The Journey of the Red Satin Army

I got drunk when I saw Young and Dangerous on the profile. Damn, Gaowu World is ahead. What's the point of going to Young and Dangerous? Are you just showing off?

I really don't know why some people like Young and Dangerous. . .

When I saw the title of the book, I thought I had finally found a book about the Red Silk Army, but then I saw a long paragraph about Young and Dangerous. If the book was called The Journey of Young and Dangerous, I would not click on it at all. Finally, goodbye.

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Seeing the Red Satin Army coming in with interest, the young and Dangerous boy didn't want to read as soon as he saw the introduction.

Damn, I initially saw it as the journey of the Red Army. I wonder which author is so awesome?

Even the little stammering has stopped. The author is inhumane. I am a primary school student and I can't stand it anymore. I really want to scold the author, but as a good student, I stop me. I hope all book friends will join me in boycotting unscrupulous authors.

Black Panther's sister is obviously ugly.

The plot of The Strongest Disciple in History feels exactly the same as the original version, except that Shirahama Kenichi is replaced as the protagonist.

Just to make a complaint, one hundred thousand Gatling bullets only weigh one thousand kilograms? I'm afraid you have a misunderstanding about the weight of the bullet!

The stunning start was fleeting, and what followed was a boring and boring running account. The high start and low end are disappointing.

After identification, the protagonist is discarded!

Did the author forcibly switch the outline up and down for the title of the book? If you can't kill people, don't kill people? This is no longer the Virgin and the Glass Heart. I haven't read the back part, but I don't believe the author wouldn't write an enemy whose combat power is not much different from that of the male protagonist? When it becomes a habit for you to hold back every time, who else can you beat? Just ask people who learn dance. They know a lot of dances, but if you don't play music and let them dance directly, sometimes they will forget the movements. If you turn on the music, they will dance for you smoothly. This is muscle memory. Do you think it is all remembered by the brain? If you rely solely on your brain to issue commands when what actions are needed, you may not learn anything well. If someone wants to tell me that the male protagonist's brain calculation speed will become faster as his brain capacity increases, stop making fun of him. It takes one second to accelerate a punch for a normal person. How many punches can a Saiyan punch in one second? What about further up? The male protagonist still stops, it is unjust to die.

Don't be criticized by readers anymore. Try your best to speed up the progress if possible. If you can't afford it, don't delay it. Otherwise, I can't resist the nonsense of word count. I hope the author can speed up 🥺

The reason why this book is not popular is that the progress of the main plot is slow, and the types of dungeon worlds are inconsistent. There are animations and movies, but they are not great gods. No matter how they write, some people watch Xiaosheng, and the level of a genre is gradually improved by writing anime. Many book friends of this book only clicked in after reading the title of Dragon Ball. It turned out that it is true that the plot of Young and Dangerous is not without other options, and it is a long story. It has lost at least half of the popularity that was attracted by Dragon Ball and Kenichi, and it is difficult to regain it in the follow-up.

The combat setting is very unbalanced and I can't stand it at all. To be honest, it's normal for fan works to modify the plot, but please respect other people's basic settings, okay?

What can the protagonist gain in Young and Dangerous?

If the author made a wish to Shenron and had Saiyan blood, or something else, I believe this would be a good book, but what is Young and Dangerous?

I think since the author chose to use Dragon Ball as the main world, why did he also create some useless world experiences like Young and Dangerous and the League of Assassins? In the later stage, the people in Dragon Ball were just Akira Toriyama and Buu. The earth has been destroyed so many times. The protagonist has no sense of urgency at all. Yes, when you write fan fiction, you should conform to the world view of Dragon Ball. What the world view of Dragon Ball is is the path of individual cultivation. If you want to enrich the plot, then you can just write some worlds such as martial arts and fantasy. It will not only enrich the plot, but also help to improve the protagonist's strength. Creating some useless world will only make people feel that you are filling water. I hope some suggestions will be useful to the author. Although I don't have much money, I will always subscribe. Come on＾0＾~

The main world is obviously Dragon Ball, so why are the worlds we go to lower-level than the last! Dragon Ball is a world where strength is paramount. If you learn some miscellaneous things, you won't be killed with one punch. After writing so many main lines, I progressed a little. . . .

The one in charge of your family who can destroy the universe is called Gao Wu

Author, can you correct the typos? You, you write that other people look good. You wrote it well! It looks very awkward.

Let me summarize the significance of the protagonist's time travel... The strongest disciple, the protagonist wants to learn martial arts. The martial arts system in this world is better than Dragon Ball (except for waves, I feel that Kame Sennin cannot beat Master), but the world level is low Young and Dangerous... The protagonist learns management, and his character has changed Assassin's League (except for unlocking and bullet turning, I don't know what the meaning is, it looks boring) Marvel... (The need for early technology, later The excitement of the interstellar war, physical collision, super powers, spells, monsters, diversity, imagination is good, but the collapse of the power system may make many people abandon the book. For example, in movies and TV shows, the Hulk can tie with Thor, slightly losing to Thanos with bare hands, and will be captured by humans, which shows that the combat power is similar to that of Wukong during the era of the Red Ribbon Legion. Wukong can dodge bullets, Hulk cannot, but Hulk is stronger than Little Wukong at that time)

I finally saw someone writing about the Red Silk Army. I lost interest after reading the introduction. Time travel should be written as reasonably as possible, not directly obscene.

If you are not convinced by anything else, read the last four chapters. Frieza's family, directly Buu, Thanos, King Daquan. Four chapters wrote a four-hundred-chapter story. Boss, this is a mess.

Dragon Ball, um... Anime World, The Strongest Disciple Kenichi ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)✧, Young and Dangerous... (ㅍ_ㅍ) Is making a show, Uh-huh.

I don't know. It was said around chapter 500 that the Kiritas had attacked. Loki was still there in chapter 530? ? ?

Returning the Light Envoy, I am embarrassed and cancerous

Or the strongest disciple? ? ? The strongest one is Klin, okay? ! Among the people of earth! ! It's like hitting an atomic bomb on an egg to seek death

The plot would be much better if there was no Red Satin Army. The Red Satin Army is too boring.