The Sword Alone Reigns Eternal

Tianxiufeng is responsible for the appearance 😊

The leader of Tianxiu Peak, Yun You, who sounds stern but is actually very protective of his shortcomings, is heartbroken for Chang Xi, and his figure is plump and hot... It's so bad that it makes your heart beat ❤️

Q version Chang Xi hopes everyone likes it 🤭

Congratulations on getting it on the shelves. I plan to fully order it. This is my first fully ordered book. The author must keep it up.

This book really has the potential to become a god. Although I have only read twenty chapters, I only need to ensure the quality of the rest, not to overeat and not to finish. Personally, I think it is very beautiful, the environment description is very good, and it has a strong sense of picture and immersion. The characters have distinct personalities, and everyone has their own characteristics. The ending can definitely be made into a TV series

It seems that you are someone who wants to write a book seriously. I want to give you some advice. Character dialogues and monologues are the biggest shortcomings of your article. The flaw in the language description greatly hinders the overall level of the article. It is recommended that you carefully read the dialogues and monologues of your characters. There are a lot of redundant words, dramatic vernacular, and imprecise words and phrases, so it sometimes smells like a running account. This is a lack of your writing skills or vocabulary reserve. There is also a relationship between the character's speaking style and the character's image and background. The character's language should be suitable for the character. Language description also shapes the character's image. The setting you give to the character will in turn determine what your character should say and how he should say it.                 ,,,, Then at this time, a certain behavior of a junior in the Qi Lian realm made the master you set say: This kid is so terrifying, it made him take a breath; your master was shocked and said, "What, the Qi Lian realm can actually do this?" In this way, your verbal description creates a fussy character about your master. It conflicts with the calmness you set. This is called a mismatch between language and characters. If there is too much contrast between the character setting and the actual character image created by the language, the article will have a typical sense of stupidity and poisonousness. The severity of this feeling now depends on the magnitude of the contrast. It seems like you didn't notice this.

I finally had some free time during the holiday, and I also reread what I had missed before. I could feel the subtle changes in Dongfang, but to be honest, I didn't expect that Dongfang could persist until now. It is really amazing. It is said that there are very few authors who have discovered a god. Many big writers have finished writing the first book, and the traffic of the second book has begun to explode. I will brag that you have the qualifications to become a god. Give it a try first and keep up the good work 😏

The graphics are full of visuals, and the writing skills are not to mention. Even the ordinary fight with Huang Shangxian without the use of immortal magic looks extremely real.

Give a reward to the helmsman🤓🤓

For the sake of IG and the author, I give you all the monthly ticket recommendations😁