Arriving in Another World and Becoming a King

To be honest, the beginning is very strange. It's not that it's not well written, but it feels like the beginning of a novice urban system novel. Logically speaking, a niche novel would not have such an opening. It's understandable that the author is anxious to find a golden finger for the protagonist, without laying the groundwork, and then a bunch of worlds pop up all at once. I hope the author doesn't write a bunch of them, because this way the protagonist's strength will be very inflated, and then there will be less than tens of thousands of words to write. Finally, I recommend a domestic animation, Assassin 567. You can try to write it in. I like it very much. Personal opinions. Please don't criticize me if there is any offense. Contact delete

How should I put it, this book gave me the feeling of giving a heroine to the protagonist. Moreover, the pace of this book is too fast and everything feels like it should be taken for granted. I think the author slows down the pace a little and writes more about daily life. The most important thing is to write every character carefully. The only thing that attracts me about this book is the subject matter. I hope the author can see it.

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I would like to recommend here the novel "The Myth" that I wrote before. In fact, I chose the wrong area for this one. Feel free to take a look at it.

By the way, I would like to add, due to lack of experience. I accidentally submitted this book to the wrong section.

Xiaoxin, who has just signed a contract, hopes that all readers will give their opinions and let Sajia make corrections. I hope to deliver more good articles to readers who support me. 🙂

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