Planeswalkers of Skyrim

Author, are you writing prose? You are expressing emotions every moment, which feels so cumbersome.

Is Magic the Gathering popular in Skyrim?

Can you remove the word "son" after the person? Adding the word "son" makes it awkward to pronounce.

It's Labor Day, work more, update as soon as possible, and make money to support your family.

After writing so many details, I thought the author really wanted to write it down, but then came the character race selection... Haha... If you want to write game articles, go to the game channel, why do you have to go to the science fiction channel?

So what... If you want to write about the protagonist's life experience, it is recommended to gradually reveal it bit by bit during the adventure journey, like slowly awakening memories, and unraveling some knots in the past life through the journey experience. It will be better than telling it all in one breath. If I don't explain it clearly at the beginning of the article, it would be very abrupt to describe this in a long paragraph in the middle.

There's something wrong with your grammar, it's as weird as a Japanese light novel web version.