Forbidden Curse Illustrated Book

I guess it's coma, the treatment is forbidden, and the forbidden spell is super strengthening. You have been strengthened, send it quickly! XD

First of all, the writing in the first few chapters was too bland, and it only started to become exciting in the Anding District. It can be seen that the author wants to write as much detail as possible, but it is too detailed. People who read online articles nowadays basically don't have the patience to read your details. After browsing a whole chapter, you will feel that there is no plot to read. In fact, the story after the demon invasion is the main plot, but when the demon invaded, the book was almost on the shelves. Anyway, it felt like the protagonist traveled through time too early. There are a lot of memes in the book, whether it's from games or anime. You can see a lot of interesting elements, which are indeed very thoughtful. However, if some important characters are given elements of memes, it may affect the character's image... This is my own feeling. Although I feel that there is still a big problem with the pacing, if it is written well, it should be a very good book by the middle and later stages. The author can try to recommend something that will be more popular. 😰

Have you considered the readers' feelings before you are so slow?

In fact, I feel that the pace of the plot is a bit fast 😥

I think the pig's feet need to be bald, and if you have a big chin, it's best to wear a purple robe, so that the power of snapping your fingers can be maximized.

This author... Maybe can be used to make soup!

Strange, why no one trolls me? ⚆_⚆ This is the trolling room. The grumpy brothers and sisters are here to troll If I think it is helpful, I will keep it.

If there are any interesting forbidden curses, feel free to say them, but don't say them if you don't want to. ⸜(˙-˙)⸝

The supporting characters are well set up, the writing is good, and it is worth recommending.

There is always something to gain from walking around and seeing. Appreciate the support! 🤝

The suspense is getting bigger and bigger, it's exciting!

The writing is pretty good, but the pacing is not very good.

Good! I hope to continue writing and get better and better! ! [Fn=5_1][fn=5_1]

Emmm. I can't think of anything to say. However, this book is not bad and may become popular, but the update rate is so fast. . . .

It seems that Yin Xia is destined to have this calamity, and it cannot be easily resolved. Bless him.

The tone of speaking has a strong sense of familiarity with Japanese comics.

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Upon first reading the first few chapters, you can easily find that the writing is anything but casual. The further you look back, the more you can appreciate the charm displayed by words.

Enthusiasm is slowly worn away, so if you see things like unsatisfactory results in the novel, you, the author, have to persevere. Everything is difficult at the beginning, hard in the middle, and even harder at the end. Persistence is the last word.

I, x, the author, can you slow down a little bit? It's so hard to find this book, it's so slow.

A slower pace might be better.