Labyrinth of Heavens

I came in at the red envelope point on the hour. It's 34 o'clock. But I really can't get the red envelope. I just read a few chapters and tell the author about it. If you feel you don't want to read it or like it, just delete it. 1. Starting from the first chapter, no one should mind how the protagonist died excluding the prologue. When the protagonist wakes up, it is European-style furniture. Okay, Western fantasy. But what the hell is Xiaolian? Even if you are just called Lian, you are better than Xiaolian. Or Elena or something. This time I came out of it and no longer had any sense of immersion. Then there is the fact that Westerners call them father, but not father. You can write one more word about father! The Green family didn't immigrate from the Northeast. In summary, I hope the author can understand the spoken English of Westerners, otherwise the sense of immersion will be very poor. 2. It's not terrible if you cheat the protagonist, but you can't jump directly from feudal society to 2000. After 50 years of development, you will be in the 1970s and 1980s. Logic doesn't make sense either. China has had men supremacy over women for more than 1,000 years. In just a few years, women can hold up half the sky. Without this paragraph, you could have built a steam engine in 50 years, and I would believe you. In summary, no one who writes novels is not YY, but your logic should at least be passable and you can explain it to a reasonable level. 3. If you have a mortal enemy with someone, you slap him in the face. Will you let him go? Would you tell him, "Think clearly and don't mess with me in the future"? This mortal enemy's family is as powerful as yours. I will find a way to kill him. If he can't die, he must also show the ability to die together. It's not a joke. And so gentle. . . . I don't know how it went in the later period. Maybe the author's writing skills are gradually maturing. But I couldn't accept these things in the early stage. I don't know if the author will delete the post. I raised the question, and I hope the author will pay attention to what I said. 😰

If you grab enough 100 starting points, give yourself a reward and reward yourself.

Maybe you are lonely now, but you will definitely be brilliant in the future, and you will get what you want.

I just read the first ten chapters. How should I put it? The plot is a bit abrupt. When climbing the city tower, the protagonist rebels against the Yellow Turban Army. I feel that the city lord and his party are a bit forced to be smart, so I immediately believe him. The protagonist is a rich second generation who likes to play games. Once he time travels, he becomes an executioner who kills people without batting an eye. Even the likes of Lu Bu and Zhao Yun are not that simple to kill. The plot of apprenticeship with Tong Yuan is also briefly mentioned. The author can communicate with other authors. I wish you can write better and better. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I always have manuscripts saved, and as soon as they are put on the shelves, they will be updated ten times, for three consecutive days.

As soon as I saw that pig's feet was the name of an acquaintance, I didn't want to read it anymore.

Unbelievable that mazes are getting more and more expensive

Memories before the age of 15 were sealed at birth. . . . . . Then the question arises, was the protagonist a fool or a vegetable before the age of 15? After all, a person without memory cannot interact.

Isn't anyone reading it? It seems that the best thing to do is to write more.

Come on, author, although there are many plots in the novel that may not make sense, and some readers have also raised some questions, I hope the writing will get better and better 🙂