Sword Master Bahuang

Although this novel is still a general novel routine, it is fresh and fresh. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

In fact, I think the author must have written it carefully. The details are very detailed, but sometimes it is a little bit incomplete. The first chapter of the work is very important, but what the author wrote here may be a little strange. Why will he kill your whole family if you refuse to confess? I believe that some people may feel that they can't stand it after reading the first chapter, and I also can't understand it. In short, I suggest the author to read more works of the big guys, and then try a few more times, try to make the plot more reasonable, and don't look so obsessed. That's all my suggestions. I have only read the book for three or four years. I saw it on other platforms before, and I only came to the starting point after being introduced by classmates. My answer is only my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Thank you. (I also came across this novel through the hourly red envelope)

After receiving the red envelope, reply with a thank you😜

To be honest, I was a little surprised at the beginning of this book, because the protagonist did not have the kind of mindless intention to break off the engagement and practice rebirth. Instead, it directly uses background and strength to highlight strength, which is something I haven't seen before. At least it can give people a fresh feeling. As the plot develops, the protagonist's talent is also discovered, and he becomes stronger step by step. This is a typical fantasy plot, and it is handled well. But one drawback is that the description of the supporting characters is not deep enough. After watching it for so long, there are no characters that I feel are very memorable. For example, when the senior sister and Cang Xuan died, the protagonist began to feel sad, but there were very few stories between the few (profound things). Anyway, I felt it was a bit blank. I am talking about the halo of the protagonist that I have seen. There are some. Although the author has described a lot about the emphasis and importance of the Tiandao Sword Embryo, its role is not reflected in the article. I noticed that you have not mentioned it in about two hundred chapters. Since it is the most important talent of the protagonist, should it be strengthened? (Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it⊙∀⊙!)

The first chapter was so cloudy and foggy that 😵 couldn't be seen clearly, and many people just gave up after reading it. I'll keep it now and look at it after it's finished. Thank you for the red envelope.

The first few chapters! The woman who was the mastermind didn't kill her but kept her baby. This kind of garbage plot is often shown on TV, and I saw it again in the novel! Speechless!

I got a 22-point red envelope and wanted to express my gratitude.

What's going on, little brother, are you so poisonous?

Just by looking at the title, you can tell that it is a children's work. Children's world likes to distinguish between good and evil, right and wrong, while the adult world only has pros and cons and class positions.

Still a level 5 author, let me go! Is this the level?

The first chapter is extremely poisonous! If the master's family has opened the force value, then why should there be a yellow-level one in the family? Then how come you, a woman who just joined the sect, can destroy an entire family with just a bunch of bullshit top ten disciples? And as a county town, it must be the largest and most prosperous city in the county, right? Then the three major families in this county are actually the three major families in the county, right? Such a family must have many disciples in the strongest sect in the county, right? Even if you don't do well, you won't be able to overwhelm a disciple for generations, right? According to the distribution of interests, as one of the three major families, there must be someone with a high position in this sect. After all, not everyone is extraordinary and will definitely benefit the family. So how did you come up with it to besiege one of the three major families? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

More than 3800 chapters! ! ! Oh my God!

1. Realm. Seeing now, I don't remember anyone from the initial state except Huang Ji and the person before Tianren. If you don't use the common foundation building, golden elixir, etc., You have to be original. If it's not simple and easy to remember, then it should be impressive. For example, in the True Qi Realm, you can use True Qi, and in the True Dharma Realm, you can use mana. But in the article, apart from showing the difference in levels, what is the difference? It's not as easy to use directly as level 7 or 8. 2. Talent. Tianjiao, Jiaowang, direct disciple, and holy son. Who knows, other than the level difference, what's the difference in their talents? For example, if the protagonist is crushed by the Holy Son, if he says, "My cultivation, swordsmanship, and martial arts are stronger than mine, but I am not completely defenseless... Is there some other fundamental gap between us?" I will say later that the Son has understood the "law". The subsequent plot says that the protagonist understands the law and finally has the power to resist the Son of God. In this way, compared to the simple expression in the article, being crushed, right?

I'm not suitable for reading this kind of novel, the routine is too familiar!

After reading more than 30 chapters, I really couldn't stand this kind of routine. I looked at the update date and realized, holy shit, it's only a book from the past two years. I thought it was from ten years ago. The dialogue is too weak, and the relationship between the supporting characters and the protagonist has no logic. I admire the author for being able to write more than 3,000 chapters

The first 300 chapters are well written, really good! It's very watery in the back. At least it's pretty cool until chapter 900!