Dawdling Around in the Marvel World

After reading dozens of chapters, the more I read, the more boring it became. I can't find that kind of g-spot... Maybe I'm not suitable for reading this type of book. I wish you all a happy viewing!

Does it look like the latest content is coming to an end? I hope the author doesn't finish it. After the main universe is over, can we go to the parallel world? You can check out comics, Spider-Man, X-Men, and Deadpool.

I had a mental illness and just watched 16 episodes. The more I watch, the more boring it becomes. The male protagonist is a psychopath. What is written is all nonsense. There is no positive energy at all, only negative emotions. I spent so much money and I don't know where it went. Anyway, it was just nonsense. There is no main plot. It's all about the dark and dirty interior of the male protagonist. It's all scrap. Don't even write about any of the serious things the male protagonist does.

So why is there no chapter eleven?

It is rare to see this kind of book. The logic and reasoning are realistic. The key is that the character description is also three-dimensional. It is not like many time-travel novels where the writing is not strong enough. It can only use the readers' inherent impressions as materials to shape the characters. Finally, the layout of this book is not limited to the earth. All in all, it can be called a masterpiece of this kind. In terms of plot arrangement, Guan Jian believes that one of the disadvantages of online novels, which are updated novels, is that readers' reading rhythm is very fragmented, so this makes online articles a more test of the author's control of the plot, that is, how to bring readers who have not read it for a day or two into the plot within a few hundred words. Especially for authors who update once or twice a day, the buffer space given to them is more limited. I personally think this may be something that can be considered. This paragraph of remarks is just my humble opinion based on reading online articles for several years. If there is anything crude, I hope you can enlighten me. As for the plot arrangement of this book, I believe that as long as it is not limited by Marvel's inherent plot and can construct a relatively smooth narrative, it can be readable in this type of online novel. With the above-mentioned structure, this book breaks through the limitations of the plot and expands the space that needs to be filled with one's own meaning. Here, there can also be such a plot, which already reflects a certain degree of writing power. I have been reading for several years, but I have never written such a long article. Today's temporary excitement is due to the influence of readers who have written long book reviews before. I hope that Yu Zhuo's article will be helpful to the author.

Several Marvel books are like this. Otherwise, you should hire Mindy to cause trouble everywhere and clean your butt. If you are a real idiot, you should drive a supercar, live in a villa, play with women, and stay away from the poor and underworld.

If you survive the early stage, I personally like this book very much. From about the first time I arrived in Asgard, the story became very exciting, and the character of the protagonist became very likable. He no longer just had to muddle along, and he did not rely on knowing the plot to be a false prophet to gain profits, but he was very active in exploring the magic. The limit of the law, or one's own limit. After going to the universe, I no longer care about petty profits on the earth. I don't care about Hydra ruling the world. My vision is completely different. It's really great to focus on your own limit. I think this is what Superman should look like!!! After being transformed by the Flame Lord Surtur, the protagonist breaks away from the image of a middle-aged greasy uncle and becomes a beloved super human. He has muscles, a handsome appearance, and powerful functions. He uses the effects of his powers to make a fortune in the universe. He breaks away from the image of poverty. In the interstellar adventure, he obtains a semi-biological spaceship that can evolve infinitely. He shows off his high-tech rivalry with Iron Man. The writing here is superb!! What I like most is that the protagonist of this book has found the direction of development. The protagonist begins to formally learn magic from Asgard. Although he cannot directly use magic, recite spells and cast spells due to lack of divine power or mismatched souls, after careful research and thinking, he came up with an alternative method of inscribing magic on the blood-sucking vines and indirectly using magic from the rune hammer of Thor, which is very smart and creative!! The protagonist adventures, trades, fights, and learns in various places. After integrating the runes of Asgard, the magic runes of the light elves, and the magic circle of Karma Taj, he engraves it on the branches of the highly malleable metal vampiric vine after absorbing vibranium. Then he uses the BUG-level transformation method of the reality gem to directly enchant the researched three-in-one magic circle on the branches of the vampiric vine. Finally, he has the ability to quickly develop and use magic freely. The magic that has been developed and engraved on the soul of the protagonist currently includes flight, invisibility, astral projection (soul unsheathing), super magic shield, cool mirror space, and opening the door to dimensions. It is completely different from the early days of Diaosi who only used a vine whip to whip people. I look forward to seeing the protagonist develop more and more cool magic!! If I want to say that the protagonist is missing something now, I think he is missing a handsome uniform, or cool equipment. Even the clothes of the villain Loki in the movie are very handsome (not counting the helmet). Captain America has changed from a ridiculous tight suit at the beginning to an incredibly handsome uniform. The protagonist... The author did not describe too much, maybe he is still wearing Tang It's too funny to dress him up. I hope he can be equipped with an interstellar windbreaker or something, as well as equipment. Think about the equipment of the Supreme Mage, the Eye of Agamotto, the Orb of Agamotto, the Staff of Watoomb, the Floating Cloak, and the Book of Knowledge. The protagonist seems to only have a nanoelectronic glasses so far, so shabby!!

Thank you all book friends for your understanding. I'm back. I only wrote half a chapter after finishing my work today, so I'll reply and update from tomorrow. At that time, my father suffered a cerebral hemorrhage of 50ml and was about to have a cerebral herniation. It can be said that he had already stepped into the door of death. While waiting outside the operating room, I felt chills all over and began to pray for mercy from the gods in the sky, just for a glimmer of hope. A miracle happened, My father's surgery went smoothly and he is recovering day by day. His limbs are flexible and he can speak clearly. Apart from his memory loss, he is almost the same as an ordinary elderly person. After a month of hard work, I lost more than ten pounds, but at this moment, my heart was filled with gratitude! I love writing and will keep writing until the moment I die...

A great book and a masterpiece. The protagonist does not seem to be a 35-year-old, but rather a thirteen-and-a-half-year-old. It is recommended to start reading after chapter 10,000. The author is a late-stage player.

I just read the beginning and had no desire to continue reading. In fact, the easiest way for friends who are writing books is to involve yourself in what you have written and see if it makes sense. This protagonist didn't feel like someone in his 30s at all. He had no opinion and was very much like a housewife. It doesn't feel like spending 800,000 yuan to buy a plant

Today's novels basically follow the same routine. In the early stage, they strive to maintain the character of a saint. If a beautiful woman is brought to bed, they will not go to bed, just to maintain the ambiguity. In the middle and late stages, it transforms directly, just like a bull in the countryside smelling a cow in heat. There is that kind of lottery system. No matter how you draw at ordinary times, it is useless. When you encounter difficulties, you will draw whatever you want. In ancient times, if you were from a poor family, there would be a little Y-head who would never leave you, and you would be as beautiful as a fairy when you grow up. When you start a small business, you are bound to meet noble people. They all vomited.

Poison Point 1: Super powers are strengthened and upgraded, and the body is not as good as ordinary people. The second poisonous point is that being a good person in the Marvel world does not mean that you don't know how the protagonist died.

I saw Chapter 26. I had read a little bit of this book before, but I don't know why I deleted it. Now I know that Chapter 26 excuses the gangsters. I was also drunk. Gangsters with a little bottom line should not die. The mother of a gangster is very sad to know that her child is dead and will be left alone and helpless, which is very pitiful. The author is either stupid or bad when he writes this, but I guess he is both stupid and bad.

Most Marvel fans start Iron Man and S. H. I. E. L. D. Coulson is simply the standard, just like connecting dots. I don't think it's a lack of creativity, but just carelessness. After all, I wrote so many words, Is Iron Man so easy to get in touch with? So what if the God's perspective is turned on? Doesn't the fate of Killian (Extremis Virus) show what kind of person Iron Man is? As an arms giant, he must have been rescued many times since childhood, right? As an arms merchant, is he a kind person? Don't forget what kind of business they are in. It is impossible to be friends without any chain of interests. Just look at how many real friends Iron Man has. You will know that if you go to the arms dealer at the beginning, you will have the halo of the protagonist to control you in minutes. After all, billionaires are their main business. Many authors write that the protagonist kills a few gangsters and then recruits S. H. I. E. L. D., Which is great. How many people die in the United States every year? What is S. H. I. E. L. D.'S organization? Will you check them one by one? As long as the only ones looking for you are the police, will Coulson be a good person as a senior agent? Just look at Thor II's attitude toward Jane and you'll know what SHIELD is like. Iron Man and SHIELD may sacrifice themselves for the sake of most ordinary people, but if a few people die, there will be no disturbance in their hearts.

On the surface, it's just a mess, but in reality it's a bit of a nuisance and meddlesome. In addition, there are a lot of inner monologues, and there are also useless characters in their thirties who are frivolous and panic at the smallest things. Finally, new characters appear too frequently and are dizzying. The writing technique is jumpy, and there is basically no story to speak of.

I originally wanted to read a humorous Marvel, but instead it turned out to be a white-knuckle novel. I knew what was coming in the future, but instead of working hard to become stronger, I just pretended to be cute all the time. Is this what a normal person can do? Taking free food as a joke is also a sign of brainworm flow!

The pig's feet are really useless and look boring.

After reading Chapter 25, I was persuaded to quit without even seeing VIP. The protagonist can't be called a waste, I can only say that he has no IQ. The plot is too stiff to add up, which is quite uncomfortable to watch.

If you write such a disgusting protagonist, wouldn't you be seeking your own death? And the logic is too confusing, I can't stand it 😰😰😰😰

But I found that I couldn't find any cool points, so I really had no interest in subscribing. So, I just want to ask readers who know this book, can you tell me where the cool points are? I'm quite curious. Why did I read the free chapters of this book seriously? Out of curiosity, I wanted to find out what's interesting about it? What's the interesting thing about it that makes people subscribe? I'm not complaining, I'm just asking for reasonable advice!

What's so good about it? I feel like the main character is pretty useless.

The layout of this book is good, and its perspective is on the cosmic level. Unlike other Marvel novels, which always focus on the earth and human beings, it has no meaning of the Marvel universe. In addition, the protagonist has his own independent plot. Many authors have misunderstood the meaning of being loyal to the original work, and confused being loyal to the original work with copying the plot. Being loyal to the original work means being loyal to its concepts and spirit, as well as its creative ideas, rather than sticking to the plot development of the film and television drama. In addition, I think what makes this book pleasing to the eye is that the protagonist does not act like a fool and competes with several popular heroic characters in Marvel every day. The proportion of the main character, supporting roles and the proportion of the supporting roles of the large group of characters are relatively balanced, which can reflect the status of the male protagonist as the protagonist of this book. --Recommended by the official @hao "The Thirty-Six Strategies of the Great Shuhuang" Come to us for the Shuhuang!!

Why do so many people comment that this book is very good, but the more I read, the more incoherent it becomes.

What's so good about the book? The protagonist keeps saying to be himself, but what he does is very helpless. He is a little tentacle monster with less than 10 points of combat power, and he does not know whether to live or die in the Marvel universe. Movies are movies, and novels are novels. Writing novels must be true, and the result is a butterfly effect. In this case, if you don't improve your own strength, don't make money, and don't plan, it doesn't take a small citizen to explain the author's mental retardation. I am also a small citizen. According to reality, I am a leek and a sheep. But I also have my own ideas,

The writing is messy and incoherent, rambling here and there.

One of my favorite Marvel books...

The best Marvel fanfic, the best DC fanfic "DC Knights"

After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist was okay at the beginning, but later on the protagonist used five swear words, impulsive, irritable, and irritable. If something doesn't go his way, he'll yell profanities. If something goes his way, he'll laugh exaggeratedly. Everyone who might be scolding someone one second and laughing the next can hear it.

It's better not to be a heroine. These days, after you choose a heroine, people will immediately resent you if you sleep with someone else. If you don't, some people will say that you are pretending, or that you are not a man enough. If you open a harem, more people will scold you, so now there are more and more monk novels. The protagonist is a middle-aged greasy uncle. Many people in this age group are eager to get promoted and get rich, and they will kill their wives every day.

The main character who works as a nanny for Shit Dako is very boring.