Reborn Qin Chuan

I've seen many reviews mentioning dialects, which I think is fine, but there aren't many. I'll wait a while before reading it again.

It's all Shaanxi dialect. The protagonist is from Shaanxi, so you write in dialect? Who's this for? It's so confusing. If the protagonist were reborn in America, why don't you write it all in English?

Too much dialect makes it difficult to read. You're not writing for a specific region. For example, if you were writing about time travel to the United States, would you write entirely in English? Your use of dialect is completely discouraging.

The character relationships are too complicated; you're writing a web novel, not *White Deer Plain*!

It's really good. I like the dialect, but it doesn't have to be all dialect, just half is fine, otherwise it won't be enjoyable. Also, I hope the protagonist makes more money soon. And author, it's rare to find a book as unique as yours. It's really good, keep it up!