Legendary Trainer of Elves

Finished the whole book. Compared with the surprise in the mid-term, there are more disappointments and regrets in the later stage. First of all, the problem of typos is criticized by name, which greatly affects the perception. In terms of plot, too much text was spent describing the training process and basic settings in the early stage. The length is too long and it is easy to lose patience. But the plot is not bad, and the world view of the dark jungle is also to my liking, which makes me stick with it. The mid-term is the most comfortable part. Especially the plot where the villain and passers-by are looking for trouble, and the giant swamp monster punches his friend Long Aotian in the face, which is very enjoyable to watch. But in the later stage, the meaning suddenly became unclear, and a lot of space was used to open an alt account and do side tasks. The plot where Teppei and Ryuzaki Shinichi suddenly start leveling up again made me sleepy the most, and these two identities were directly scrapped in the finale, which makes no sense. There were too many boring side quests at the end, which made me upset, and I even had the urge to skip them directly. The long-awaited swamp monster only appeared hastily at the end. It has to be said that the author may not be very good at figuring out what readers like to see. There are also many problems in the plot. For example, if there are many king-level warriors appearing in the newcomer trials, the early combat power will expand too fast and the currency will depreciate seriously. The most serious bug is that the mysterious island is only the second stage of the newcomer competition. The third stage was not mentioned at all after I came back from the island. It was completely forgotten by the author because it took so long that I even doubted whether there was a third stage in this competition. The main task of becoming a champion was not achieved. I just won a regional championship and ended it hastily. I promised to take revenge on the woman who took Gyarados away, but I forgot about it. The long-awaited Queen, Mini Dragon, Bulbasaur, and Reggie Rock also had no role until the ending, and the settings were completely rotten. The Beast Club, Mina, Miya, Kondo Makoto, Sakaki Chimai, these forces and characters behind the scenes that could be spread out to write thousands of chapters, were hastily completed without any explanation. I have to say, I am really full of regret and reluctance. I hope that in another story, the Swamp Monster can return to the protagonist's camp, show his unrivaled power and fame again, and make up for these countless regrets.

In fact, this slow-burning novel is quite good, but I have written more than 650 chapters, and it has only been a few months. I can't accept this time setting. I hope the author will write it later and make the time for the protagonist to upgrade slower. Finally, I wish this book a great success.

Personally, I think the book is quite good, but I still want to complain. I have read more than 190 chapters so far. The protagonist is competing on a boat. The opponent has a sea spiny dragon that can reverse scales and has many skills. However, after the whole battle, he lost the game after only using a few skills. The reverse scales are useless. The second elf can move at high speed, but it is useless. Moreover, Nidoran, who is more than ten levels lower than the opponent, is easily hit with a hundred thousand volts.                     ，， So what's the point of writing so many skills? And to be honest, the prices in the book are really crazy! An elf can cost millions and tens of millions, and a prop can cost millions and tens of millions. For example, Mikri gave the protagonist a top-notch Sunstone worth more than ten million, while a Gyarados can be purchased on the black market for a minimum of twenty million. At level 37, it can be doubled with some powerful tricks, which is a bit speechless. There is also a strength system that I personally feel is too high. A water leaping fish of more than ten levels has a strength of 300kg. How to write a high-level one? How to arrange some natural fighting type elves? Don't forget that there are some perverted people in the elf world who can defeat fighting elves. These people or things in the elf world can be said to be special and cannot be compared with reality. This is acceptable, but it will affect the reading experience when watching. Having said so much, it depends on how the author arranges it in the middle and later stages. But overall, although this book is a bit toxic, it is still within the acceptable range for me. The flaws do not hide the advantages, and some settings are still very good. I hope to see the author improve the combat aspect later! The above is purely a personal opinion. I think the book is good so I say so much. If you don't like it, don't criticize it.

I have to say, as long as it doesn't collapse in the later stages, this is the most beautiful PM fanfic I've ever seen. The plot is getting better and better. The author needs to be steady and don't waste time (≧Д≦)ノ

It is strongly recommended that the author update the pet information again and divide it into teams. Is there any need for the previous Poison King team? After all, they are the initial elves. I don't want to give them up. Please give me some roles.

Just put away the giant hat mushroom. The protagonist should also have 5.6 Kings.

Big Outbreak

I think it's so beautifully written that I don't even want it to end 😭

The foundation of Team Rocket's growth is based on the alliance and the aristocratic families' exclusive ownership of elf knowledge and the high difficulty of entry. The contradiction between the sharing and dissemination of elf knowledge and the restricted retention. However, the Rockets may have been dissatisfied with this situation at first, but later they thought about their goal of becoming stronger and replacing the league, which obviously took the wrong path. So mobilize the power of the masses. . . . . I feel that the protagonist is already able to farm. The chain of breeding houses can be used as a starting point. The knowledge can be obtained by Dr. Ohmu

Is there a female protagonist in this book?😁

I started reading the book I started reading 5 days ago. It has 1.96 Million words. Now I have finished reading it... I have started to wait for the update... I heard that the author is slow to update? ?

A very well written book, but sometimes it makes me expect a lot from PM 😭, but it's still good (I prefer the setting of the animated version, which kind of broke my PM world view)

Is it still available today? The author is great.

Although there are a lot of elves above level 60, can Team Zheping win the championship without the King? I mentioned earlier that Alice's Charizard is advancing to the King of Heaven Also, I really want to see all the individual fast swimming frogs. I guess I won't be able to see it in this book. I hope to see it in the next book 😍

The writing is very good, the author is great, keep working hard and don't give up, don't let those bad reviews affect your mood^_^

Come on, author, I hope you will get sick less often, get better from stomach problems soon, and stay healthy.

A rare novel with a conscience, I like it very much! Come on!

I kept up with the update progress today and presented two monthly passes. I hope the protagonist can get Larulas as soon as possible. After all, the engagement stone is already there, and the super queen is right in front of me. The author works hard, the recommended monthly passes are available 😍😍😍

Regarding the protagonist's posture in Chapter 376, people in the group also said that I made the big-mouthed bat smaller

Like the title, please improve it and give me likes

In fact, I prefer some elves with single but deadly weaknesses, such as Bangira, which is four times weaker than fighting, Mantis and Steel Ball, which are four times weaker than fire, and even Swampert, which is four times weaker than grass. The great advantage of these elves is that they are easy to jointly defend (for example, if Bangira needs brute force, switch to Gengar, and Giant Swamp and Mantis can jointly defend each other, etc.), And they have a variety of resistances. The top one among them should be the Firesteel Beast, which is four times weaker and has no shortcomings except for it. It is also very easy to use flying/floating to form a zone defense. Of course, if you make a wrong judgment, you will basically collapse.

The protagonist's trump card elf, format: Pokémon (racial value/individual value/attribute/characteristic). Note: The racial value can only reflect the average level of the Pokémon's race. A Pokémon with a low racial value may not necessarily be bad; the individual value truly reflects the excellence of the Pokémon. 1. Swampert (race value 535 / individual value gold full / water-earth dual attributes / characteristic moisture) - the racial value after mega evolution is 635: Rainy Team 2. Big Mouth Ou (racial value 440 / individual value gold / water-flying dual attributes / characteristics rain and rain plate): Rainy Team 3. Pikachu (racial value 430 / individual value golden / electric attribute /Characteristic Lightning Rod): Team Rainy Day - Note: The race value of ordinary Pikachu is 320, and the race value of partner Pikachu is 430 4. Nidoking (505/Gold/Ground-Poison Attribute/Characteristic Vitality-Force): Poison King 5. Crossbat (535/Purple/Flying-Poison Attribute/Characteristic Mental Power): Poison King 6. Bulbasaur ( Bulbasaur's race value is 525/gold/grass-poison/characteristic chlorophyll) - the race value after mega evolution is 625: poison king 7. Hunting swallowtail butterfly (592.5/Gold/flying-insect/insect premonition) 8. Beautiful flower (490/gold/grass/healing heart) 9. Wind speed dog (555/gold/fire/fire) 1 0. Red Gyarados (540/Golden/Flying-Water/Intimidate) - The race value after mega evolution is 640, and the attribute is Water-Evil 11. Mini Dragon (Fast Dragon race value 600/Purple/Fast dragon attribute Flying-Dragon) 12. Squirtle (Blastoise race value 530/Purple/Water/Riptide) - The race value after mega evolution is 630

Will there be a female protagonist? If so, I hope Sirona and the legendary trainer will have a female legendary trainer 😁

After reading it, I went to finish the whole book from scratch. I think it was a mixed bag. The rhythm in the early stage is OK. Common people join the Rockets, and then accumulate strength in the dark society, until the Swampert shows its prowess in the middle stage. The protagonist's strength starts to be different from that of elite trainers, which is very good here. In addition, I don't think there is a big problem in reopening two new accounts. After all, in the early stage, because he was from the Rockets, he had some shameful behavior and was not suitable to exist in the league (after all, the protagonist's strength has not reached the level of having seven or eight kings in hand in the later stage, so he will be constrained). Therefore, it is actually reasonable to cultivate two new accounts, join the alliance, rely on the strength of the large account to protect them, and take the opportunity to bond with the alliance boss. But the ending is too hasty, there are too many things that are not explained clearly, several Pokémon have not fully grown, and even the mini dragon and another dragon-type quasi-god are still children until the end. Some of the hostile organizations laid out in the early stage, such as the Divine Beast Association, the Venture Capital Association that solves the problem of water gyms, Celebi with whom the protagonist has become acquainted, and the marks of Kyogre and Groudon obtained, can all be explored further. There is also the mysterious ruins (the one with the coffin of the evil god of death) that was invited by Zhulan but ended up being destroyed. In theory, it is possible to go in and find out with the help of the Hu Di, the gem starfish, La Lulas, who has almost no words in the entire text, and the development of the protagonist's own super powers. This ending can only be said to be a continuation of the dog's tail. It ends too hastily But there are some shining points. The shaping of several elves such as Swampert, Beautiful Flower, Pikachu, and Crossbat is still very good Maybe it is because the results are not very good and I can't persist Sigh It's a pity

Super Blastoise

New book, tell me what elves you like, and see if you can use it on your thighs

Ah, why should there be a female protagonist? Once there is a female protagonist, the taste changes 😭

Why are most of the elf fan works so toxic? Does anyone know any more normal ones?

Is there any fanfic with Sirona as the heroine? Please recommend it!

This chapter of the pm article says why there are still people who insist on the protagonist killing decisively? Have you really read too many urban dark novels? The protagonist saves a little girl and gets trashed? Keyboard Warrior is a real bullshit, I suggest you play the role of being decisive, murderous, and selfish in real life. It depends on whether you can survive or not 😊😊