Yuanshi Heavens

The dark flow is not a problem, but this is the first time I have seen the protagonist who repays kindness with vengeance. After repaying kindness with vengeance, the author wrote a bunch of bullshit to tell the protagonist that he was right and that it was awesome. The overall score of this book is 7\10 points, and the author's score is 404. Vomit

After reading Chapter 30, there is only suppression, no elevation. He has been acting like a fool, and can only be described as mediocre, unable to see the bright spots. The underworld's official articles about cultivating immortality and luck are not immortal, let alone moral.

Putting aside the plot, the author's literary talent is good, and the description of the environment and characters are very touching.

It's simply my favorite. I don't understand that so many people in the book review section don't like you! The character and plot are both good, I like it 👍

The writing is still very good, and I hope to write more exciting ones in the future.

After reading Chapter 15, I disliked it very much and gave up. Goodbye. What I wrote before is okay, but the ideas are too extreme.

Punctuation marks look so uncomfortable. It is obviously unnecessary to add punctuation marks. If you want to use classical Chinese, practice more. Don't add commas every now and then. Some sentences of 7/8 words are abruptly broken into 3/4. Although I don't know what the benefits of this are, it feels so awkward when I read it, a bit like the broken sentences of Gu Yue's Main God's Avenue (I don't know if it is, I kind of forgot it). Everything else is acceptable, but the punctuation is really a little bit poisonous.

What happens next? Is this still the case?

What the hell? Isn't Taizongfu Xun Taichang? Isn't Xun Shang'e the youngest son of Xun Taiyong?

During the entire writing process of the book, the protagonist did not encounter any sunshine. The protagonist has always preached, "I would rather let the world down than let the world let me down", always expressing a selfish idea. There is not a single positive character in the author's book. Everyone only thinks about themselves. No positive energy at all. To be honest, some of the author's views cannot be considered wrong in some cases and can be justified. However, the author made the mistake of generalizing from a partial point of view to a general overview. Thinking that all people are equally dark. Old bookworms can understand, it's a novelty. But Xiaobai really doesn't recommend watching it, as it will affect your mental health. Also, strictly speaking, this book does not conform to socialist values. When there's no fire, it's fine. Once the fire breaks out, there is no way to escape being sealed.

The most annoying Qi Luck Immortal novels, about how dragon energy protects the emperor, and the law does not apply to nobles. Except for the leader, no other novels in this system have a good ending. Even the leader has died recently.

Killing decisively made me laugh. If the man has no grievances, I will just kill him. If the woman wants to kill you, why do you tell her that we have no grievances and no grudges? Why do you want to kill me?

After reading the first dozen chapters, I found that the protagonist is really selfish and selfish. For the sake of profit, he casually kills a stranger who has no conflict or relationship with him to seize the treasure. There is no positive energy at all. It's not too dark, but it's also quite unpleasant. I expect the protagonist to be killed casually by a passing powerful man who doesn't like it, although this is impossible, just because he is the protagonist.

I just read the first chapter. He leaped down more than ten feet, more than thirty meters, more than ten floors high. He was performing martial arts on top. Can he see clearly below?

Abandon the truth, abandon a page, the heavens of Yuanshi, the heavens of Huangting, Xun Shaoyu, Xun Shaoguan? 🤔

There are fifty or sixty long chapters, some cheating, some luck, some treasures, some traveling through the heavens, but the reality is that not a single realm has been broken through 🤭🤭

Bubbling over this book. But I have never been caught with gold. Add gold, add gold, add gold.

It's really sad. Our Lady was hated because she unleashed her kindness without a bottom line and ended up hurting others and herself. Her greatness has turned into a derogatory term, but at least people are still just too kind. Nowadays, a group of "people" are proud of repaying kindness with hatred without a bottom line. They keep the bottom line and are ashamed to repay kindness with kindness and even with hatred. Do you call this kind of normal person a holy mother? Do you think of someone who kills his savior for a piece of copper as a decisive killer, and is proud of it, claiming to be on the moral high ground? Which of the two is more hateful? The protagonist kills a Taoist priest who was kind to his village, and even wants to kill the elder who saved his life. The following group of people actually applauded? It is conceivable that such people are the people who repay kindness with hatred in reality.

I don't believe that the country where the protagonist lives can last for hundreds of years in a world where force is paramount. If you say that you want to fight, you can do it. No one can intervene, even if only one person is left in the end. But it is really not possible in the way you wrote. The mistress manages the family, and those with high talents will be killed as long as they are not her own sons. Those with medium talents will be destroyed with poison. Do you dare to guarantee that the mistress's children will have good talents? Even if you have good talent, you will definitely become a great master? If this is the case in every generation, a country, or a family, in a world where force is paramount, can only survive as long as the founder of the family is alive. Once the ancestor dies, the family will be destroyed. If there is a servant who is stronger than the master in terms of force, he will be directly employed as a wage earner to help the servant. Don't tell me who has set the rules. Rules are laws and can only govern those at the bottom. If the generation of the protagonist is like this from generation to generation, I really want to know how the 800-year continuity of the country came about? The sons of the acting mistress are all geniuses and can all become great masters? That is cultivation, not farming. A worldview and rules without extraordinary power cannot be brought into an extraordinary world where one person is the enemy. You are plotting and plotting, and others are destroying a city with one punch. Who do you think you are? If you kill all the competitors in your son's family, your son will definitely be able to rule the family? Not to mention the countless talents in the outside world, if a son from your family is more talented, and although his resources are not as good as yours, but he is better than your son in other aspects, then when your family is too strong in force and dies of old age, your family will be wiped out with one punch. This kind of thing should not be an accident, right? After all, you just use one or two sons to compare their talents with the rest of the world, how can you compare them? Are all the children of every generation of mistresses talented? Even if you can control your servants, you have no competition? Surrounded by good people or staff? This setting is really poisonous! ! ! The so-called family, whether it is a country, a family, or even a sect, if they dare to play like this, they will definitely be destroyed. Why do many families in ancient China survive for thousands of years, but the country cannot? It's because fighting for the dragon chair is too painful. Adults deal directly with children. The more capable they are, the faster they die. Families are different. There is not so much competition among family heads, and people in the family help each other. Even the real world knows the truth. You are in an extraordinary fantasy world, but you can still create such a country and such a family that can last for hundreds of thousands of years. The basic logic is too confusing! ! !

Tai Shui has been watching for a long time and he is still a waste. He keeps chattering without any deep meaning. I am ashamed of the word Yuanshi.

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 14. As mentioned before, the dynasty is all about those who have the ability. Why, they have been drugged by their mistress since childhood, and those who are disobedient or have high talents are killed. What kind of world is this? ? How come there are still talents this early in the morning? ? Also, in the first world, people failed to resist Wei and offended you. A big kid went to a murderer and gave out a bunch of orders. But I will bear the world and stop asking the world to bear my momentum. In fact, there is no bottom line. As a protagonist with no bottom line, he will be useless after two worlds. I think it is okay to make him a villain. Worst novel I have ever read

Haha, there are a lot of people who agreed, and most of them are trainees. I also laugh. I also admire them for being decisive and decisive in repaying kindness with hatred. Since you all like it so much, why can't you subscribe? Is it possible that you are all little brats with no financial means?

It is said that the protagonist's outlook is not correct and his personality is dark, but kindness is repaid with hatred. I would like to ask, some protagonists in novels with a three-dimensional outlook on life casually destroyed several universes in the later period just to illustrate their own power, but what about the lives in those universes? No one cares about those few cosmic beings. You only see how strong the protagonist is. Then what? I don't know what it means.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore. There were too many descriptions in my mind. Remember, what you are writing is a fairy tale, a commercial novel. It's not a palace novel, it's not a serious literature. The character of the protagonist should be shown through the plot, rather than through various psychological descriptions. The content of more than twenty chapters can be cut by two-thirds, and it can be completed in eight chapters.

The protagonist is useless, the supporting characters are useless, the system is useless, and the three are useless.

The second chapter makes me a little reluctant to read it. In a country that has been inherited for 800 years, even its own geniuses can be killed and no one cares about it. I am curious about how it was passed down. It is not a mortal country that has to fight to the death for the throne. This is a world of high martial arts. There is no one who can really take charge. If you nod, you will inherit according to the rules. Otherwise, you will use the head to earn. According to the current situation, if the geniuses are killed, will one be the successor of the genius? Can this family survive? 800 Years of inheritance can only be a joke

He is decisive in killing, ruthless, and can make himself live well, and will not sacrifice his own interests for some unnecessary feelings (of course this is the protagonist's own feeling, after all, there are always people who don't expect love, friendship, family, as long as they live well)  But isn't a dark novel like this also an invincible novel to a certain extent? Because of the darkness of the protagonist, the person who protects the village lost his life like this? Does he owe the protagonist anything? Isn't this different from being cheated in a game and then getting killed when you enter the game later? It's commonly known as revenge against society. Isn't this childish? Could this be considered as experiencing worldly maturity? If you are an ordinary person in this novel, unable to practice, without power or wealth, if one day your family is suddenly wiped out due to an unreasonable disaster, because a treasure fell on your doorstep, so the protagonist kills and silences for safety reasons, at this time, does anyone still think that the dark flow is great? Can you shout, 'Happy, I like the protagonist who kills decisively like this. Fortunately, the one who comes is not that kind of Holy Mother, otherwise I would have survived'? Maybe those who like the dark flow just like the decisiveness of the protagonist in the dark flow. Do you still think this world is very realistic? I suffered injustice in life and wanted to vent in the novel, so I changed from the victim to the perpetrator, and brought myself into the protagonist. Those people killed by the protagonist were all people who had been unfair to me. In the novel, I sanctioned them, gained the power to change their destiny, and chose to become a new evil dragon. What I learned from childhood to college is that when you are treated unfairly, you should try to fight against this fate, instead of finding someone weaker than yourself and bullying him. What about the protagonist? Those who were killed by him, are they also like this? They also want to read a dark novel, bring themselves into the protagonist, and kill all those who they dislike. I feel that killing people to seize treasures is very similar to the reality of cheating people for money and killing people. I think it's a bit outrageous. "This is reality, reality is like this, are there too many examples like this?" Are there any of those who kill people who are still alive and well like the protagonist? Most of them went to jail, and some were shot. Why only say that some people betrayed their brothers for money and committed murder to prove the connection between the novel and reality? Why not mention that the perpetrators did not have a good end. Is this the same as the novel? On the one hand, we talk about the reality of dark novels. In reality, there are people who stab people in the back. On the other hand, they are only willing to take on the role of the protagonist, and are only willing to be the person who stabs others. They say, "I would rather betray the world than let the world betray me." Isn't he just a robber or a thug? What's the difference? The protagonist is a robber, which is straightforward enough. Because of the dark experiences he had when he was young, he chose to face the world with darkness. Even in anime, in order to whiten the characters, they will add difficulties to him. He was originally innocent and kind, but later became ruthless, but the novel does not. So he is a ruthless robber, with no hard reasons and no blood feud, just for himself. He is an ordinary, standard robber who kills people like crazy. He is the protagonist of the dark stream.

The person who left the message didn't even mention the selfishness and incorrect outlook on the subject. He also brings up bad children. Can children read this book? Are the books by great authors not good? If you hadn't come here specifically to find this book, you wouldn't have seen it. The shortcoming of this book is that it is long-winded and contains all kinds of nonsense. It also has to jump from the perspective of the protagonist to write about the supporting characters. Then the perspective of the protagonist is suspended. After the supporting characters are explained, the anchor of the protagonist is released. It's been over a hundred chapters, and the protagonist doesn't even know what he's going to do. Also, the protagonist has cheats and doesn't practice well. He has to explain some long-winded things every day. In the end, it was impossible to achieve anything by force or by force. When Goldfinger didn't come, he complained about the unfairness of the sky. Hey, he came! I don't practice hard and just play.

This is the second time I read this book. I read fifteen chapters last time and fifty chapters this time. I couldn't stand it anymore. The first point is too watery and a bunch of nonsense. After reading 100,000 words, you will find that there is no plot at all. The second point is that the plot is cliche. Even if the plot is cliche, it is so bad that it makes people have no desire to read it, although I quite appreciate the character of the protagonist. The author should change it. It is really a lot of nonsense. It repeats the same idea. Can't it express the meaning more concisely?

I wouldn't have subscribed if I had known about it. I thought it was a traditional fairy tale novel based on the name, but I didn't expect it to be like this. I couldn't accept it. I gave up the free version before finishing the first twenty chapters. It's not a holy mother, but I just can't accept the behavior of pig's feet. I stopped reading.