Xu Xian and Bai Suzhen

At first I wanted to write about White Snake turning black, but later forced CP. The author originally wrote that White Snake has been practicing for thousands of years and will not easily fall in love with mortals. . . It's forceful enough. It's set to be eaten. What's going on? Either the plot of the Legend of White Snake is killed from the beginning, or White Snake is a good person from the beginning. Not everyone can write emotional dramas. Xu Xian, as a time traveler, completely kneels down and softens his heart after saying a few nice words. You must know that your setting is a person who has been hurt. How can you trust someone who is deceiving you so easily? The author's writing is incomprehensible.

The first two chapters have a halo of persuasion. After reading dozens of chapters, I just can't stand it. It's so poisonous.

The writing is quite good and the characters are well portrayed. Xu Xian in the book is a lively and affectionate character. The plot arrangement is also reasonable. Overall, this book is quite well written!

It looks great. Why do so many people give bad reviews? I want to give it a four-star rating.

Selfish people, this is not love, this is the safety (security) that this person is looking for in the midst of insecurity.

Miss Wan'er's butt was bitten by a snake. Xu Xian quickly took drugs. If it was too late, he would be dead.

If you don't have a firm heart, you might as well come up with a system and use experience points to directly force yourself to become stronger.

The first chapter was pretty good, but Chapter 28-29 forced a twist in the plot, and then I couldn't understand it anymore 😰😰😰

Trolls, don't make blind comparisons Go and see what some platinum masters are writing now. Such articles can be on the list. The author's writing is much better than them.

I've read so many books, and this is the first time I've seen the main character look like a girl. Who would read this? I've probably read too many old versions of White Snake, and it's also a time-travel novel, and I'm drunk.

I'm almost a fairy, but I'm so good at this. This book is poisonous😰😰

It turns out that cultivating immortals cannot increase your IQ, and it doesn't even improve your sanity.

It's uncomfortable to watch, but... I don't want to curse. It's not that you can't adapt a classic, it just depends on how well you adapt it. The author's adaptation is really hard to describe, but it ruins good memories.

It's so terrible,,, the character plot collapsed into a mess, and the next second he suddenly stabbed gently WWW22,,

The first few chapters were fine, but then it suddenly turned into a dog-licking mess, meow meow meow?

You are not a great person, so why should you write about it slowly? And it's not well written. It's already been TM10 chapters and there's no golden finger!

I think this book is okay, but if you want it to be better, you'd better change the front part and think carefully about the characters' psychology and behavior.

....................................................................🔪Is this the starting point for blindness?

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