Welcome to the Adventure World After Ragnarok

I've been updating my writing since I came back. I stopped by to take a look. I feel like my writing is getting better and better. I'm a lot unfamiliar with it.

A group of people got into a fight in a hot pot restaurant. Customer: As the owner of the hot pot restaurant, why didn't you stop them? Boss: The customer is God. How dare we mortals participate in the battle of gods? Customer: What if they don't pay? Boss: Have you seen Twilight of the Gods?

Haier, organized the Army of the Undead

I feel like the introduction is not good. It would be better if the readers can simply and clearly understand what the book is about.

When I first read your "Soul Source Project", I was moved by the sentence "I'm just a weed that happened to take root here". Later, I didn't feel that touching anymore This book is the same, the writing can't move people I don't know how to write to move people, I can only tell you What moves me 1. Touching lines, such as the one above 2. Descriptions that arouse emotions 3. Plots, such as cowards dying generously, this also depends on the description 4. Conflicting characters, such as the famous Pagliacci joke 5. Imagination

Eight mistakes and eight mistakes..._(:з∠)_Much better than me! The author is waiting for you to take off_(:з∠)_

Let me correct you. In both Greek mythology and Norse mythology, hell is guarded by a vicious dog. However, in Norse mythology, it is a vicious dog that bleeds blood. In Greek mythology, it is a well-known three-headed dog. This... It's probably wow's fault. Who asked them to design Gaom into a three-headed model? Just kidding, it's my fault that I didn't check the real information later, and I was not prepared enough for such a low-level clerical error. I'm very sorry <(_ _)> I will pay attention to it in the future and try to avoid such low-level mistakes. Thanks again to the book friend Jiu Miao Qingjing Xianjun for his correction.