Eternal World Hegemony

So pitiful, not a single vote, 9 votes support it

I have some suggestions. The author wrote two lines earlier, one in memory and one in the torture chamber. Then when changing the lines, add a dividing line or prompts or something. . Um

Why doesn't it go up after I voted for recommendation?

It's scary to think about a company controlling immortality and then 10 billion people entering the virtual world created by this company in 50 years. The true Lord of God

What rubbish. Suitable for making movies. Not suitable for web writing.

Come on, author! It's actually very well written!

Write well, it will be up to you in your senior year of high school

I like your books and will vote for you every day starting from today. 🌹😏, hehe.

Damn it, the author, this writing order is not suitable for online writing. The main character doesn't even feel like I'm reading a narrative.

Read your book slowly and figure out the logic and timeline. This is really not popular for this fast food starting point.

This latest one doesn't have much content, right😅

Not updated😐

I saved it for 6 days and finished reading it in an hour 😢 I have to say that the author is professional, and there is a huge difference compared to those written by novices.

The beginning of your book is too broad. The man from Wolf Picture is right when he says that your book is based on the movie, but the visuals of the movie are incomparable to the novel. The first few chapters are full of scenes and group portraits, but the characters are not fleshed out enough and the protagonist is not clear. Nowadays, online readers are impatient because there are so many books. If the first three chapters are not attractive, the book will basically fail. Try not to write too grandly at the beginning. It is best to start with a single line, from the perspective of the protagonist.