Genius Female Yuanshi

Because there are many supporting actors involved in the later part of this book, I will set up a supporting building here. Everyone can leave their names and personalities. Au would like to thank everyone here (●'◡'●)ﾉ❤

I took a rough look at it: Advantages: 1. Clear thinking 2. Passable narration 3. Substantial content Disadvantages: 1. A bit boring, 2. Too little description of the environment and psychological activities, 3. The characters are paper-based, such as the grandfather in the article. I think it can be written like this, that is, he is cold and cares about Yinxing all the time. But the grandfather in your article does not make people feel this way. Highlighting the character is a major point in the novel. 4. The timeline is not clear, it is best to point out the time clearly. Thank you, please forgive me if there is anything wrong!

Changed the cover. The previous cover was actually quite nice...

Suddenly I had a very bold idea. Could it be that the male protagonist is the last owner of the stone...

Does the author still write? (Cry)