A Writer's Field Notes from Ancient Times

One story ruined the entire book. In the world of a poor lady, the male protagonist took over someone else's body and ruined his childhood sweetheart's wife. Your love is love, but other people's love is not love? The female protagonist also wants to steal someone else's husband, but the male protagonist and his original wife have not yet separated from each other, and the two of them got together, making it a real adulterer and adulteress. It is said that if the hero hadn't reincarnated into his wife and had to suffer the pain of losing her husband, it would be better for her husband to die than for the husband who was loving and affectionate a second ago to have a ghost in his body, to ruin his wife's reputation, and to kick his wife, Princess Shang, for the sake of so-called love.

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Why do books written by female fans always like to have a male protagonist appear and pester the female protagonist? The female protagonist is an alien who goes to ancient times to experience the plot. The male alien also goes with her and has a higher status than the female protagonist. What is the purpose of having a male alien chasing the female protagonist all the way? Is it true that everything written by a female video author is a romance?

In short, the deception system is now online. Miss Alien player, please pay attention to check! The cheating system is at your service! Pit pits are healthier! 🤓🤓🤓

In the author's recent chapters, for example, I am Liang You are Zhu, the redundant person has become more and more like a Mary Sue, with countless auras and omnipotence, and anyone who does not agree will have a bad end. It's really meaningless to write about other people as if they are idiots. It's all just self-indulgence. Can it be changed? Liang Zhuzhong, the two of them really love each other, but you insist on humiliating the woman. Your ability is your own business. Do you need to compare your ability to marry a wife? If your engagement is broken off, you will regret it for the rest of your life! No matter how high your ability is, it is meaningless without true love. Finally, the character of someone who is cursed to be an unlucky person is really questionable. After the daughter-in-law is transformed into a shadow, the heroine's approach is essentially the same as her opponent's, except that she invests more resource packs than her opponent and cheats. If you use too many cheats, you will lose a lot of the fun of the article. It's completely bullying, but it's still proactive! Isn't this even more sinister than what ordinary big families do, because there are no rules at all, it's all about one's own preferences. Among the superfluous people, it is unreasonable that so many descendants in their family do not understand or learn from my grandfather's high abilities. Since you can take care of yourself, but you still regret that your parents don't care about you, it doesn't seem to have anything to do with you not taking care of your sister in kindergarten. I hope to increase the difficulty of upgrading pig's feet and make it less paranoid. Pig's feet are no different from other so-called bad people in bullying and fearing the strong, and they are equally disgusting. The competition should be fair. It would be boring if the strong always bullied the weak.

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From the front, everything looks fine, very interesting. But when I saw the story about a poor lady, I couldn't stand it anymore. This story was really a failure. The princess and Huang Xianzhi didn't let me see love, but let me see the unhealthy outlook on life! No matter how great love is disguised, they are just disgusting. I don't mean to criticize the author, just my opinion on the story

Why does the potato, corn and sweet potato three-piece set have every story? It feels like every story has the same routine. 🤔

Except for the fact that there is a male protagonist that makes me very irritated, everything else is pretty good.

The author has a lot of imagination, but there are a lot of common sense errors in history~ I was a little surprised when I saw it, especially since I have a bit of obsessive-compulsive disorder... Also, in the story about the Jin Dynasty, the original owner of the hero's time travel has a beloved wife. Although it is explained in the article, it is really poisonous 😅 In the story about the time traveling through the Qin Dynasty, Zhang Liang actually accepted reality and worked for the Qin Dynasty... It was too OOC! Maybe the author likes Qin Shimingyue, thinks Zhang Liang is good-looking, and wants to give him a good ending. Even if Zhang Liang accepts the reality, it is impossible for him to serve the Qin Dynasty or be reused by the Qin Dynasty. The reasons are as follows: 1. Zhang Liang's family has been the prime minister of Korea for generations and he is die-hard loyal to Korea. Even if he personally wanted to serve the Qin Dynasty, the Qin Dynasty would not be able to trust him 2. Zhang Liang planned and attempted to assassinate Qin Shihuang and was a wanted criminal. How could Hu Hai appoint him as an official? His feelings for Qin Lu were just a decoration. Hu Hai agreed but the ministers would not agree Even if the author really wanted to write about Han ministers serving the Qin Dynasty, there were so many famous ministers in the early Han Dynasty, who would be wrong to write about. I am not writing about Zhang Liang, a die-hard rebel... Is he really full of favorability points by Qin Shili's Zhang Liang? In addition, although Zhang Liang was very good-looking during the Qin Dynasty, the best-looking famous official in the early Han Dynasty in history was Chen Ping! "Historical Records" specifically mentions the kind of good looks, "Ping is a beautiful person who grows up (Historical Records)". There is also crayfish, which is an exotic species. It was very interesting when it appeared during the Three Kingdoms period. In short, I hope the author can read more information and stop making such common sense mistakes. Although some people say it's just a novel, why should it be so serious? It's better to read a history book or something like that. However, the frequent occurrence of common sense historical errors really lowers the favorability rating. Some people say that authors of historical online articles have books at home. I think authors need to look up to their peers. In addition, I read that other book friends said that the author updates rarely and slowly. In fact, reading information can also help increase the number of words and inspire inspiration. For example: The male video "Li Jing Ke" is said to be very cool, but it is very natural, and the update is fast... Even for the sake of increasing income, the author should read more. I hope the author can write this book better. The ideas are quite attractive and I like it very much. But I hope the author uses his imagination to a better level. Come on~ ✺◟(∗❛ัᴗ❛ั∗)◞✺