Leisurely Cultivation System

In fact, the writing is pretty good. For people like us who have read a lot of mindless novels, reading this book is like eating too much greasy food and wanting something light. Although there are indeed many shortcomings in the setting and plot, it is indeed worth watching. The problem is the eunuch. Thinking about it, if I were the author, I wouldn't be able to continue writing. I have no motivation.

It's best not to bring people into college dormitories when writing novels. It's easy to write to death. There are many scenes, but it doesn't advance the plot at all. It's quite easy for passers-by to forget about it. It reappears every now and then.

A eunuch. Don't read any further.

You can write it! Why is it a eunuch?

I kept it for two fucking months and finished watching it in less than an hour. Brother, the author, your update speed is also touching. If updates are slow, don't write good novels😅😅😅

The book is very good, but the updates are a bit slow.

You are still leisurely cultivating immortality. I am afraid you have never tasted my Lao Hei's elixir! I have been practicing medicine for decades, and all I can do is rely on a breath of immortality. I am suffering from the pain of cultivating immortality, but you are still leisurely.

Is a good book! It's leisurely and contented, I like it very much, but there are many stallions in the city, and there are no stallions in the back to keep watching!

I'm a little curious about how to practice alchemy in a pressure cooker? If you don't open the lid with enough force, it's worse than a casserole. How do you put the medicine behind it when you close the lid?

If you have a single female protagonist, don't write too many scenes with other female supporting characters 😭

Really, I don't want to comment on this novel, because the author only writes routine articles, and his target group is not me, so I can leave. But if you write a pretentious article, just write it. The author must say something before writing the pretentious part - I hate novels that are pretentious and slap in the face the most in my life. When I see a novel that is pretentious and slap in the face, I will immediately curse: The author is wise, and then abandon the book. Then the author immediately wrote one of the wisest pretentious and slap-in-the-face scenes. An intern doctor who had just been in the hospital for two days gave acupuncture to a dying stroke patient. You are really a talent. I am not writing this to say that you write routine articles, but that you are acting as a showman and setting up archways, which really disgusts me.

This book is really leisurely. I read several books in a row with titles that are leisurely but not actually leisurely. So far, there has been no fighting and killing, only one show-off. 6666666 The recommendation vote is given to you.

After reading Chapter 80, I didn't feel that it was very leisurely. What I saw was that the ex-girlfriend forced the protagonist to do an internship, and the mother also forced the protagonist, for the sake of the protagonist. However, the novel was just enjoyable. I didn't see any leisure. It always forced the protagonist to do things he didn't want to do. Leisure, leisure, doesn't it mean that the protagonist can do whatever he wants? You obviously have the ability but don't tell your family, and you still have to bear it to fulfill the family's concern for you, and you will have to pay for it soon. I wonder if this will often happen in the future? I stopped watching it, I felt frustrated.

In fact, many novel writers ignore a question: would the protagonist who has already cultivated immortality be interested in a human woman with countless bacteria crawling on her body?

Alas, the protagonist's style of dealing with things is really unacceptable. I also wish the author a great success and become a god as soon as possible. I'll say goodbye 🙏

I don't know what the author means. At the beginning, Gao Ge is always written as a template for the heroine, but later the heroine is replaced by Zhou Miaomiao. If you want to write Zhou Miaomiao, can you not give Gao Ge so many scenes in the first part? A complete failure!

Let me continue. After Xu Mu successfully married Zhou Miaomiao, and lived happily for two years, he also had a big fat boy. After that, he resolutely stepped into the teleportation array. After entering, there was a formation inside, which was a mass killing formation. Xu Mu was directly killed by the sword energy. Zhou Miaomiao kept waiting outside, but there was no follow-up method. After waiting for six years, he couldn't stand the loneliness, so he remarried and lived a sexually blessed and happy life with someone else using the money Xu Mu earned.

He was persuaded to quit by his ex-girlfriend, they broke up, and he still has to be influenced by his ex-girlfriend. This kind of protagonist character is really unacceptable.

A must read for the author! ! To be honest, I didn't feel disgusted when I saw the pretense and slap in the face in your article, but I really can't stand it after reading Chapter 236. Author, if you don't want to start a harem article, don't describe Gao Ge or Zhou Miaomiao. If you don't like it, just tell them clearly. Don't shrink your head and tail. It's disgusting. I hope the author can improve after seeing it [Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it! ! ! ! ]

Is it really poisonous? Why does Wang Junlong hit people? There's nothing wrong with being a BMW man, right? Who knew that this woman was just a fake, hiding something from both parties? Who knew what was going on. The BMW man can also be considered a victim, and he was beaten for no reason.

I went in and looked at it, really looked at it, don't say I was prostituted for free, you didn't give me a chance to make me pay, the third picture was still the fifth chapter, I was defeated. The logic doesn't make sense. The characterization is not clear. The dialogue seems mindless. The second item is that I can be human. It will not work if you are illogical and brainless. Being illogical means that you don't understand, and being brainless means, well, let's not talk about it anymore. Farewell

It's so poisonous that I can't watch the first few dozen chapters. It's not leisurely anymore. Leisure is your own mentality. Aren't you tired of pretending to be cool everywhere? There are also a series of bloody plots. Although the ex-girlfriend is strong, she is really for your own good. The protagonist's mentality is so explosive that he wants to slap his ex-girlfriend in the face. Can you tell her directly with the facts that your alchemy skills and medical skills are not good? You can go to any hospital casually, and you can go if you are good at ancient Chinese medicine. Are you not Shi Lezhi?

I have been on the street for more than a year and it is still recommended. I am really drunk at the starting point now.

So far, sweeping the tomb, lighting wax, adding incense, but no movement; pouring wine, paying tribute, setting off cannons, smashing monuments, but no response; digging graves, digging graves, opening restaurants, whipping corpses, and losing temper; setting fires, burning corpses, raising ashes, trying again, arranging tables, drawing talismans, performing martial arts, and thundering, but no deception; bells, wooden swords, villains, chanting incantations, and summoning spirits again; tears, crying, wailing, and beating the ground. The author is gone, and the poor man has no way to recover. ———————— Reposted from a book review of a certain book

The prototype of the heroine is the old woman who is the silly girl and the little bully, right?

It's too retarded. As a student party, I can't stand it. Don't you consider the feelings of any readers? Farewell

To be honest, I can't stand it. Parents like you would generally believe that their son, your mother, wrote it. Sorry, I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

I suddenly remembered this book today, but all I remembered was the plot of the protagonist and Zhou Miaomiao driving a car and the fact that both men and women who practice boxing have beards. I searched on Baidu and found it. Hahaha, I followed this book when I first started updating it, but stopped following it when it got to Gu Gu Gu Gu.

Whether this girlfriend is sick or not, my ex-girlfriend still cares about this and that.

All kinds of doubts and all kinds of contempt...