Deserted Island Life in Another World

This woman was a little embarrassed when she appeared. It feels very stiff.

It feels so fake, basically like a game

I don't understand what kind of novel it is written. The author can learn from the setting of the Don't Starve game. I feel that the system of this book is like a full-time nanny taking care of a fool. I hope the author can remove the system prompts and so on.

I feel like the system can be a mother 😌😌

I feel that Han Xue's presence is very low, giving people the illusion that it doesn't matter whether she is present or not. I hope the author adds a little more ink about her to flesh out the character, and whether the protagonist has any sense of precaution and casually gives good things to a woman who doesn't know the origin, and she has no emotional change at all. What's more important is that Han Xue changes so much after eating a fruit, which gives people a sense of missing out. The protagonist has worked hard to accumulate most of the attributes, but she can catch up with most of them after eating a fruit. In addition, Han Xue's writing is very sparse, and he does nothing to help the protagonist take her in. All of these combined are really disgusting, and readers can easily give up after just looking at it.

I feel like the protagonist is so stupid and needs to be taught everything, so he doesn't know how to use his brain. I don't know how he became the manager of a certain department. He must have had an affair with his boss. This should be the early plot, I think it should be like this.

Okay, let's start updating again.

The writing style is relatively immature, and the author is probably a novice. It is best to take a look at it yourself after writing to see if there is anything that feels unnatural. The subject matter is very good. There are relatively few starting points for this type of subject matter. Keep writing.

A bit like the game "The Forest"

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I laughed when I saw Nightcrawler. The nickname of the protagonist in "My Years as a Marvel Superhero" is Nightcrawler.

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The Gerr bugs are mostly green and have four hands. They walk upright and are shy by nature. They do not like to communicate with other creatures. However, if they become friends, they will sacrifice their lives to protect their friends. They like to throw stones during battles and spit when fighting close to each other. The skin of enemies hit by the spray will be red, blistered and feel severe itching. They are omnivorous creatures and like bright colors and all reflective objects. They are between 1.5 And 1.8 Meters tall. In a matriarchal society, female bugmen are in charge of all group affairs. They live deep in natural caves or mines, and often conflict with night crawlers (in order to compete for shelter). A Gerworm sheds its skin six times in its lifetime. It is considered an adult when it sheds its skin for the second time, and it dies three to four months after the sixth time. The lifespan of a Gerr bug is between 50 and 65 years old. Some long-lived people can live to be between 70 and 78 years old, but most bug people do not live to be 45 years old. In addition, some Germers can make long spears and short spears. Because they are born with four hands, the spears thrown by a small group of Germers will cover a large area. Therefore, do not underestimate this creature that seems to be easy to bully.