas, okay?

Awesome! It's over 1 million words, and the protagonist hasn't become a head coach yet! ! ! ! ! ! Ha ha………………

Although it is said that novels need foreshadowing, there is no one who can foreshadow hundreds of chapters. The writing style is rather average. . I can only say: I wish you success! Goodbye!

I was so stupid that I read several chapters. Am I watching a love ethics drama? I vomited, write a coaching article, and write a lot of ethics drama in the front, the author should go to a female channel

It currently has 1.32 Million words and 20% has been read. The protagonist has finally been chosen. . . Scout, after nearly 300,000 words, he has not yet become a head coach. I feel that the protagonist becomes a head coach, and then leads the team to a championship and plays for a few more seasons. It cannot be completed without 10 million words! ! !

What are you writing about? Fight

I came here to read basketball novels, not to read all kinds of heart-wrenching dramas. After writing dozens of chapters, I haven't gotten to the basketball yet. I have no feelings and left.

Please save it if you like it, don't get lost, thank you for your support~~

It's so annoying. I want to see a basketball theme but don't write about it.

I have read more than 80 chapters. The protagonist has not even settled into a basketball job. Brother, you have too much foreplay. You are gone. It is better to just watch the city.

What's the breaking point? It's indescribably bland. Come on, some people may like it, but it's just not for me.

This is why I didn't sign until more than 100 chapters

I'm a little dizzy, the writing is so bad, second-rate outline, third-rate writer

The writing style is good, but this is a basketball novel. Why do you write so much and have nothing? It takes more than a hundred chapters to get to the main topic and enter the NBA.

Congratulations to everyone. I saw Chapter 732 and finally became the head coach.

It's a mess. It's the first time I've read such a nonsense novel.

I've read Chapter 80 and haven't started talking about basketball. It's a bunch of trivial matters.

Does it say at the beginning that pig's feet are too harmless? ? ? It's easy to talk about being fired, it's a normal routine. The act of selling a house to redeem someone always feels very awkward and inconsistent with our three views. I brought in the pig's feet to see them, and they looked very awkward. You shouldn't pay attention to him. I have to beat him up about the photoshopped photos. What you wrote cannot be said to be abusing pigs. You are inconsistent with our universal values. It looked awkward. Finish this book early and start a new one. Generally speaking, becoming a head coach slowly is different from other basketball articles about becoming a head coach in a short time. This kind of detailed writing about the process is still acceptable.

Why is there such a small amount of words in the paid chapter and the summary? Speechless

Strength to persuade you to retreat is really poisonous

It's really forcing the drama and slowing down the pace. A black man is plotting for a position as a Chinese teacher. He also works out and buys lottery tickets, but then gives up halfway and starts teaching again. Can you give me a second try?

What did you write? The level is too poor.

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If you like watching basketball, I recommend not watching it. Too watery! !

What the hell? The pig's name is the male protagonist. Can you be more strict? I really can't stand it.

I was really impressed. I kept seeing repetitions in one chapter, confusing and without any passion. There was so little written about basketball, which made it uncomfortable to watch.

Does Sterling understand the game? It is probably more difficult than Jordan's accurate draft vision!