Evolution and Inheritance

The homework is great. What you wrote is a good story, but you can make each small story into a volume and a volume so that you can see clearly. Thank you.

What a waste of a good idea. I won't discuss the main character's IQ. Let's just talk about reality. If you, the author, have the ability to enter dreams and gain functions, would you choose to share it or keep it privately? Don't say you choose to share it. That's too fake. This is really poisonous. In fact, in one sentence, the reader is so selfish that you are happy. You are too fake and empty. No one can handle it. After all, everyone hates the Holy Mother.

I'm confused as to why it's classified into the game section. . Shouldn't this plot be a science fiction area? ? ? I almost didn't know there was this novel in the game section 😅

More and more people are reading this book👍

The front is okay, but the key is that the back is really too poisonous. Wearing them together is better than wearing them by yourself. They also create some kind of time-traveling group. The result is that they are investigated and mixed in for personal gain, and then they are all mixed up. It's better for the protagonist to travel alone and save resources by redistributing it. If the early resources are concentrated on the protagonist alone, then do we still need classmates or something? Later, when the protagonist wakes up, he can just take his friends to fly, and it would be too ridiculous to keep traveling through time in the past. It would be better to just give the protagonist the ability to travel through time to save the trouble. Another particularly poisonous thing is that the protagonist keeps telling various people about his ability to enter dreams, forget about ghosts, and other people at least explain it casually. If the author writes a solo story, more people will watch it. It is difficult for this kind of protagonist to get along at the beginning.

No matter how old it is, there are still people who believe in Darwin's theory of evolution. For living things, Darwin's theory of evolution is acceptable, but so far, there is no scientific basis to prove that humans evolved from orangutans. It is impossible for humans to evolve like this.

It was originally a good subject matter, but it turned out to be a drama trap. The protagonist's IQ was seriously off-line.

It's outrageous. You said you should keep it a secret, but then you gave it all and told everything you knew. 👍 You are really a trickle critic.

It's okay if the author wants to write with some feelings, but the feelings still need to be measured and matched. Good guy, you don't have feelings when it's cool, and you focus on the poisonous points. Others who have traveled through time usually remain silent or hide themselves very carefully. The protagonist wants to share his secrets with the world, just for fear that others don't know that he has a problem. Posting, contacting, and leading the crowd to wear it, it makes people think how true, good, and beautiful they are. Isn't it too naive?

The problem of group travel is really a pitfall. The protagonist has never seen the main god space at first glance. The main god space can completely allow them to hand over their things willingly. Even if he doesn't use the main god space, he can still use the system. The system is better in the main god space, but he needs to find a few artificial intelligences first.

The previous incident with Lin Jing revealed the protagonist's secret, which felt a bit poisonous, but I could bear it, after all, it was logical according to the author's words; but then I went to the United States and met a man who could dream and wanted to date, so I was immediately persuaded to quit. The author has such a big heart that he dares to expose his poisonous points one after another. But overall, this book can be regarded as a breath of fresh air in the Internet literary world. It is not a novice, it is logical, and the author's writing skills are good. You can save it first, and then read the author's other books in two years. Forget this one.

Would a normal person reveal his or her biggest secret? He must have kept it a secret and concentrated on using his strength to make money, status, and women. How could he fax such important information everywhere and pretend that all national organizations and careerists are fools and will not seize the opportunity to be the protagonist?

After reading many reviews from book friends, I found that the author made a lot of novice mistakes, and the author has definitely not read novels for several years. The author does not understand the needs of readers, and does not know what readers hate. The number of words is so many, and the score is still the same. This is a big problem.,,, These problems are easy to solve. Don't rush to write novels. Read it first. If you read more, you will understand everything.

I have read more than 400 chapters, let me tell you my opinion. The subject matter is acceptable, and the author's writing style is also acceptable. The beginning was okay at the beginning, but it became more and more awkward later on. Why did Alice lose her role at the end? There have been so many sightings of people traveling through time and space, and there are so many boundaries to travel through, right? Yet the country is indifferent? Some of those time-travel dreams are meaningless, and they are completely water characters. The protagonist gives people the impression that his thinking is simple, his plans are not secret, he passively accepts the occurrence of events, and does not pursue the essence of things. Why can he practice cultivation in different worlds? Why do zombies have rocks in their heads? Why does it melt into the body when you pinch it in your hand? Why can it be strengthened? The setting of strengthening the body with corpse crystals is ridiculous, but it has so many flaws that I can't stand it anymore. Even if you write a travelogue, you still have to tell a story. I hope the next book can improve it.

With such dismal results, there are not many people left in the book club circle. This is generating electricity with love

I'm just a passerby. Saw more than 40 pictures. It's just embarrassing to watch when it's connected to reality.

Although I can't stand it anymore after seeing it, I still wish the author can write this book well (mainly because most readers don't like this kind of development)

I've read more than fifty chapters. Can the protagonist only experience and not control the characters in the dream? It's very monotonous. It's like a mess of stories piled together.

The protagonist asked Yu Deli and others to make up the story in order to keep it secret. In fact, if in reality, the scale of their group chatting was getting larger and larger, and they were still posting it online and in the group, they would have been gangbanged very early.