System: Saving Cannon Fodder

I won't say anything else. Just because of the name of the protagonist, I will accept your book first.

[A little suggestion for the author] Chapter 7 is a bit weird. Think about it, when most parents hear their children say that their classmates can defeat their opponents, their first reaction is to ignore it. Father Liu is a bit weird like that... And so is the housekeeper. It would be better not to write about the housekeeper's contempt. If the housekeeper does this, it will easily embarrass Liu Qiyun. As long as the housekeeper maintains superficial etiquette, writing too much can easily turn a seemingly interesting book into a poisonous one.

It's a super good movie about fast travel. I'm addicted to it. I only wrote a review after reading it. The heroine is really funny, and 138 is also very naughty. Two friends are quarreling with each other. There is no male protagonist at the moment. Please take advantage of the lack of books to get addicted.

Come and have a look at the female channel area. . . . . .

I only read a few chapters and didn't finish the first story because the heroine was so obsessed and occasionally a little witty. The key is that the storyline is really too immature for me? For example, when the heroine is not full-fledged and has less money and power than the female counterpart, she still blatantly provokes others, blocking a wave of hatred for the original heroine, and then she is forced to drop out of school because of her connections. As a result, the heroine still behaves like that when communicating with the principal. She scolds the principal in person without saying anything, and then directly tells the principal's facts to threaten him in front of his face, exm? ? You are still just a poor student from the countryside with no money or power, right? If you weren't the author's daughter, how easy would it be for someone to deal with you in a matter of minutes? The point is, when the principal heard that, he really didn't dare to move. She was indeed his daughter. I suspected that the author had lowered the intelligence of the supporting characters for his own daughter. Of course, the heroine's own IQ was not that high. In fact, everything else was fine. I can only say that everyone has their own preferences for carrots and greens. I personally don't like this kind of plot that basically has no IQ and gave up for the sake of fun and satisfaction. But maybe there are people who like this type, so I am just saying it as a reference.

It seems that the author is also a hypocritical reader. This familiar taste

... A lot of the settings are too similar to Ning Shu's story... Even the path and time of the protagonist Goldfinger's arrival are very similar... The stories in some worlds are also very similar...? ? ? Although it is normal for the quick travel series to crash easily, your collision was too clever and wonderful, right?

I initially thought that the reason why so few people read it was because I was just a new author, so I didn't have a fan base. Later I saw that other new authors were also flying at 6... I understand, I need to accumulate more knowledge! I have a feeling that I will take off immediately and reach the pinnacle of life~ ٩(ˊˋ*)و~

The world view of this novel is a bit like the world of Kequ Pi Pi Shu

I hate Feng Xun so much, I hope he gets his lunch box soon

The plane distribution building, come and claim your plane! ! ! First come first served✧(≖ ◡ ≖✿) There are also later ones (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ It's so unprincipled (*￣rǒ￣) to pick your nose

The story has a tight rhythm and the writing is not trivial. It is still readable. However, the heroine sometimes speaks too meanly and too wildly. Some readers may not be able to accept it. However, the whole book is still very good. There are no exaggerated golden fingers or greasy emotional entanglements. It is still very enjoyable to read.

The content is very cheerful. Although there are some shortcomings in the writing, it is a refreshing article that is very enjoyable to read.

What does the heroine think about the third world? You know clearly that the other person is a pervert, but you still ran over and said I saw you kill someone, and then you were shot and escaped. There is no logic in what you did...

Let me tell you something secretly, ⁄(⁄⁄•⁄ω⁄•⁄⁄)⁄ In fact, the author doesn't remember the plot clearly yet, and there are frequent gaps~

Um, the beginning is really not good, the logic does not make sense, the golden fingers are randomly given, and the sense of déjà vu that my mother slapped on the head and forced it on is really speechless╯╰

The heroine has a strong mouth, but there is no male protagonist in the story. I feel that the first part is quite interesting, but the second part of the plot is a bit rushed. There are also more typos... The author ran away to play a game

I always feel awkward. The heroine seems to be either being plotted or being plotted in every world. Plan

Is there any little cutie who can tell me which story is non-toxic? . I felt a little bit addicted after reading the first two stories.

You are already a cultivator. You are still afraid of a little mortal. You are too timid. I read other Kuaishuan articles. Once the heroine is strong, she will no longer be timid. She will not be afraid of anyone. Even in the modern plane, she can ascend as she pleases during the day. Use magic to punish evil people. The heroine of this book is timid. She is really not worthy of being a heroine.

After reading a few stories, I realized it was something I had read before. Hey hey hey

I can't stand it anymore. Who is this heroine? ? ? ? ? Slipping away

I was scared away by the noob heroine and the supporting character who forcibly subdued me. Come on, everyone.

Later this system will become the boss under the heroine 1

I opened it and watched it several times but still can't stand it.

The most slutty heroine I have ever seen, she has no self-awareness at all. The first story: kidnapped The second story: poisoned, threatened with force The third story: shot What they have in common: No ability, but likes to confront powerful protagonists or villains directly, IQ 110?

There are only three words to describe the heroine:

The original gay story was okay at the beginning, but then it became a mess.

In the story of Rebirth 60, why did you open a store? It seems that you couldn't do business at that time. It was too arrogant, right?

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