Green Performer

A small personal opinion, although the novel may have more ups and downs in the plot to attract readers, but if the plot is too smooth and smooth, don't always go up and down. For the readers, it will have a very stiff sense of separation from the previous and following contexts, and it will look very awkward.

Writing online novels is all about arranging for a good time. A waste of the system, the heroine is still a passerby in a foreign country. That's what a good novel is, it should be well conceived.

Legend, does the author want to end with Manchester United?

Very good and worth reading.

This book can actually be regarded as a god. The author committed suicide and terminated the contract after a serious injury. It is estimated that most of the readers gave up on the book. Later, he transferred to Tottenham. He had no personal honor and was idle for two years. Most of the readers abandoned the book. The initial readers are estimated to be less than one-tenth of the ten. They all wrote it by themselves. To be honest, fast food literature must not be literate. And the author committed suicide several times. This writing style can basically determine that the book without the author will not have any good results.

I saw some people complaining about how the national football team is cheating. It is a fact that one person cannot lead 11, but sometimes it is enough to represent the country and perform at your own level. Playing on behalf of your country is an honor in itself. Do you have to achieve results? Will Messi win the World Cup? Did Cristiano Ronaldo win the World Cup? Is their national team awesome? Others don't contribute to the national team in the same way. Most of the fans of the national football team are powerful (not even fans, most of them have never watched a complete game). Their eyes only see the final score. You can only win but not lose. Most of them cannot see the joy that football creates. You will never be able to see the applause after losing on a Chinese stadium. Facing Chinese football, it is not just a problem with the players. They are just tall ones selected from short ones. It is a problem with the entire football system. If YY can lead Chinese football to the World Cup alone, why not? It's not about winning the championship, just qualifying.

A very interesting football novel, I have been following it

Regarding the issue of the national team, there is a problem with the choice of the main author. If you are Chinese at the beginning, there is no problem at all. If you change your nationality for the World Cup, there will definitely be a lot of people complaining. The key is that you set the protagonist to be mixed race and dual nationality at the beginning. Then the reader will default to choosing one of the two. In the end, you will not choose either. Expressed through reporters I still seem to want to join, which is very poisonous. It is different from the readers' expectations. It is selling dogs over sheep's heads. And is it possible for football novels not to write about the World Cup? So the author, you should come up with an emergency or something like that to join Yingde, and public opinion. Isn't it funny? A person of mixed race, who grew up in a foreign country, is dying because he didn't join the Chinese team? Sorry, these are not Chinese fans, these are Internet bullies

His nationality is not Chinese anymore, so what's the point of joining another national team to play football? Besides, the protagonist is of mixed race.

I have read more than 40 chapters. This pig's foot has no abilities. Why does one want him and the other want him? Make a system to possess Erha, is he a ghost? Possessed by a ghost? The key system didn't give pig's feet any help, so why do so many people want pig's feet? It didn't say how good the body is, or what abilities or skills it has. It just feels like the mediocre pig's feet are somehow very powerful, but you don't know what's so good about him... And what kind of coach can a player talk about a player? Only an incompetent coach would be willing to hire a player who wants to point fingers like you, and a capable coach would not be willing to listen to you beeping too much, otherwise the media will blow it if he wins... A good guy is a player who has good tactics and has nothing to do with the coach. Who can stand this? It's good enough for a player to play well and execute tactics well. Don't just write about it.

The paragraph after Chapter 93 is really awesome. What the hell, it's outrageous to become a coach directly after a serious injury. Ah, I can't describe it. No wonder it's not popular. It's disgusting.

It's not too much to say that this book disgusts people, and it's not unfair to say that the results are just a little bit worse.

Every time when the critical moment comes, I always resort to diving to cheat the opportunity, which always makes me feel a little uncomfortable. I just watched it with passion, but I will give you a basin of cold water right away. . . This is a cool article, a systematic flow. . Forget it if you are not passionate, you always think about how to do evil things. Is diving a good reputation? ?

A heard B speak and twitched the corner of his mouth C heard Ding speak and twitched the corner of his mouth Then so-and-so twitched the corner of his mouth again. Author, are you the Dragon King with a crooked mouth?

I still hope that everyone will support genuine reading as much as possible. The plot in the early stage was not pleasing and led to poor results. However, I promise with the character of a competitive bookworm that the subsequent writing will get better and better!

It's quite tight, it's seriously injured💩It happened suddenly, I took it

It's okay to be seriously injured, but I don't understand. You guys have been pretending to be awesome in football writing for more than ten years. Aren't you tired?

Author, why are you so entangled? The protagonist next door, Mark Qinchun, is Chinese and joined the England national team, and there are also many people supporting it. Dragging is the stupidest way.

It's been a long time since I read a football article. It looked okay. Why did I suddenly get bored in Chapter 93? . . .

After reading it, let's talk about your thoughts. The two emotional holes are not filled in, but it doesn't matter that this is a football article. The writing style is acceptable, but the lack of passion and the inability to resonate with readers is a relatively big shortcoming. It's okay if it's a bit cool, and it's good that it doesn't abruptly break away from reality. I don't think it's a failure to interfere with the national football team. The national football team cannot be saved by one person. Football articles actually don't really need to describe too many scenes on the field. It is actually very boring to describe the process of a football match through words. Why did Lin Hai go downhill? Comparing his current works with his previous work "Do You Care If I Play Football", you can clearly see that you spend so much space describing the details on the field. The details are useless, it's just a running account. The author's writing is boring, and the readers are even more boring. This is not a comic or TV series. A good football novel should spend more time describing emotional stories and exciting details, psychological activities, and various contrasts to make readers feel involved. In this regard, this book is actually pretty good and not too boring. The subject matter can be said to be very attractive. If it can resonate with readers, I am looking forward to the author's next work.

I want to ask if you want to join the Chinese national team? If so, read it, if not, don't read it. After reading so many football novels for so many years, I have given up on those that don't make the national team. I don't know why you all say that joining the national team is extremely toxic.

I have read the Quanxing novel several times, and I can't help but laugh every time I see Su Ya and Su Ya exchanging and diving. It's a breath of fresh air outside of the Hot-Blooded novel 😂

The main reason why this novel was not popular back then was because the author, a young man, got injured and then started all over again. To be honest, it was disgusting.

Among the systematic novels about football, the quality can be ranked among the top three. It is a pity that the results are not good.

Was the novice gift package eaten by a dog?

The author has watched a lot of competitions and at least has some of his own ideas. Although the writing is not as passionate as the online articles, the level is obviously higher. To put it simply - much higher than the level of the accounts of many great masters!

Why don't player coaches appear in senior leagues? ? Not to mention anything else, just one injury issue. If you are injured and the head coach and the core of the team are gone, how can you still play? ? ?

I want to make money, but I also want to scold, what the hell?

I said that there were extra monthly passes for no reason. It turned out that I had booked them all directly and received a reward of 500.

As a fan of the Red Devils, I am really sad to see the situation of the Red Devils in the past few years. I hope that the protagonist can go to Manchester United and compete in the Premier League. No matter whether the coach is Moyes, Van Gaal, Mourinho, or the current baby face, as long as he goes to Manchester United, shocks Pogba, and convinces Martial, Lingard and others. Win the Premier League title, win the Champions League title