From Anchor to Superstar

I've read more than twenty chapters. It's okay to write. Come on.

The author is great, everything in the front is fine, although there are some minor problems, but it does not affect it, but the class reunion in the back is really poisonous. Nowadays, except for some noobs, who would like to read this kind of routine. I guess many people will give up after seeing this. After all, the author only updates here, without the buffer of the subsequent content. Guess how many people will abandon the book. Therefore, I suggest that the author greatly rewrites or overhauls these chapters. For example, wouldn't it be nice to have a peaceful reunion with classmates? Either delete the plot of the class reunion and write about the signing of the Magic City contract directly. This is much better than now. Anyway, only 6 chapters have been written now. Whether it is rewriting or overhauling will have no impact. If you write too much later, it will be difficult to change. Of course, these are just suggestions. Whether you adopt them or not depends on your own ideas. Your readers, stay

Looking at the plot of this book, I think it should be faster-paced. So far, it looks good.

To be honest, it is difficult to develop from anchor to superstar, and it is difficult for stars to transform.