King of Evolution

Most of it is just the characters talking, and you could use more description to enhance the sense of the story.

So far so good. It's best to keep your identity secret. When the scene arrived 10 days later, the Helmet Man slowly disappeared among the people. The author works hard to update

This writing style has the flavor of a sudden increase in assets, but the writing becomes worse and worse with the increase in assets. I feel like he has changed.

Is it a eunuch? It's a good book even if the poison is removed. It's a pity.

That's very long-winded. It's not like a rich man pays money first and then gets treatment. After a cure of two billion, you wouldn't be willing to part with it. . . .

From the book list, the book is good but the quantity is small. I will keep it first.

The writing is good. Except for the 2 billion in the previous article, which is a bit too much, the basic logic is okay. However, I always feel that it is not cautious enough and exposes a bit too much. Moreover, it is estimated that some readers will mention why the news of the apocalypse is not reported to the country. The author should be mentally prepared. However, I think it doesn't matter. Just develop according to the existing outline. Otherwise, it will be an online article that fights against the apocalypse on the lap of the country. It is too easy to get a 404. It would be better if it does not involve the country.

Whatever you write, the most important level of cultivation is very poor, and there is no logic at all.

Why do you have to save people when you see them? You are really free. . .

The book is okay, except that the author likes to write about some irrelevant people: wow, the protagonist is awesome, the protagonist is amazing, the protagonist I will give birth to a monkey, the book is okay

In which chapter did you die? I was stuck on the second chapter, and most of the people who read on were just novices reading the book! Well, this book is suitable for beginners