Blood Red Track

? I just saw more than 200 pictures. Why is Guy alive again? Didn't you write earlier that Guy was dead? Did xjb write randomly? Are you?

There is a loophole. How does the protagonist know about the Republic if he has never been exposed to the Trails series? It is better to let the protagonist know everything from the beginning. Moreover, the Trails series has always been full of conspiracies. If the protagonist does not know anything, it will feel very miserable. As for the protagonist's abilities, I think it is better to be simple and practical. The more mutations are found, the stronger the recovery power, or the higher understanding, swordsmanship genius, physical skill genius, etc. In this way, the protagonist can become stronger through training. You can also set it as you like, and it is easy to understand. The strength level of the trajectory seems to be the first pass, the middle pass, the arcana and then the final realm of reason. The basic setting is very important.

Emmm, the author is great. The arcana of the Eight Leaves Itto style is equal to that of all... Because Rean in Shen 4 is the sword master + apprentice, and there is still controversy in other schools. In addition, regarding the strength positioning of Hachiba Ittoryu Okuden, you can refer to the official fifteenth anniversary commemorative book. There is a side of the nine great swordsmen in the mainland, namely: Branch Principal, Light Sword, Sword Immortal, Lao Ka, Wind Sword, Flash 4 Normal Rean, Thunder God, Sword Emperor, and Prime Minister. So although some people think that Rean's Arcane Sword Master is very weak. But in terms of setting, he is so strong... Rean, the normal character at the end of Flash 4, is already a level stronger than Laura and others. And based on the dialogue between old cards and Rean in Flash 3 and Flash 4, we can know that Rean's talent is the best among the three. He, the youngest sword master, is justified. It will never be as good as some people say that only Agathe is as strong as Agathe... Now Rean is only higher than One-Eyed and Gold.

Does the author have the idea of ​​reopening this Locus fanfic? You probably didn't know the entire plot of Sky Rail when you wrote this book, so there are some bugs. Now that you know all the plots, you should be able to write better if you write it now. Chuang Rail will be online in August. You can also write it after you have completed Sky Rail. Finally, you hope to write a story about farming and developing technology. I found that a Locus fan novel about developing technology is still a eunuch.

I've read a lot of Locus fanfics, but why don't any of them have the protagonist attack Estil? In fact, with Joshua's evasive character, it would have been relatively easy as long as Estill changed her feelings for him from family affection to love in the first episode of Empty Rail. Estil's personality is similar to that of Misaka Mikoto. They are both lively and active like boys, enthusiastic and kind, and like to help others (female version of Naruto). Personally like it very much.

It is a rare track article, and it is not easy to keep writing it when many track articles are banned. But could the author pay a little attention to the typos? I also feel that the author's writing is a bit broken now, the plot line is a bit confusing, and the character strength feels a bit different. Come on, author

There are so few votes, huh? Is anyone there?

This author doesn't know how to break sentences. No punctuation marks will be used. Don't you feel uncomfortable when you read it by yourself?

To be honest, insisting on writing so much is obviously due to my love for the Locus series! But the game is not in depth! In a real sense, Ayo in "Trajectory in the Sky" makes you completely black!

I have read more than two hundred chapters and would like to express my current feelings. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. There are a lot of typos in this book, there are some bugs in the plot line, and there will be inconsistencies. The advantage is that as a trajectory fanfic, the author still has his own ideas. Although it generally follows the main plot line (sweat), it is worth looking forward to an independent plan. Finally, in summary, it is a rare fan of Locus. Overall, it is worth a look, but I still want to support it. ps: Bell as the heroine, well received! The protagonist joins the Eight Leaves One-Sword Knife Wife and Daughter style, which is a bit embarrassing. After all, this point has been written badly by many fans. Personally, I feel that if the protagonist inherits the bloodline, he can completely form the Wo style. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

Everything else is good, but there are too many typos.

My favorite in the Locus series is Xiao Fei and lazy loli. I suggest adding a female protagonist 😍

The main reason in the book is that the description of the strength of each character is not adequate. The protagonist is too strong (referring to the setting) but does not have the standard performance of a strong person, such as the realm of reason, the will of a strong person, and the experience of a master. It feels like the protagonist has been forcibly elevated, which has overshadowed the other supporting characters who were originally strong and lost their original flavor. Too strong is not a good thing, because without slow growth and exploration, there will be a lack of various problems and breakthroughs that growth will inevitably bring. It can be said that in terms of strength fighting, it is not interesting. In terms of trajectory, the cultivation of Eight Leaves is the most important for the growth of one's mind, not to mention the unique advantages of the Eye of Observation brought by cultivation alone (everyone who has played Flash III knows this) Other aspects are that the plot structure is not very interesting due to strength, and the writing style needs to be improved, so it is overall disappointing. I hope these words are helpful to the author. I don't mean to be critical, I just pay attention to these problems.

The name of pig's feet looks so embarrassing😳

It's rare to see a fanfic of Locus

It actually has a cover. Let's see how many people read this book.

The timeline of Track 1 is roughly in the middle of Track Zero. I feel like I can write it with flash rails and zero bi rails interspersed. . Anyway, the Empty Orbit Trilogy will definitely not be affected. First write the empty track, and then start the Lingbi. During this period, choose a timeline to intersperse the flash track. Finally, after the completion of Bi, it will end with Flash Track 4. This completes the set. In fact, what is difficult to grasp is the plot interweaving between Lingbi and Shangui.

Originally there weren't many fans who wrote trajectories on Qidian. Now I've read less than one, but this one is really hard to stand, and it feels weird. I don't know if it's because the protagonist's abilities and trajectories don't match or if the plot is a bit strange. Anyway, I can only skip reading.