My Custom Empire

Why not update it? It's a very good book, except for the protagonist's sister

This introduction... It's a pity. When I saw the name, my first thought was that the protagonist customizes the city in a deserted place, customizes the types of creatures, customizes extraordinary powers, etc.

After reading the introduction and mentioning the national football team, I immediately gave up the book.

I strongly recommend that you don't open chapters 29 to 35. You have to listen to the author, but I just didn't listen to the author and couldn't sleep at night.

Various poisons must be foreshadowed. Vulture to changeEunuch

MD If you want to write a female character, write it well. Don't always have a female character to hold you back.

The author might as well have made the protagonist an orphan, it's too vicious

The author's creativity is good, but the creation of this heroic spirit is not very good. This Zhao Yun does not look like a heroic spirit but more like a summoned younger brother. The author will know what the heroic spirits are like after reading the FATE series a few times.

Cool, bro? Didn't you say you insist on completing the update?

I wanted to watch it, but it was updated a month ago and it was eunuch.

The bull's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong. The front and back are inconsistent and poisonous.

Is the update a bit slow?

Um (⊙o⊙)... You can write anything, just don't write about the rotten thing about the national football team.

Update me quickly, I promised to write down if there is one reader.

If it can be described and carved carefully, it will be particularly perfect. How can I put it? It would be great if there were not so many useless characters at the beginning to dilute the main line of foreshadowing, but these small characters are needed to catch the readers' attention. Delete those useless foreshadowings at the beginning and add more ink to this big main line. It is a perfect preparation, but it must be precise and update quickly. It is really difficult to choose. The author sincerely wishes you, come on! I like this book!

Come on, come on ↖(^ω^)↗, update seven times a night, author, I'm optimistic about you, you need Nutrition Express! 😃

Even with good talent, the national football team will still lose.

The author is wasting his talent if he doesn't write thrillers. I was a little panicked after reading this book.

The introduction is quite attractive, I'll add it to my bookshelf first and then read it when I have time. Good luck to the author.

The writing is quite good, but the plot is a bit scary. The protagonist may have been affected by the system and has no feeling, but the phenomenon of treating human life with indifference is a bit serious. The number of people involved in the recent road and bridge construction may really be hundreds of thousands. It is impossible for a city to suppress the news of losing such a large number of people. The author should keep his heart in mind and write well. This is just a little complaint. The recommendation vote has been cast.

It looks pretty good, except for a bit awkward in some places, it's all good

I am Shennong. I am actually not dead. I ate a piece of celestial grass that was so evil that it made people laugh. After thousands of years of refining, it has become a saint. Now I urgently need 50,000 yuan to eat and give me money. I will teach you the supreme skill "Shen Nong Jing"

Collection: I have gained weight and am reading now. I hope the author will work hard.

There seems to be something wrong. I haven't seen this routine before. It's the first time I've seen the protagonist quarrel with his sister.

I'm going to cry, this is too short, Three Seconds Man. . . .

After reading Chapter 32, I felt like what kind of evil the protagonist had done in his previous life, to have such a sister (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻

Why does it look like a thriller 😰