My Son Is a Boss in the Demon World

The writing is quite good, but the beginning is a bit dull, not very exciting, and it can't attract people in a short time. But overall, the rhythm of the plot is not bad. If you can stabilize it and stick to it, the plot will not collapse, and the word count will increase. I will give you a recommendation, and the results should gradually increase. Come on.

Wow, the author wrote it very well. It's just... What the hell is it that you write a light-hearted and humorous article in a fantasy style?

I haven't read it yet. Just leave a comment and take a look.

Hey hey hey, I'm the third one.

Um... I didn't expect to get a reply... I've been observing the author's works. According to the information compiled so far: that child is a bad boy, and the world is about to be in chaos... The protagonist will always be a loser (no matter who he is compared with)... The plot is too cliché to pretend to be slap in the face... There are many bad people in this world... This child is very well-behaved (not the bad boy the author thinks of, that is to say... The author wrote wrongly.)... The author is probably a novice (it may be the first time to write a novel)... Shouldn't raising children be done at sunrise and sunset, and seek stability in everything? 🙂

How can I put it this way? The author's writing is very good, and the plot is solid and relevant, which is in line with the genre I like. The poor performance is not the author's fault. It can only be said that the current world is like this, and too few people are willing to watch this style.

Write another extra story and increase the word count to one million words~🤭

I came back by chance and saw that the author had finished it. The plot is generally smooth, but it lacks bumps and twists, and the twists are a bit old-fashioned qwq. It lacks motivation in the early stage and is not suitable for a web novel. It will become more and more weak as things are delayed in the later stages. Generally speaking, I was unhappy in the early stage and even more unhappy in the later stage. The author makes a common mistake and puts his main plot at the back, well, that is the so-called fun part at the back. It's hard to imagine how the author survived. I hope the second book can pay attention to this😁.

Looking for some supporting roles. These sidekicks are some of the more important characters in the book, especially after they are upgraded in the later stages, such as various demon kings, fairy kings, etc., And some pure sidekicks such as He Ranran's friends, Zhang Chao's chance, etc. If you have any good names, you can leave them in the comment area or open a separate post to leave a message. This chapter says it is also possible. I will try to use them when I see them. Thank you all for your support. I will keep going and keep going. After all, my story is not finished yet. Thank you all, (●´З｀●).

Come on, author, the plot is solid. I'm optimistic about you

Take it, this name is strong! Writing a book is so tiring that I feel depressed!

The so-called raising children means that when you are born a son, you raise him and he becomes a daughter.

It's a very interesting story. It's good if there's no jump at the beginning of a new book. Many books have jumps at the beginning and it's useless no matter how well written they are later. . .

Wait... Didn't I send a message yesterday to encourage the author? Why are you missing today?

Please tell me why some personal homepages are not visible?

The author secretly tells you a way to increase popularity... You go and write some stories in the works promoted by Qidian... And then place some advertisements. Copy and paste in order, try not to affect the order, and then you can increase the popularity.

The author will dress up as a woman in the group after writing 500 chapters