The Hidden Dragon on the Path to Immortality

I've read Chapter 102 of the novel. The following describes some prejudices against immortality novels: 1. Immortality novels about skills, magical powers, secrets, souls, and consciousness. Kung Fu is the refining and absorption of earth aura, demonic energy, yin energy and other energy and stores it in the Dantian. The quality of a Kung Fu is determined by the efficiency of absorption, refining and storage; Spells and magical powers release the energy stored in the body through specific magic arts (advanced magic powers can communicate with the aura of heaven and earth to produce greater power); Certain meridians are specially strengthened. When the secret technique is released, a large amount of energy in the Dantian will pass through these strengthened meridians. Forcibly releasing the unique secret techniques of other techniques will cause damage to the meridians; Take the human race, the soul includes three souls and seven souls. The soul of the monks absorbs the spiritual energy of the world and is nourished, and gradually becomes stronger as the cultivation level increases; The soul is a manifestation of ability emitted through the power of the soul. Let's talk about some wording issues in this novel, hoping to find common ground while reserving differences: Fellow Taoist article 1. The word "element" is used extensively. I feel that the word element is better used in Western fantasy novels. Fellow Taoist is setting the protagonist to absorb the spirit of heaven and earth. To practice with Qi, why don't fellow Taoists use fire-attributed auras, water-attributed auras... Fire-attributed auras, water-attributed auras... ("Burning Heaven Art" absorbs fire-attributed auras or fire-attributed auras; observing the fluctuations of auras here through spiritual consciousness, there are monks fighting here, and the fire and water spiritual powers are extremely confusing). 2. Does tearing the talisman to release it hurt the status of the article in similar novels? I think it is better to release the talisman described by other Taoists with a small amount of mana and spiritual consciousness. 3. Taoist friend uses the unit of length better. It's good that there is no meter. 4. The time unit is a bit off, but the interest can be used in seconds? For small periods of time, a cup of tea (15 minutes), a stick of incense (30 minutes), etc. 5. I hope fellow Taoists will use less modern vocabulary.

It's really a bit frustrating. This book is really good. It is a good source of food. It is really good in the early stage of cultivating immortals. But the writing really got a bit worse later on. First of all, how should I put it, the heroine issue. When I saw the male protagonist rejecting the female co-star in the early stages, I thought there would be no female protagonist in this book. After all, the protagonist's previous attitude was single-minded. But when I saw the female protagonist tag, I wondered if it had a single female protagonist. But later on when the female protagonist confessed to the male protagonist, the male protagonist half-heartedly agreed? What about the protagonist's desire for Tao? The women who have been with the protagonist basically have a good impression of the protagonist (except for the current heroine). The protagonist is still scolding himself for being so popular with women? Author Do you know where I often see this plot? Long Aotian's refreshing article... Secondly, this heroine is really a failure. At first, I thought the author wanted to create a route where we don't know each other. But to be able to be together after fighting to this level in the book is really amazing👍🏻. It's basically equivalent to almost cutting off each other's path, and then getting together. It's not like we wouldn't know each other without fighting, right? . There is also a real problem with the description of women in this book. Those who follow the protagonist are basically good and will not cheat the protagonist, and some are even silly and sweet. Those who follow others are vicious. There are also a few chapters dedicated to describing a woman who killed a senior brother who liked her and risked his life to protect her, for the sake of infrastructure. Not to mention what the author wants to describe, I just want to ask what is the purpose of inserting this when the protagonist is in danger? These are not the most uncomfortable things, there are even more uncomfortable ones... The plot of the protagonist bringing up girls, author, think about how many girls he brought up? How many times did you bring it? How many men helped? OK, actually these are not problems. There are too many male videos like this on Qidian. Com. The key point is that I came to see the protagonist cultivate himself as an immortal, not to see him take care of girls every day. There have been several times where the protagonist has taken care of a girl and kept her behind to let the girl get away. Although the author means trading with each other, I don't think it's worth it. How many times have the girls brought by the protagonist been effective? It's just a mascot, and it has to share resources with the protagonist. When encountering a powerful enemy, the protagonist still has to cut off the queen, absolutely. Later on, the protagonist's own logic collapsed. The female protagonist snatched a medicinal plant from the male protagonist, but the male protagonist's medicinal ingredients were still complete, but the age of the medicinal herbs was different. However, the male protagonist became suspicious again, and was afraid that others would know that the male protagonist's medicinal ingredients would harm him, so he just didn't take it out. I thought about practicing it on my own. In the end, I practiced it and passed the elixir base building. However, there were sequelae and I may not be able to form elixirs. OK! He suddenly screamed and blamed the heroine for snatching his medicinal materials, which made him like this. Not to mention that the protagonist practiced the elixir himself. There was an alchemy master beside him, but because he was suspicious of others, he made some insinuations and came to practice the elixir half-knowingly. What's more, you choose what you eat? Why is the heroine to blame? What about logic? I have only seen this kind of logic from the protagonist in the villain Long Aotian, but I have seen it in the protagonist. The author has been conveying to us that the protagonist Gou is cautious. But this is really the first time I see Gou being so high-profile and cautious to the point of cheating himself. Every time something happens that pushes the protagonist to be cautious, to be cautious where he shouldn't be, and not to be cautious where he should be. It's really a bit strange. There are still some problems, such as the irrationality of the Lingshi currency system, which I won't go into. How can I put it, the book is a good book, but I really feel that the author is not written by the same person as the author at the front and the back. Although there are small loopholes in many things in the front, but because the author's plot and writing style are good, I don't care about it. After all, I am here to read the book, not to find faults. But I really can't write it later. Various bugs get bigger and bigger as they are written, to the point where they cannot be ignored.

Why are there no investment options? What a pity

The first new book, worth reading, Haoyu Zhenxian, I feel that the next book, Mortals, can be read

The pace is too slow, almost 300 chapters have been written, and the protagonist has not yet established a foundation. No matter how amazing and stunning a group of Qi-trainers and foundation-builders are, and no matter how full of intrigues they use, it is just a fight in a kindergarten. The more detailed it is, the funnier it becomes. Wouldn't it be better to upgrade and jump out of the fish pond as soon as possible?

It feels funny to write about a large demonic sect massacring hundreds of thousands of Qi practitioners. Have you ever seen a country that doesn't have enough resources to kill its own people? It's okay if you kill secretly, but you kill openly. If you haven't finished killing all the rogue cultivators, how long can your sect survive without fear of others' revenge?

It was so poorly written that I was dumbfounded. It was so weird that I still don't know what level of Qi training the protagonist has.

Isn't a novel with one million words and no foundation unfinished? ? ? ? ? There is no chance that it won't end badly. . . . . I got 7 million words to become a god. If it doesn't end well, I'll eat it up (15 million words to complete at a normal pace)

I hope you don't rely entirely on cheats.

It seems good from the comments, and it already has over 150 chapters. I decided to give everyone a taste of the poison, read some and say some. Read enough chapters to draw a conclusion. 😁