Amazing Storytelling

It's too slow-paced and not exciting. I don't believe that the author can have the passion to write six to seven million words with this result. Then either there will be cheating in the middle to speed up the progress or it will be an unfinished eunuch? Why bother when you always like to generate electricity?

I'm trying to persuade you to quit. I can't stand the plot. I thought the word count was okay🤮

It feels like you, the author, are up to something. You are leading the timeline to the timeline where the Sentinel robots wiped out all mankind. It feels like half of the human race has already been wiped out before the purple potatoes arrive. It always feels like the author is slowly pitting superpowers against ordinary people.

The author's writing style is good, and it feels like he's telling the story eloquently, but it's not that satisfying. . The protagonist's strength is obviously not very high. Without wearing the Edman armor, he was beaten up by several clones and ran home. Even if he wore the armor, he could only fight with a few sidekick mutants. It has been more than 100 chapters. The protagonist's strength has not grown. He clearly knows that the sunset is snapping and he doesn't work hard. Improvement, without even the slightest idea of improving strength; Knowing the direction of the plot, revealed it to Gu Yi, but meaninglessly pretending to others, and selective amnesia, just to not change the plot; Traveling through two worlds at the beginning, and in The soul has been wandering in the universe for who knows how many thousands of years. In more than 100 chapters, Goldfinger can only make a few diamonds. However, Goldfinger's only ability to make money is not reflected in the article at all. His parents are working for others to do research, and they can be regarded as day walkers who are close to each other in life and death. The base is still the same garbage dump as the original work, which indirectly led to the death of Sun Walker's father. Isn't the protagonist not worried about money? Diamonds are not easy to sell, but as the original capital, coupled with special abilities and knowledge of the plot, it is no problem to set up a group company and build his own team, right? As for going to a mafia bar to buy information, will it make you look sexy? . More than 100 chapters, my own strength has not improved, my influence has not been established, and the plot has not changed. Except for the green rubber man and collecting some original girls around me, I don't know what the protagonist is doing or what he wants to do. .

I haven't seen any progress after traveling through time for more than 10 years.

The protagonist's golden finger has no effect at all, so it's better not to write about it.

Okay, I understand why there are so few recommendations. The author deliberately made the protagonist a loser, and also called it the real world. This is just a novel. If readers can't be drawn into it and there's no sense of enjoyment, where will the readers come from?

An ordinary story with an ordinary protagonist, as plain as water, goodbye

That's why the author doesn't let the protagonist practice to become stronger just to beg for help, so that he can recruit more supporting characters and create more plot...

Judging from the protagonist's IQ and plot development, if the battle gets more intense, he may die from an unknown AOE. He is very talented and likes to cause trouble. At the beginning, the younger sister was outwitting and causing trouble. The protagonist pretended to be cool and thought he was very strong. Later, he found out that several clone soldiers were fighting back and forth. After finishing it, I still found that I had a cold, so I had no choice but to go home, take off my armor and take cold medicine! ! ! I am convinced by this routine! Use love to generate electricity. 🙂

You go to Antarctica and still catch a cold, and yet you claim to be good at magic? Don't you know that in the comics, Juan Fu usually eats some weird magical creatures~is he afraid of the cold? Afraid of heat? It's better to pretend to be dead at home~ The story is great, and the logic is also great~~ Am I asking too much? Clam

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Author, you are writing about Marvel fans, not youth idols. What are you doing as a 10-year-old rookie? I don't have the guts to do it but just add it to the incident. It's just fun for the fans to watch. Don't talk about talent. What's the point of writing a protagonist if pig's feet don't have talent✍🏻

I have been reading pirated copies before, but now I have subscribed to pay for all the chapters. It is very interesting. I hope the author can keep writing!

I'm looking for a book, but I haven't read it yet, but brother, you are a bit miserable 😅😅. It has more than one million words and only a few hundred recommendations 😰😰😰

There is a reason why this book is rarely recommended.

He has no ability, no intelligence, no fighting ability, and no changing plot. Isn't it good for him to go to the movies? Isn't comics delicious?

It's not fun, the plot is too confusing, the main character has no purpose, and it's just a mess.

The Justice League is much stronger than the Women's League, and even Superman can move the planet! It's like killing a god for fun if Batman is not prepared! Fire Storm's attack power is infinite! Green Lantern has an entire army! Wonder Woman has an entire pantheon of gods behind her! The Flash travels through time with ease! I don't understand what the Women's Federation is comparing it to?

I have been reading fan fiction for many years, and I don't think part-time authors can manage such a huge world view. There are a lot of Marvel articles at the starting point, 99% of them are about eunuchs, and the rest are too much to write. Marvel itself has too many heroes, and the world view is too big. There is only one answer to it. Most of the new books are written by students. It is actually harder to write for beginners. Most authors don't even have outlines, so it's hard to find good books.

She knew that the other person was a bad person, but still asked her brother to help an unknown person. Didn't she think that this matter would threaten her brother's life? And since you want to help others, why don't you go yourself and let others go? Isn't this kind of person who uses his own words to make others risk their lives disgusting and disgusting? Why do you think she is cute? What use are younger siblings to older siblings? If you have something on your mind, you will only tell it to your friends, right? It turns out that someone else is vying for your parental love, and she is not your wife or husband! To be realistic, everything in your home originally belongs to you, but then someone who will not live with you for the rest of your life comes along and robs you of your parental love and takes away the money that originally belonged to you! How did you come to love her? After all, she is destined to have nothing to do with your life in the future. How did you develop the feeling of love for her?

No matter how good the writing is, if you don't read it if there are mutants, why do so many people who write about Marvel like to add mutants? ? ? ? Are you dissatisfied with the fact that the five great gods of the Celestial God Group have too low combat power?

What's going on with this, two books together? Turn to another book every few chapters?

Do you, the author, have a group where you can chat and complain when you have nothing to do?

The writing style of this book is actually quite good. It reads smoothly and refreshingly. Why is the score not so good? ? ? 1 Lack of core excitement 2 The plot lacks ups and downs. The ups and downs are too exciting for readers and can become poisonous points if not careful. However, there should still be things like creating suspense and portraying the enemies as more powerful 3 There are no popular hot spots br>4 The title and introduction of the book lack of attracting points. Changing the "surprise" in the title to "Marvel" will increase the traffic a lot 5. The protagonist's personality characteristics are not outstanding and not obvious 6. It lacks a few Internet novel routines. Some routines are very old-fashioned, but they have been tried and tested 789. . .

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More than 1.5 Million words and just over 1,000 recommendation votes. Why don't you give up after all this effort?

To be honest, I don't really like Marvel fans adding mutants. First of all, the timeline is difficult to figure out. According to the timeline of the Marvel Universe, most mutants were active during World War II. At the beginning of the new century, the Avengers of the Marvel Cinematic Universe realized that all heroes could be linked together in movies and TV shows, which resulted in a lot of bugs. It's just a matter of fan choice. I don't want to take it too seriously. I don't think most authors have the ability to control such a huge world view. The development of the Marvel Cinematic Universe alone can already develop a lot of writing. The first stage of film and television shows can contain a lot of content. There are even the Eternals, Inhumans, Galactus, and the Celestials in the second stage.