I Became an NPC in the Martial Arts Paradise

After reading Chapter 60, the setting and world view are very good, but the author made the protagonist a useless buffoon, always thinking about obscenity, and repeating the same story four or five times... The plot is also driven by unexpected plots. After the protagonist knew that he was an NPC, he kept emphasizing that he wanted to be a real person outside, and the slogan was "6". I was dumbfounded...

Why can't I open the website on my computer?

The first chapter is so fun and the author has a lot of imagination.

I feel that the writing at the beginning is very simple, which may dissuade some people, but the further you go, the better, and the story starts to become interesting. Come on, author, I hope to finish the book.

The writing is capable, full of suspense, exciting story, and humorous. The new novel definitely has a future, so keep going. The acting is so brilliant, I am envious and jealous.

How come no one has discovered such a beautiful book?

The writing is great, and I feel like the world view will be huge.

The author doesn't care what some people say, just have confidence in yourself. I think this book is well written, quite good, and extraordinary.

I think it's much better than many books written by the masters of Qidian.

For those who are pursuing novels, the results should not be so disastrous. I couldn't stand it after reading more than a hundred chapters. After all, I am old, but I still want to support the author. I haven't devoted myself to it for so long, and I still have ideas. It is better than those who used the same old methods in 9012. But now that your writing skills are not good, I feel that your subsequent books should be okay.

It's been a long time since I've seen such a well-written novel.

The most exciting thing about the divine eagle is the dragon knight

I am an old bookworm. This book is very comfortable to read. I support the author.

Very nice! 😭I haven't seen a book like this for a long time

I feel like the author needs to improve his control over the characters... Or avoid it a little bit. I feel like the writing is a little awkward. But this is not a criticism. I hope the author can continue to work hard 😁 All the votes will be given to you.

You can still persist in what you like most even when others don't like you! It's not easy!

Chapter 329: Hundreds of times, delicate and full ideas... How could it be him?

The brand new Wang Wei is more cute, lively and cute! Wei Yunxiao, Wu Guangsheng - the names are fashionable and appropriate, with ancient charm, and they are read concisely and brightly. What's more, Feng Fei's writing is as flowing as clouds, neat and generous, making clouds with the backhand and rain with the hand! The characters are interesting, the dialogues are lively, and the plot is full of twists and turns. It's very interesting! Pleasure! Follow your heart's desires!

I've read other people's books before, so I'm going to build one for fun. If you are interested, you are welcome to participate 😃 The format is as follows: 6 points, except for 1 and 2 which are required, the others are optional. Depending on the content, the author's preferences and the plot arrangement, the book may become: Low-level supporting role (simply showing his face) 🙂, mid-level supporting role (killed with a move) 💀, high-level supporting role (appearing at least twice) 🤭, important role (having a certain influence) 😏, and core role ✌️. Format 1. Name: 2. Gender: 3. Character: 4. Martial arts: 5. Martial Arts: 6. Introduction:

How should I put it, the ideas are pretty good, but the writing is a bit not good enough. In addition, it is very important to update this kind of imaginative book, 2-3 chapters every day, and it cannot be just a word count or an excessive plot. Your daily updates must reveal a little bit of imaginative content, whether directly or indirectly. Like you now, you can't catch up anymore because there is no sense of expectation every day. I believe that there are many book lovers who choose to be a book lover, which will lead to a decline in performance and then death. The author plans a little bit, and the daily updates are guaranteed to be attractive, so that readers will have the patience to follow.

I leave a section for talking and doing things, forcing me to forget and not being able to remember them. It's all about what will happen in the future. I like forcing suspense the most. After reading hundreds of chapters, I didn't push the escape line very far. They are all branch lines in the paradise. Can someone clean it up for me?

The setting of this book is really good, but the author can't write it well. I hope the author can write better as he writes.

I like this book, very much

Is it over like this? After finishing the original version, I always feel empty. The initial setting is very innovative but the author's writing power cannot support it. The extension of the plot in the later period did not attract many readers. Maybe this book is just the author's whim. I just want to say it is a pity.

It is a good book that has been buried

It can only be said that radish and cabbage have their own preferences, just like I found this book after a lot of effort. Different works have different writing styles. As long as the logic is correct, there is nothing to complain about. It is normal to change a book if it does not suit your taste. I think it's written very naturally

Come on, look forward to the new work 😁

Oops, I accidentally finished your book again, please fill it in slowly 😅

The creativity is great, but the plot of the game is a pain in the ass, with all the abrupt twists and turns, forcing plot kills and life extensions. The game script is a mess and cannot stand up to scrutiny. The protagonist's thoughts are inexplicable and not like a normal person. Reasoning to obtain information and normal game plot arrangements are confusing, and the setting of the martial arts game world is imperfect. It is said to be a paradise world, but it actually feels unreal... Oh, what a pity for such an amazing creation.

There are too many loopholes in the setting. The real-life game time ratio felt wrong at the beginning. The game itself is obviously real and not the time ratio in the virtual space. And such a setting really seems to have a lot of loopholes~ The novel is actually pretty good, and the author's writing is okay, but it's just too monotonous. After reading dozens of chapters, it feels very fake. It's less interesting than a single-player game, and the settings for the robots are very rigid. You have to change hardware to practice martial arts. It immediately made me feel that the upper limit of the protagonist was blocked. Even though I knew that the protagonist could definitely be upgraded in other ways, my motivation to continue reading became smaller! ! !