Wanjie Game Terminal

Torturing the protagonist once is not enough. . Why don't you do it again more severely?

The plot is fast, imaginative and interesting!

1. The writing style is a bit immature, but I like the author's cheerful writing style. I hope the author can stick to this style. The writing style that makes readers laugh has a high chance of success; 2. As a fantasy novel, using a whole chapter to set up the plot will seem a bit lengthy and will affect the reader's perception. Many readers will stop reading after reading the first chapter because they cannot get the direction of your plot; 3. The writing style is indeed cheerful and quite likable, but I still recommend that the author add some meaningful things into it, so that the work will be cheerful while upgrading itself, and will not degenerate into a fast food novel; The vicious review is over. I personally think the author's articles are quite good. I hope to get more and more subscriptions! ! !

You may not believe what the author said. What you wrote is embarrassing😓 and not funny at all. Yes, it's like Kuaishou. I suggest you change the first few chapters because they make it uncomfortable to read.

Do what you want and let others say it

. . . . . . . Write quickly

In fact, the writing is quite good and the story is very good.

There has been no update for two days. This is the rhythm of the blade.

When I saw the little brother who had collected the book, he immediately abandoned the book.

I didn't plan to read the book after reading the review, but when I saw an advertisement for 36, I decided to give it a try.

I want to know where they sell chewing gum in bottles. Since I was a child, I have only seen tubes, boxes, and tablets.

I haven't read the book, but to be honest, the author has a big brain and a big heart! But I feel like this book is going to collapse in the middle of the book, and if it doesn't collapse, it's possible that Super God will collapse. So keep it first

The author has a very nice book, don't be a eunuch

Sorry, I can't understand it!

Seeing 999 recommendation votes, I couldn't help but cast a vote. I haven't watched 233 yet.