I Open a Ninja School in Marvel

Looking at Chapter 71, there is only one disciple, the academy is not yet in operation, and the plot of Iron Man 1 is not even halfway through. It's a show of coquettish words, all kinds of skin, all kinds of water, the plot is loose, and the reading experience is poor. The main protagonist has never made a serious move until now. I will insist on reading the remaining chapters and comment again. If it is too bad, I will see you again.

After reading a lot of Marvel fan fiction, I found that most of them are eunuchs. The reason is simply that I can't write anymore. The reason why I can't write anymore is that many novels have no main line, which means that the protagonist's actions have no purpose. Either purely follow the plot, or start a harem. Once the plot is over or the beauties are collected, I won't know what to write anymore and will eventually stop updating. Therefore, I hope the author can think carefully about the protagonist's purpose, so that the plot will not continue in the future. For example, in this book, what is the purpose of the protagonist opening a ninja school, and what are the future prospects for those who learn ninjutsu? You can't just learn it and enjoy it... The above is just my personal opinion. I hope the author can pay attention to it.

After reading the first chapter, leave. There is nothing wrong with the book. It is a decent text about the time travel system. First of all, congratulations on the addition of another member of the Qidian Orphanage. In the later stage of Naruto's combat power, he can still hang out in the Marvel Cinematic Universe. The combat power is comparable, but for opening a school, I want to write it well. It's a bit difficult, and it's easy to involve various things. Although books with good grades like Druid in Marvel also have schools, others still open schools for ordinary people. If the author hadn't died early because of his greatness, the multi-player theme is far less easy to describe than the single-player grocery store. The most important point is that I really can't afford to wait for a book that only has more than 150 chapters in half a year.

I haven't read the back part yet, but when I saw the setting in Chapter 2 (default loyalty), I wanted to run away. Let's take a look at the back part. This setting really ruins everything. . . . .

After reading five chapters, it's too cool and too slow to warm up!

I have been looking for it for almost a month, but it is rare to find a good one. The recent novels are terrible, and there are not many recommended books that I like. Author, keep at it, don't stop, it's pretty good like this. The curtain has just begun.

There are more than 90 chapters, and the academy hasn't officially started yet. Brother, you are too good at word count. I basically skipped through it.

So pretty! Chased! Love it! Love it (⑉°з°)-♡

I will give you three votes every day. . .

One thousand comments plus one update, recommendation votes reach 100, 500, 1000, 2000, 3000... Until 10,000. Cat's Pursuit only has 1w chapter recommendation votes. I hope you guys will support me!

I'm a mercenary and I like smoking.

Want to buy half of New York with the finances copied from the lair of a Middle Eastern terrorist? Why don't you go to heaven? Do you know how big New York is? Moreover, the real estate tax in the United States is different from that in China. This alone will kill you.

After reading Chapter 6, I couldn't stand this funny main character. An ordinary person has some power, shouldn't he be cautious when entering a dungeon? In front of Sasuke, he was like a street kid.

How can I put it this way? This book is neither a poisonous weed nor a forage. The plot is a bit awkward and the communication between people is very exaggerated. As an agent, as someone who has been a mercenary since childhood, and as a thief of a large company and an inventor, my IQ is not online. The number may be higher, and the protagonist has inherited memories and emotions, but he is a bit dissolute about the code of conduct of mercenaries, and mercenaries who have grown up should at least be cautious about gun battles, and have a good male supporting role in time.

I have been reading the paid chapters, and they are not exciting or exciting at all. They are all just low word count, more than a hundred chapters. Brother author, you didn't realize that you haven't even written a battle plot. Are you planning to write a love novel?

In fact, when I saw the Ninja School, I lost the desire to continue watching it. Maybe I am the kind of nationalist. You can say that I am narrow-minded and anything. I really don't like the Japanese. I don't know why I want to write it out. Maybe this is just a human being. Maybe I am a special person, so I just want to express these thoughts and write them down.

Overall, the writing is very good, but the most interesting part of the drama for me is that the protagonist has the ability to make money, but he is just a mercenary. Where does he get so much money? The entire mercenary group doesn't have that much, right? It bought half of New York. People with so much money still need to be mercenaries. Don't talk to me about black money. They can even do things like killing people with weapons. How can they launder some black money? Why be a mercenary? Isn't it that most retired soldiers cannot find suitable jobs and have no money? Excluding the few who like war and killing people, how much does a mercenary make per order? Hundreds of thousands of dollars or millions of dollars, let alone kidnapping billionaires for ransom, there are so many billionaires to kidnap for you. If they are kidnapped so easily, then the rich people will have to hide and not show up every day. What other famous paintings and gems are there? If there are too many gems, they will become less valuable. How many famous paintings are there? While the length of the article is not long, I suggest the author change it. Tens of millions of dollars at best is already a lot. If you think there is something wrong with what I said, you can explain it to me.

There were too many poisonous points and I couldn't stand it, so I withdrew.

,, The author takes it for granted. There is no book that combines Naruto and Marvel, but the power system is easy to collapse if it is not well written. It is a book that depends on the setting. As long as the character design and skills are slightly buggy, adding this theme will be infinitely amplified by the readers when reading, not to mention the imagination and sense of substitution. Alas.

Isn't it disgusting? A bus is described with various charms

Are you interested in playing silly protagonists these days? Tired of good intentions! I want to see a normal protagonist, not a protagonist who shows off his IQ

I want to advise you to stick to it, but it seems a little inhumane.

Naruto's combat prowess isn't ranked high in Marvel movies, right?

I've read a few chapters I'm really angry about being gay (ー_ー)!!

Those who came in based on the title and want to read about the academy should leave. The school is mentioned in no more than five chapters in this book. There are two apprentices. It is just an ordinary time travel Marvel article.

What does the poor man next door's two thousand years have to do with you?

Interesting. Already collected. Waiting for fattening.

The votes have been cast, let's fatten up and start slaughtering 😁

There is a bug in Chapter 4. The one you separated into a physical entity is a shadow clone. Please correct it! ! !

Why is this happening! I like this subject matter, but there are two things that really make me unable to stand it! The shadow clone was killed by a headshot and the protagonist felt nothing! The Three Body Technique includes the Shadow Clone Technique! Oh My God…