Immortal

By the way, why was the last book so bad?

After a long period of preparation, the new book is released today. I hope you will support me and give me more recommendation votes 😳!

The second volume is about to begin. Is there any book friends who want to appear? Name + gender + villain! Example: Long Aotian+Male+Villain

Some comments were inexplicably deleted by the system, and I was helpless!

When I wrote the introduction, I didn't expect that Magic Forbidden 3 would be able to survive.

I finished reading the update in one go, sighing in relief, feeling happy.

An interesting book, I have been following it

The author is very creative🙂 It can be seen that some of the description styles later imitate Xiaolong's books 😊 Let me give you my own opinion. I think the idea of the protagonist seeking death in your novel is a good one. The protagonist wants to commit suicide because of his strength. The character of such a protagonist should be easy to hate, even a little violent. The protagonist of your novel is a bit too gentle😰 Also, your main plot is about the main character seeking death because of his strength, but he ends up running away to school, always doing strange things for no reason, and even getting involved in some conspiracy. It feels like it has lost the focus and is not enjoyable to watch.

The book-chasing veterans said, "Wow, ha, ha, ha!"

Why so much criticism? ? ?

Why don't you speak in the group? Author. .

What is this written? It's so beautiful😂

There are so few people. Does the author have ten orders?

I don't like this tone, it's a bit like a female video

Chapter two. . . . . .

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is a bit lacking.

The front is okay and fresh, but the back is really

It's hard to write about this kind of subject, because it's hard to write about the inner activities of an immortal who has lived for so long. If you can't write that kind of wisdom and city, I'm sorry for your introduction.

The subject matter is really good, but it is too difficult to grasp and can easily turn into poison.

When I saw that, I thought it was the finale. Is Beiye really dead?

, This book is okay, but you don't have many opportunities to show up, otherwise someone should read it.

In fact, the existence of superpowers in China was called supernatural powers in history.

When I saw Li Qiye, I couldn't help but give him a like

The author is, you see, I probably haven't subscribed recently. I have something to do recently, so I'll wait until after school starts, and then I'll subscribe again, but I will still vote every day. Well, that's it.

Or stand-alone emmmmm, no, is there any recommendation, otherwise I won't show up?

I'll try my best to give you both the recommendation ticket and the monthly pass.