Proving the Way Through Writing

The author has already entered the palace and became a eunuch. It's better for everyone to leave.

It feels good, why don't you write it down?

Cut it, it's useless except for ideas, but ideas are not perfect either.

The writing style is too plain, routine and not interesting.

This plot only has the early stage, and it will collapse in the later stage!

The idea is good, but the main plot is not very clear, the plot is a bit unclear, and after integrating into a world, the conflict is not reflected. Below I will talk about my views on several problems with this book: First, the rhythm is a bit messy. In a world where spiritual energy is revived and martial arts and immortal ways are born, a lot of conflicts will break out, and there will be a process from chaos to governance. This process is not over yet, and the result is that it has merged into the world of monsters, which is a bit anxious. It would be better if we only open the low martial arts world and the science fiction world first, and then open up the high martial arts world, the fairy world, the magic world, and the mysterious world bit by bit. We need to give the world a process of acceptance. Second, the protagonist's growth is too willful. The protagonist's world creation is a bit willful. He can open a low-level fairy when he is still young, and he can open an intermediate world when he is new. The growth route of the protagonist is very vague. Growth is never so casual, and the overall growth route is not rigorous enough. Third, the sense of substitution is not strong. There are too few stories about the protagonist himself, and there is basically no growth process in terms of personal consciousness and thought. The protagonist is a bit condescending. After all, readers are watching the protagonist's growth story, not the stories of other people after the protagonist messes around. The lack of a sense of agency is also the biggest problem with this book. Fourth, there is a lack of complete values. This is also the most fundamental point that makes the protagonist of this book feel superior. In addition to opening up the world, the protagonist has no personal preferences, no value tendencies, no close friends, and no interactions with the people around him (the Enlightenment Tree is just a subordinate puppet, an individual lacking autonomy). It gives the impression that he is willful and random. The above are my personal views on some issues in this book. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. I hope the author will work hard, make good use of this idea, and write this book well.

It was okay at first, but then it fell apart.

Pigfoot's first book "How to Write a Good Book"

I feel that the author may not want to continue writing, so I just stated my thoughts casually. I don't like you to criticize me, so that's it. After all, you who read the book may also have this guess. If the results are not good, I will update a chapter in a few days, and there is no explanation. Author, you have a very good idea. There are many people who like to read this genre now. Author, your writing style can hardly capture that feeling. So you chose novels that were once popular to write to retain readers who like those books. This is a very good idea. The first point, mentioned above, is that I can't describe the feeling. There's nothing wrong with your approach, it's very thoughtful, so just skip it. Second, you can py the next chapter with other authors and promote it to more people. Third, it's about putting it on the shelves. Someone in the book review section has said it, but you didn't say it in advance and you didn't update it. It's almost a consensus that a wave of problems broke out after this was released... The author is a newbie. Fourth, the author, you are not a platinum god, nor is there any god who recommends chapters to you. Your writing style is not very good (this problem will be solved gradually). You do not have the three points. There are many readers who like to gain weight and read together. Poor performance is also within the normal range. Fifth, the most poisonous point. If you don't do well on the shelves, you don't want to continue writing (I think I can't accept it. The author didn't accumulate readers step by step in the beginning. There are quite a few people who have become gods with one book. Do you want to become gods just after it was released?). It is updated every two or three days, and now there is no explanation. New people and new books are on the shelves. I think the biggest problem is the update. If you are still like this, I am speechless. I personally prefer this type. I plan to slow down for a week. If it doesn't work, I will give up and the rest of you will work hard. I have posted the above personal opinions whether you like them or not. If you have different opinions, you can post them, accuse me, spray me, or give me a thumbs up. As long as you are happy, I will apologize in the book review area if I was wrong. I think I am right and I will not argue with you, but I will write my own opinions and let others evaluate them.

Ever since the protagonist opened a new vest to write about the biochemical crisis during the national martial arts trend, and wanted to create a hodgepodge of national martial arts, technology, supernatural powers, cultivation, immortals, fighting spirit, magic, ninjutsu... XX... This book was destined to be a hit!