Imperfect Artist

You can try to understand it as much as possible before writing, otherwise everything you write will be nonsense.

I can barely read the plot, but I haven't heard any of the songs in it, so the plot feels very awkward.

I basically don't spray when I'm reading a book, unless it's extremely poisonous and is about to get poisonous. I will say a few sentences, but that's just to target the poisonous point. For professional blacks, jealous blacks express strong contempt👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

The novel focuses on warmth, tenderness, warmth, lightness, humor, and adequate food and supplies. Has the author offended someone? Why are there so many people attacking you?

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After reading Chapter 12 so far, I would like to talk about the plot that I think is unreasonable. I can't say it's bad, it's just awkward to watch. First point. Isn't it enough for you to show off that the protagonist brought the resources of a world after traveling through time? Why should you continue to lower the level of the other world? In other words, do you think that the other world's various technologies are more developed than the earth, and the culture and entertainment will not be as good as the earth? Second point. Why do they all start by copying online novels? It's not fast to make money from online novels! Speaking of which, my parents wouldn't support it either! Why can't you contribute articles to magazines and newspapers? Although the money is not much, the results are quick, the investment is small, and you can become famous, and you can talk about it with dignity wherever you go. The third point. It is said that the protagonist was a second-generation demolition guy in his previous life. He owned a house in Shanghai and had an annual salary of one million. But in Chapter 12, why does he look like he has never seen the world? It feels very awkward. The author can change it if he wants to, as long as he has his own ideas.

I saw Chapter 88 and stopped reading the rest. To sum up: the author's writing skills are pretty good, his writing skills are very good, and all kinds of jokes come easily, but the more I read it, the less I like it. The heroine is also well written, but the relationship between friends is too stiff. The protagonist's aura is casual, the protagonist is casual, and then there is a single heroine. This is very abominable. If someone is like this in reality. Like this, that's a scumbag. To put it bluntly, he only thinks about sex without thinking about responsibility. A good man never flirts everywhere. In novels, what is more hateful than a stallion is: giving away girls... So I think for your writing level, if you increase the IQ of the female supporting characters, don't be so nymphomaniac, the quality of the work will be improved a lot! .

What a pity this book could have made a little god! The biggest taboo in writing entertainment articles is to listen to niche songs. Just because you like the author doesn't mean everyone will like it! What kind of songs are there in the early part of this book? I can't really appreciate the feeling of hot songs!

Pei Xinxin's character is really annoying. To be honest, no one can really accept that their best friend covets their significant other and can continue to be such a good friend without any grudges. Even a fool can understand that I can't let others take my things away, let alone a fool.

There are obviously so many better ones to choose from, not to mention that Naruto can't reflect reality, and it obviously has a neon flavor. In addition, after all, in China, reading comes first. If everything has an educational meaning, it will be easier to gain recognition. What does Naruto have? For example, would it be good to combine "Afanti" and "Smart Ikkyu" and change the background to ancient China? For example, the long-ago "Flower Fairy" will introduce a flower language in almost every episode. Will girls like it very much? Even "Saint Seiya" introduced many constellations. What's more, the author can also brag. After watching this animation, the number of tourists in Athens increased greatly, and many people were looking for whether there was really a holy place hidden there... Finally, anyway, the author also said that the entertainment in this world is relatively poor, so it can be assumed that the basketball in the world is all based on the European style, without those wonderful individual performances. Then a super revised version of "Slam Dunk" (which also involved tactics) was released, and people in the men's basketball team watched it and found that many of the techniques and tactics in it can be used in actual combat. And then helped the men's basketball team achieve breakthrough progress in the Olympics or World Championships... The above is what I mean by reflecting reality. Is it more satisfying than Naruto?

I'm speechless after reading Chapter 19. The agent you hired is so rubbish. Just because she's beautiful, you won't refuse regardless of her ability or not. Holy Mother, book reviews are just for expressing your own opinions.

In the past, if a girl took the initiative to talk to me on the street, she would definitely be selling Amway or something. I met a girl on the bus today. She was wearing headphones. Noticing that I was looking at her, she took the initiative to ask me, "Would you like to listen together?" I happily took an earphone and put it in my ear, only to hear "Sir, have you heard of Amway..." W Click on my profile picture, thank you. . . .

To be honest, I don't know why I don't like the heroine in the back, especially the one who cries as soon as she and the main character get married. She does this every time. Otherwise, you can just refuse it. It's okay if it doesn't work before marriage.

Please all handsome guys and beauties 😊 tell me some heroines. ?

To be honest, the writing is much better than some great writers, and the three views are correct, unlike those novels that pounce on women when they see them. It's very good, come on! ! ! ! I, the pirated dog, hereby swears that this book will be released on the shelves at the beginning of summer! ! !

The author gave the protagonist too much to do, which made me feel exhausted. The heroine was not very successful either. I feel like the author was supervised by his girlfriend when writing this article?

So there was already WeChat and WeChat red envelopes in the early stage? ? You write the protagonist again and pioneer mobile payment

The world's richest man, who is also a superstar, still lives the same life as a porn star. No matter how you look at it, it feels awkward

Regardingthe two chapters just published, could you please stop describing them in a negative and prophetic way... This is really a taboo. No matter how happy and warm the next description is It's hard to get invested in it. To exaggerate, it would give people a feeling of madness before the end of the world - that is a kind of sadness. It's like "Bright Sword". I have already seen the ending (original work). If I go back to watch the battles in it and watch them imagine their happy life after establishing G, I will always feel awkward because I already know the tragic ending. There is no way to change the general trend, so the more joyful you are, the more unbearable it is ╮（＿）╭ To be honest, it's not that you can't use prophetic words, but it's best not to use negative ones, unless it's the kind of sadistic book (눈_눈)

What the heck is it to write about a trainee and write so many chapters...

Is Zhu Xian really good-looking? Why do the pig's feet in every novel plagiarize this novel? 🌝🌝🌝🌝I haven't seen it and I don't feel anything about it.

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I finished reading it in one go, it's pretty good, good cheers, author!

Yes, it's okay. I've been reading for ten years. I highly recommend it.

The food in urban entertainment articles is really good