My Elves

There is a reason why the protagonist has a low IQ, which will be discussed later.

How should I put it? Although I know that the author deliberately downplays the influence of pig's feet in his previous life, it is difficult to get involved when looking at a precocious primary school student's pig's feet! After all, I am an adult reader, but if I read the update, I just want to say, come on, author, and see you soon

The console was not written as a rebirth. The emotional scene was pretty good.

Ash's Ninja has abandoned several owners before 😅

After it was released, I became more and more obsessed with it, and I didn't know what the main line wanted to express. The spiny tail worm plot before it was released was honestly very disgusting. The author wanted to highlight the real world, so I couldn't bear it. Then there was the ultrasonic larvae that burrowed underground, and the earthquake ultrasonic larvae of Swampert was unscathed, just because it was floating? This is called the real world. Later, the protagonist and two invincible legendary elves were captured by the Marine Team! It's really awesome. You can just brush Daiwu in front of Gardevoir, and add a sniper tree owl here. As a result, the trainer was captured by a King of Heaven! The real world is too real, the real world is so scary!

The protagonist's memory and Xiaoyao's memory are undisputed failures at the beginning. The design is cumbersome and useless (the most important thing is to reduce the intimacy, Xiaoyao is 90-60). Most of the plots are pretty good, but the death of elves and eating elf meat are really poisonous, especially the spiny tail before it is put on the shelves. It wants to be the protagonist elf, but the protagonist is I know that in the early days, Scallion Duck and Slowpoke were used as advanced ingredients for Pokémon. Bobo also had a setting that preyed on insect-type elves. I also know that the author likes a more realistic elf world. Deliberately highlighting the law of the jungle can indeed be refreshing and unconventional. The question is, do readers like this kind of thing? Does the author make money? Author: Sorry, I generate electricity with love! Sorry to bother you, the author is awesome! (Shock!) To use a sentence from Suzumiya Haruhi Kyon, "Anyone who seeks reality in an illusory world has a problem with their brains." Of course you can write novels for fun, but for money and to make a living. . . The author is advised not to let himself go too far. This is not a medieval war or a biohazard. Most of the people who write PMs are looking for childhood and "mentally retarded". PM is Zi Gongxiang, Zi Gongxiang! The setting is a matter of time. Is there really a brainless person who would make an episode where Xiaozhi catches wild green caterpillars when he is hungry or Bobo disembowels them and roasts them? If you really dare to broadcast it like this, the entire PM animation will be removed from the shelves by all TV stations! Have you noticed that the animation mentioned the setting of eating Pokémon only once and not even a single frame of it? You are probably the first PM fan author to deliberately "focus on description" in such a place that makes readers feel uncomfortable. Especially the stinging caterpillar plot before it was released on the shelves deliberately amplified this maliciousness. If you subscribe to it for more than 3,000 yuan, I will take your last name. Wouldn't you like to write a more normal fanfic? There are many solutions, right? Deliberately ignoring, there are even many ideas for artificial meat used by various fans and officials, right? PM The weak and the strong are just talking about an unpopular setting that is too small and cannot be made smaller, but you wrote it like a key setting. Please be human, right? Too much money and really no place to spend it, right?

It's really better not to let the protagonist awaken his memory. In Chapter 21, Xiaoyao helped the protagonist. It's okay to thank her. Even if the protagonist transforms into a lolicon, I don't think it would matter. But looking at the reaction of the protagonist, he blushed and hesitated. How old was the protagonist in his previous life? There were no little girls in his relatives, and he didn't know how to coax children. This made me too embarrassed. It may be my personal reason, because I brought up the sisters of several of my relatives.

After reading more than 20 chapters, two people have lived together, and the protagonist still has sex with an underage girl. It is disgusting.

The hang-up is so big and there is no sign of collapse. It's amazing ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

May I ask from which chapter does the protagonist of Big Boss become a loser? I read a hundred chapters, and I can't see any growth. It's just a lazy and willful travel of a high-quality child of a few years old. There is no training spirit at all, no training spirit at all, no learning knowledge at all, no attitude to become stronger. I don't solve the problem when I find it. Did I misunderstand something? In fact, this is a story about an elf cultivating a trainer? I think it is reasonable for the protagonist to die at the hands of his own elf if this continues. No one wants to be controlled by a waste all the time. This is an insult to the strong. Even the protagonist, who can get up by himself, get dressed and eat, was drunk and used hypnosis during the exam. What is the meaning of the protagonist's existence? It's not cute at all, so what are you selling? Stupid?

Is the protagonist's mind at the level of a college student? How come the interaction with Xiaoyao is like that of a primary school student, and someone with a mental age of about 20 years old always blushes when being together with someone who is 11 or 12 years old?

I was a little curious after reading the comments that it was very powerful and didn't collapse. After taking a look, I was so poisoned that I died. . .

Brother author, I finally know why you threw yourself into the street? It started well at the beginning, but later on in the elf test, did Gardevoir listen to the protagonist or did he just listen to the pig horns? Do you think intimacy is just for show? And have you ever seen an elf listen to other people's instructions? I guess I made a mistake. Goodbye.

To put it bluntly, I feel sorry for the spiny tail worm, why bother with this picture before it is put on the shelves?

Don't you think you wrote the elves too weakly? The mythical beasts are dozens of levels high, and they can still injure the protagonist on the beach. The mythical beasts were directly injured by a gas bomb with unknown levels. The quasi-gods fell asleep and were not alert at all. You said that the mythical beasts have changed qualitatively. There are three mythical beasts. Are you afraid of adding a few quasi-gods to one mythical beast? I think your setting is very problematic. The gap between the divine beast level and the quasi-god level is so small. A few elites can kill the champion. What's the point? Training is still meaningful? And don't you need to fill the hole? There is no news about Xiaoyao's cousin?

Reading this book makes me feel a little bit mentally depressed.

The brain-dead protagonist, and his brain-dead max-level elf, might as well write about the protagonist transforming into a max-level boss and parachute into the world, and then integrate into the world and change the world. You have to start from scratch, the writing is not good, and the plot is very poisonous. Goodbye

How to write about Xiaoyao Zhizi. . . . Ouyang appears once in a few chapters, who is the protagonist now. . . . Alas, it doesn't look good. Goodbye to the author. . . . . .

With this IQ, I can't hold on after reading 50 chapters. I saw in the comments that the protagonist has a split personality. Damn it, you are so good at this. You split into a 3-year-old child? Farewell

I can't stand it anymore, it's not that the book is bad... I just saw that shortly after the husband came back, the protagonist was training giant ants, and a spiny tail wanted to be the protagonist's elf, so it jumped out to fight the protagonist, and was seriously injured. I hope the protagonist will treat it, but unfortunately the protagonist didn't understand what he meant and left, and then the seriously injured spiny tail was eaten after the protagonist left... It was very uncomfortable to watch here, I still like the less real world of Pokémon... I wish the author will get better and better

You are an invincible type. People who read elf literature that are good to read are basically from the cultivation type. There are very few people who like this type.

Although it's quite confusing: But I haven't jumped yet. The author is actually quite good. However, I feel that since the protagonist has traveled through the past, he has not recovered his memories in the past ten years or so. Later, the memories have been restored, but the protagonist's handling of events and emotions is still as immature as a child. Moreover, he has suffered losses not once or twice, and has not grown. I feel that he is not a time traveler, but a native who has obtained the memories of the time travellers. It's a bit poisonous!

I was quite surprised at first. I wrote more than 600 chapters, but no one read it. It turns out that my skills are not good, but I use love to generate electricity. I am very optimistic about you, but I stopped reading the book. It is a bit too toxic. Say goodbye.

I suggest you not to watch it, or it belongs to a criminal group, I found out, no wonder the writing of the novel is so bad, and it still feels a little guilty.

Can you please not write something about master and master? It's very uncomfortable to read. Would it be okay if the character number of water is written as trainer? Nowadays, people who write elf novels take the protagonist too seriously. Return to the master and be more equal.

The author must be part of a criminal group.

I have a headache. To be honest, I stopped watching when I saw the protagonist being captured by the water fleet. It was so boring! 🤫

After reading too many so-called "real" articles, I want to ask everyone a question. If a little minion can easily kill a strong man with some kind of poison or a sneak attack, if a group of people can defeat a world champion with some so-called insidious means such as some kind of trap, then what's the point of becoming stronger? Why can he just plot against me? The champion-level elf in my hand can't cut off his dog's head in three seconds.

I feel like you're the idiot protagonist here

The foreshadowing is too long, I suggest you start reading from Chapter 8