Treasure Fishing Devil

I found that you are very demanding? There are various faults. This book is countless times better than those poisonous articles. The setting is a bit hasty, but this is just a novice village. As long as the power system is enlarged and the content is filled in when changing the map during the plot assessment, this book will definitely become popular.

What a shame for such a great setting. . . The character of the protagonist is unstable, the changes are too hasty, and the routine is still vulgar, but fortunately it is an invincible novel. However, if you think about this kind of setting, carefully carve out the plot and dungeon direction, dig out all the unreasonable bugs, and make the protagonist's character reasonable and distinct, then I'm afraid you will want to become a god in a book. . . What a pity

I thought you, the author, wanted to be a eunuch

It is very beautiful and novel, and the shortcomings mentioned in the book review section are not too serious.

After reading less than ten chapters, the protagonist always shows some inexplicable expressions in inexplicable places. Chapter 2: Is Qingxiao possessed by a ghost? What's so funny? There is also the unscrupulous smile in Chapter 5. I didn't count to 13 in my heart. You have cultivated all the way to the point where you were not eaten to death by the bugs before you encountered them, but they were swollen to death. Chapter 8: He was joking and indifferent, and then he was surprised, and his face suddenly changed. Not being able to make appropriate expressions according to the plot gives people a very bad reading experience. It is recommended that the author skip describing the characters' expressions, at least they won't make mistakes.

Don't change your character in online writing. I'm not mocking you. Most online writers are simply incapable of writing. Forcing a change will only lead to the collapse of the character's personality.

The toad eating swan flesh (this thing is not in the same style as the others), the little match girl, Little Red Riding Hood, the emperor in new clothes, Cinderella, the farmer and the snake (this is not in the same style as the others), the determined tin soldier emmm, these are the seven. Actually, if I insist on talking about it, the main character is an ugly duckling. He turns into an ugly duckling with the Child-Returning Pill. He picks up the Swan Skill and turns into a swan.

It's a very good book, why doesn't anyone read it?

The writing is quite good, that is, all the girls are pretty, beautiful, and have arrogant and silly personalities. It's a bit embarrassing to write

I just saw it, it would be good to read a book review? (*๓´╰╯`๓)♡ Emmm, the author is very polite😊😊

Author, give me some suggestions. Strengthen the description of the characters. 1: Your background setting is a dangerous environment like the Demon Sea, so no matter how young you are, you will be more mature than today's children. However, in the previous chapters, the behavior of the characters was too childish, or in other words, without any sense of intelligence... It was a bit like the old novice novels. 2: Don't make too many jokes. Ye Guchen, Siniang, Zhao Yuetian... Are too easy to get into trouble. Now that the author's writing is not good enough, try not to make jokes. It's too NC for someone like Zhao Yuetian to keep shouting dissatisfaction... 3: The plot seems too random. For example, the skills and weapons in the gray secret realm are all matching when they come out, but the white secret realm is outrageous... As soon as you eat the pill, you turn into a little duck, and when you turn into a duck, you get the swan fist... Then suddenly there is a duck in a place where there are monsters in the secret realm, and there is no doubt that there is something wrong. It feels too loose, at least the logic is not smooth. 4: Praise the author, although there are many problems. But having the courage to write it yourself is worthy of praise, and this idea is very good. Please keep up the good work. Many people have great ideas, but not enough writing skills. I hope the author can practice his writing skills more.

The content is pretty good, but the plot is a bit erratic and the writing is not better.

The plot and world view are both very good. This is what was written. . A bit naive Lines or something Embarrassing as hell

The protagonist is funny and passionate, but it's a pity that he doesn't have a companion, otherwise the anime would be great.