Wandering Businessman in the Apocalypse

First of all, it must be admitted that the writing is not good. Sifang can only say that it will continue to work hard to improve slowly. As for the issue of system features, it is very helpless. Sifang has such a big brain and can only make some changes in the system content. As for fighting, it's inappropriate to strengthen the zombies at the beginning of the apocalypse, isn't it? Please understand that the description process is not in place. You think it's wrong for a person with fighting skills and weapons to deal with two zombies without any loss or injury, but if I let the protagonist get injured, I believe some readers will say that the protagonist is too rubbish. Then again, if you scratch your skin when facing a zombie, you will die! Finally, I would like to thank Blood Moon Feiyu for your criticism. The fact that you can say so much shows that you are reading my book seriously and are not just some nonsense. Please forgive me if there are any shortcomings! 😄

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1. No eunuchs 2. The dialogue is a bit white (lack of words that fit the character's positioning). If each occupation has a personality that matches that occupation, you can collect information by reading more books and watching movies and TV shows. 3. The battle section is too hasty. The first enemy (2 zombies) is solved in 3-4 paragraphs in a chapter. There is little foreshadowing and no skills in the battle (it is purely IQ crushing, and the atmosphere is not obvious. Using words to emphasize how hard the protagonist is, how nervous, how tired and empty is very unconvincing. You need to speak with facts. 4. The system has no special features. This kind of cheat is set in the post-apocalyptic literary street and is not very attractive. It needs to throw out something extremely distinctive at the beginning. To sum up, the story is very awkward to read. No matter who speaks, I can't feel the intelligence. The setting is not very innovative. The battle is an insult to my time. It has a little foreshadowing that the zombies have outstanding abilities, but they are instantly killed by the protagonist without even struggling. The protagonist does not even lose a little bit, so what should I watch? Give me a reason to keep reading? System? I don't want to watch it anymore because I get points by killing 2 zombies in seconds.

Recommended by Dashan, but there are too few words. Come on.

The rich palace of the starting point main site is not displayed. What can I do? I am also very helpless, okay?

Recommended by Dashan, keep it first and then slaughter it if it becomes fat.

Great introduction from Dashan. Come on.

Recommended by Dashan, the number of words is too short, I will keep it first

Recommended by Dashan, come and take a look.