Five Thousand Years of Chinese History

I was wondering if the real bodies of the Qin Empire, civil servants and generals would all belong to the protagonist, or would you, the author, give the real bodies of other Qin generals or civil servants to other successors? It would be boring if that happened.

It seems that writing novels not only consumes brain cells but also consumes physical strength. For the sake of better works, you must take good care of yourself!

Is this a lord battle type? Yes, just look

The design of the world structure is good, and it would be better if it could be more connected to the plot of the real world. When the protagonist kills Ye Chen, there needs to be a gradual process. The switch between the fantasy world and the real world is very necessary. Only writing about the fantasy world will give people the illusion of playing a stand-alone game, and the sense of substitution is not very good. Look up to the author, come on 👍

I want to add more, the two thousand has been sent

As for the reborn character, if the protagonist hadn't died eight hundred times, his previous life would have been miserable, and he might not know the secret of surviving three rounds. Maybe surviving three rounds is really one of the starting points for obtaining the true body. 🐷. By the way, hurry up and update, the 1000 reward has arrived.

Sad, Bai Qi is still going to die. . . . Really, Bai Qi's writing is very good. I hope there will be a turn for the better, at least leave a thought about it, right?

It's refreshing, powerful, and satisfying to your appetite.

Looks good, come on, 🤓

Raised to death😅

This book is actually a eunuch, and the routine is still the same. Although it is said that there is no platinum, I am also drunk by Yanhuang.

Why is there another eunuch? The writing is quite good. So far, I think it is better than the one written in The Lord's Army Conquers the World.

Well... It's a eunuch...

What's going on? Why hasn't there been an update in two or three days?

There are no 63 advertisements, and the instructions are just average. I tried poisoning! Hey-hey

How long will it take for Bai Qi to come out?

Don't call me Wu Anjun or anything like that. It feels better to just call me General Bai. It makes me suffer from embarrassment.

When will Ruan Weng Zhong come out?

Haha, ps is to criticize a certain book, I just read that book😂

It's only 20 seconds before you can update one. What are you waiting for? Why don't you take action?

The development is too slow. Those strong players are only now making great progress.

By the way, how did Bai Qi know how to fly in the air force? 😅 I'm afraid it wasn't ancient kites that carried people.

Bai Qi's command value calculation was wrong. It will be corrected tomorrow.

The author pays attention to details everywhere in the article, which shows his intention and skill.

Is there a lot of plot in The Reborn? I feel a little uncomfortable. It's too arrogant.

Emmm Jing Ke assassinated King Qin?

Did you write this recommendation word wrong? Five years ago? ? ?

In ancient times, when people could write books, all the books they published had a sutra character on them, such as the XX Sutra and the XX Sutra. They were basically giants from ancient times. Those who were traveling with them would beat each one to death without any discussion at all. Those who used the Art of War were basically the ones who dominated an era, such as Newton and Einstein. If you catch the scientists of the same period, they are completely beaten. So if you put these giants together, I feel like starfish.

Great, this kind of protagonist is very comfortable to read, but the first few chapters are too discouraging. If you stick with it, you will find that it is a good book.

The setting is good, and the protagonist's character is well developed. Sincerity and humility towards others are all reflected in this. But the pace is really slow and the writing is too trivial. Chapter 50 is still in Novice Village, but I really don't feel that much has been done. No other famous generals have been recruited, no special buildings have been built, and there is no long-term plan. A small plot takes several chapters to write... So it can get a little boring occasionally. I think the writing is okay, and the dialogue has a somewhat elegant feel. Although it is not very classical, if it is really written in classical Chinese, it will probably lose readers. But I feel like I need to work harder on accuracy. Most recently when I was writing about my relationship with Bai Qi, I understand... There were a lot of struggles. But it's written like this over and over again, which is very monotonous. Or you can try to intersperse memories of what he taught the protagonist and how important it is to the protagonist. It's really embarrassing to keep using direct descriptions. The protagonist could be more bold and decisive. Sincerity is required. But I feel that a lot of space is devoted to his indecision. Now that I have decided, I will continue walking even while kneeling, which will make people appreciate me even more.