Revolutionize the World

Is this about technology or martial arts?

We promised to revolutionize the whole world. I don't realize that what you are writing now has nothing to do with the topic. Stop writing these thousand-year-old routines, they are meaningless. The only thing that can be seen is your violent changes to the main plot of the world. And the portrayal of the main character is not likeable either. Struggling with the system

What I wrote in the early stage has nothing to do with technology. They are all police movies. I don't know what the meaning is. If I delete them, more people will watch them.

Black technology has become an urban superpower, and the first few dozen pictures are all about fighting. Author, your level really needs to be improved. You don't distinguish between priorities, and you just set the outline yourself and slap yourself in the face? Please, just be brave and say it in one stroke. In my opinion, there is no need to write the subsequent revenge plot. It looks nondescript, has no role in connecting the past and the next, and will not bring about the topic or the effect of extending the following. It is purely redundant. If you really want to write about urban brawls, just change the title of the book to Fight the World, which would be more relevant to the title.

Write more about technology! There are so many intrigues in the science fiction genre, it's so uncomfortable to watch!

As long as you don't use too exaggerated routines, the writing style is generally okay. Sometimes I feel really panicked when I see certain plots.

In fact, you should highlight that system, so that if you have a theme, it will not be so easy to collapse, because you will not be able to write out the exciting points, but it is not good to force it to end, so it is better to just send an outline!

Weak people occupy a small corner. Please don't be angry. That's it. Let me give you a book about the end of the Qin Dynasty. The protagonist's soul wears Xiang Yu. Interested book friends can read it. The Overlord Must Win, Yipin. (Not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai, not Xiaobai) Sorry for any inconvenience.

The biggest problem is that with the big gift package and system, you can't use the system to install the technology package? It's a lie! Not science fiction at all

Chapter 3 is so poisonous that I don't want it 😅

This is just like today's TV series! Selling dog meat for sale! Talking about science and technology novels is actually nonsense!

It's not good to have martial arts in this

At the beginning of science and technology, you can develop genes to strengthen yourself. It is better than practicing martial arts. When you practice martial arts through science and technology, how long will it take for you to become invincible with a rifle? It is better to use a genetic potion. Since it is a black technology, it is black. In the mid-term, biotechnology and energy technology will go together with exoskeleton armor, robots, space battleship energy weapons and subspace engines. Biotechnology will be researched in the direction of superpowers (X-Men type) for reference. In the later stage, dimensional weapons. In terms of the plot, the early stage is mainly about development and research, with occasional battles. In the middle stage, science and technology explodes with various black technologies, seizing resources for large-scale development, and in the later stage, it crushes and invades other worlds or planes, etc.! I feel like this is better than writing about martial arts!